Reason for rejection:
This suggestion was very complete. However, the mutation aspect of this Pokémon is not something we like. The typing also strays too far from Torkoal. We believe that this evolution is not 'natural' enough, but it's more like a mutation.
Name: Tortoismog (Tortoise + Smog)
Classification: Smokestack Pokmon
Type: Poison/Wind
Measurements: 4' 08", 601 lbs.
Description: Colors are an inversion of Torkoal's--its body is black, and its shell a deep red. It has deep, sinister red eyes that usually are open only a small amount more than Torkoal's. On its shell are pipes that stick out of the places where the holes in Torkoal's shell were---these are its smokestacks.
Dex Data:
TORTOISMOG mutated from a TORKOAL
egg that hatched in a derelict
factory's waste disposal plant. It
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uses the smokestacks on its shell
to expel toxic gases from its body.
It whistles while it does so.
Evolution: Torkoal (trade with Poison Barb)>>> Tortoismog
Ability: Battle Armor: Blocks critical hits.
Level/Move:
B: Smog
B: Rapid Spin
6: Ember
11: Rapid Spin
15: Poison Gas
19: Huff 'N' Puff
21: Hydrogen Gun
27: Fire Spin
30: Sludge Bomb
33: Sonic Wind
38: Flamethrower
42: Iron Defense
47: Fire Blast
51: Toxic
56: Hurricane
EGG: Body Slam
EGG: Rust
EGG: Scald
EGG: Iron Casting
Base Stats:
HP: 90
Attack: 105
Defense: 170
Spec. Attack: 105
Spec. Defense: 100
Speed: 60
This suggestion was very complete. However, the mutation aspect of this Pokémon is not something we like. The typing also strays too far from Torkoal. We believe that this evolution is not 'natural' enough, but it's more like a mutation.
Name: Tortoismog (Tortoise + Smog)
Classification: Smokestack Pokmon
Type: Poison/Wind
Measurements: 4' 08", 601 lbs.
Description: Colors are an inversion of Torkoal's--its body is black, and its shell a deep red. It has deep, sinister red eyes that usually are open only a small amount more than Torkoal's. On its shell are pipes that stick out of the places where the holes in Torkoal's shell were---these are its smokestacks.
Dex Data:
TORTOISMOG mutated from a TORKOAL
egg that hatched in a derelict
factory's waste disposal plant. It
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uses the smokestacks on its shell
to expel toxic gases from its body.
It whistles while it does so.
Evolution: Torkoal (trade with Poison Barb)>>> Tortoismog
Ability: Battle Armor: Blocks critical hits.
Level/Move:
B: Smog
B: Rapid Spin
6: Ember
11: Rapid Spin
15: Poison Gas
19: Huff 'N' Puff
21: Hydrogen Gun
27: Fire Spin
30: Sludge Bomb
33: Sonic Wind
38: Flamethrower
42: Iron Defense
47: Fire Blast
51: Toxic
56: Hurricane
EGG: Body Slam
EGG: Rust
EGG: Scald
EGG: Iron Casting
Base Stats:
HP: 90
Attack: 105
Defense: 170
Spec. Attack: 105
Spec. Defense: 100
Speed: 60
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