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Hello! Welcome to the Pokmon Factory. Enjoy your stay.

As for your suggestion...well, it could work. I trust you read the Read These First!! forum before you started suggesting, am I right? If so, good.

There are a few problems with it, though. But that's where people come to help you. Allow me. ^_^

First off, GSC was LONG ago. We're doing RSE now, but soon, we'll evolve into DP. Here I have edited your dex to fit with today's standards.

TORMURAI is a POKMON that is only
seen during autumn. They are known
for their wise knowledge and their
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unusual shape. It is often
mistaken for a POKBALL, so people
have tried to collect the "item."

Note I came up with that last part, because your picture reminds me of a Pokball.

Second, your Pokmon will need an ability. I suggest Inner Focus and/or Keen Eye.

Thirdly, the name Overhead Strike is too long. Attacks have to be twelve characters or under. OVERHEADSLAM will work, though.

Fourth, your move is too powerful. Moves generally cannot raise stats by 5. 3 is the max, but even that is too much. I suggest raising Attack by 2 and Sp. Attack by 1.

And I forget what else.

Your suggestion has a lot of potential. Remember to practice, and just one day, you will see your very suggestion on the site!