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OAROW are solitary POKéMON
that are often helpful to
those who get lost. They
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can carry POKéMON as
heavy as 750 lbs, and are
frequently gentle.

I reworded part of Oarow's dex to make it sound less awkward. It still says the same thing, though.

CRUSAIL are large and
powerful POKéMON that
travel wherever they please.
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They won't often give rides,
unless they are given a
treat or the victim is in danger.

"Cruise" seemed redundant since Crusail's name already contains that word. Other options for "travel" would include "go" and "drift".

Generally, when a Pokémon has features that look like man-made objects, they are incorporated in such a way that they look like natural parts of the Pokémon's body; this isn't the case with Oarow, which clearly has a mast and flag on its body, and Cruisail, which has a door and a flag with the Pokéball insignia on it. I suggest you re-draw these to make them look more organic (and remove the Pokéball insignia), or change their dex info to state that they are man-made Pokémon created for transport. Oarow's big, cute, glossy eyes also don't seem to fit very well with the concept of the Pokémon, but that's up to you.