Reason for rejection:
Bernart is a great name and the idea itself works. However, the idea is not fleshed out enough. It is too generic to meet the high quality standards of a relative of a Nintendo Pokémon. The new item and move are not that good.
The two Doroslien evolutions are workable, but we, along with the original suggestor, think the Grayster line is better off if it stays a two-stage line.
Bernart (Bernard+Art)
Species: Paint Master
Type:normal/magic
Ht: 4'07
Wt:150 lbs.
Evolves from Smeargle w/PaintBrush
Description:
Right now, I don't have a pic but I will post one soon.
It has the same color as Smearsle but darker maybe. It stands on 2 legs. All of it's limbs are bulkier or thicker than Smeargle's. It's head is that of a bernard's but it still has the same eye's but more serious looking. It still has the Artist cap. It's ears are longer and also is it's body. It has a cape made of canvas so that it can draw on. On it's forearms, it has 2 bands. On it's legs it has just one band. On it's tail, it has two. It's tail ends like a paintbrush just like smeargle but it changes different colors at Bernart's will. This way it can paint more beautiful pictures.
Bernart uses it's power to bring it's painting
alive to help others in need. Because of this,
Bernart wear sheets of canvas as a cape
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because of it's hero-like status. By chan-
ging the color of their tailtips, they can
create beautiful works of art.
Pic:
Attack:
*Animate
Sketch-21
Bibliomancy-26
Sketch-31
Magic Circle-36
Sketch-41
Summon-46
Sketch-51
I know the dex needs some working on.....
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Xenith (Zenith)
Species: Invader
Type: Psychic/Dark
HT:6'4
WT:101 lbs
Evolves from Doroclien with low happiness while holding the Dark Stone
Pic:
Attacks:
Agility-36
Shadow Ball-41
*Invade-47
Psychic-52
Mirror Coat-58
Destiny Bond-63
Meteor Mash-69
Because they have been mistreated by
others, they seek revenge by invading
peoples homes and causing havoc.
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It is said that if a person is seen by
a Xenith, it is bad luck. Alien invaders
are inspired by this creature.
*Paintbrush
A magical item that when held, randomly changes the type of the holder's attack. For instance, if the user uses blizzard, instead of the attack being an ice type attack, it might be bug or fire types.
*Animate
Type: magic
Acc: 100%
PP: 5
Damage:---
Effect: Draws a picture and brings it to life to battle foe.
*Scince this won't be approved until DP and DP is on DS, I was thinking what if the player draws a picture on the touch screen and the picture battles with Bernart in a 2 on 2 battle or 2 on 1 battle?
Invade
Type: dark
PP: 20
Damage: 80
Acc: 100%
Effect: Invade's through the enemies defenses and delivers a direct hit.(critical hit) This attack is not affected by resistance or weakness.
Bernart is a great name and the idea itself works. However, the idea is not fleshed out enough. It is too generic to meet the high quality standards of a relative of a Nintendo Pokémon. The new item and move are not that good.
The two Doroslien evolutions are workable, but we, along with the original suggestor, think the Grayster line is better off if it stays a two-stage line.
Bernart (Bernard+Art)
Species: Paint Master
Type:normal/magic
Ht: 4'07
Wt:150 lbs.
Evolves from Smeargle w/PaintBrush
Description:
Right now, I don't have a pic but I will post one soon.
It has the same color as Smearsle but darker maybe. It stands on 2 legs. All of it's limbs are bulkier or thicker than Smeargle's. It's head is that of a bernard's but it still has the same eye's but more serious looking. It still has the Artist cap. It's ears are longer and also is it's body. It has a cape made of canvas so that it can draw on. On it's forearms, it has 2 bands. On it's legs it has just one band. On it's tail, it has two. It's tail ends like a paintbrush just like smeargle but it changes different colors at Bernart's will. This way it can paint more beautiful pictures.
Bernart uses it's power to bring it's painting
alive to help others in need. Because of this,
Bernart wear sheets of canvas as a cape
-----------------------------------------
because of it's hero-like status. By chan-
ging the color of their tailtips, they can
create beautiful works of art.
Pic:
Attack:
*Animate
Sketch-21
Bibliomancy-26
Sketch-31
Magic Circle-36
Sketch-41
Summon-46
Sketch-51
I know the dex needs some working on.....
"> Xenith (Zenith)
Species: Invader
Type: Psychic/Dark
HT:6'4
WT:101 lbs
Evolves from Doroclien with low happiness while holding the Dark Stone
Pic:
Attacks:
Agility-36
Shadow Ball-41
*Invade-47
Psychic-52
Mirror Coat-58
Destiny Bond-63
Meteor Mash-69
Because they have been mistreated by
others, they seek revenge by invading
peoples homes and causing havoc.
-----------------------------------
It is said that if a person is seen by
a Xenith, it is bad luck. Alien invaders
are inspired by this creature.
*Paintbrush
A magical item that when held, randomly changes the type of the holder's attack. For instance, if the user uses blizzard, instead of the attack being an ice type attack, it might be bug or fire types.
*Animate
Type: magic
Acc: 100%
PP: 5
Damage:---
Effect: Draws a picture and brings it to life to battle foe.
*Scince this won't be approved until DP and DP is on DS, I was thinking what if the player draws a picture on the touch screen and the picture battles with Bernart in a 2 on 2 battle or 2 on 1 battle?
Invade
Type: dark
PP: 20
Damage: 80
Acc: 100%
Effect: Invade's through the enemies defenses and delivers a direct hit.(critical hit) This attack is not affected by resistance or weakness.
