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Yay, reviewing time.

Okay, these ideas are good, but why is it Ground-type? It should be a Normal-type, even though it has Ground-type moves. The ability Overgrow doesn't have anything to do with expanding your entire body, but it's an ability for Grass-type starters. May I suggest Huge Power in place of it?

As for the dexes. They are too long. I revised them for you.

A long time ago, a chick overate
a big bucket of chicken feed, and
it began to grow larger, until it
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became the POKMON, CHICHUB. It is
a shy creature and will run away,
but it's size makes it difficult.

CHIANT may not be as timid as CHI-
CHUB. This POKMON is generally
used as alarm clocks for farmers.
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In the wild, they are usually seen
in a giant flock. They will unexp-
ectedly attack without hesitation.

Why does it learn Shadow Ball and Zap Cannon? They don't really fit with this Pokmon's environment, seeing as how it is a chicken. And Fly? I don't see how an overweight chicken can "fly." But if it somehow does, it should be learned by an HM, not by leveling.

I'm done.

(Oh, and that sprite in your sig... Did you edit that sprite of Niklis? _)