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Poryhedron Re: Several Suggestions #-19 [-]

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Sep 11 02 9:06 PM

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/jaw drop/
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Rico actually brought his ideas to PF! It's a miracle! Okay, let's see.
Sadly, none of these are approvable at the moment. Practically all of your ideas need to have their dexes trimmed, as they go past the length limit of six 18-character lines. In addition, Steelacien can't be approved because there is currently a ban on new Water-types due to our having too many already. It'll have to wait until the ban is lifted.
Penczar's data is actually fine, but it shouldn't be approved until Pengyn can be as well.
Armordako probably is unapprovable because we already have a pokmon named Armordillo (the actual animal is an armadillo.) Armorduka follows.
Banunerang and Bananchuk I'm really not sure about as far as quality. As concepts they're quite strange.
You're going to have to justify Skench's type. Getting Normal-types to dual with anything is difficult; it calls for special circumstances like Girafarig's half-and-half nature or the inability of Flying to be Type 1. Why isn't Skench pure Poison-type?

I look forward to being able to approve a good chunk of these. If you need help modifying dexes, I can offer suggestions. I'd offer some now if I had the time.

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Kangaskhan Kommando Let's see.. #-18 [-]

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Here's a quick try at Pengyn, gtg so I can't justify any of the others...yet.

Although Flightless
it is a very adapt
swimmer and quite
-------------------
agile. If the ice
on it's tail melts
it will die.

Wonder Boy 87 Re: Let's see.. #-17 [-]

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So basically it's an aquatic, flightless, Vertebrata that has a Charmander-like tail? I'd like to see something a little more original.

Which flock do you follow?
this quiz was made by alanna

Kangaskhan Kommando Re: Several Suggestions #-16 [-]

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Why so aggresive? It was my very first idea after all. And when you simplify anything like that it's going to come out sounding stupid. Anyways, I'm working on a few more poke'dex entries for my other poke'mon.

KleptoKoon:

Despite its cute
looks this wily
pkmn steals often.
-----------------
When Enraged flame
erupts out of the
gems on its fists.

ElektaGeko:

It's entire body
surges with raw
energy that pours
----------------
out of it's eyes &
mouth. Handling
is not recommended

Skircuit:

It can fuel entire
cities with the
amount of
----------------
Electricity that
it creates in
three months.

Wattsalisk:

Despite it's great
mass, it can
generate enough
----------------
electricity to
propel itself
through the air.

More later. Btw Pory, the reason I made Skench partly normal is because the majority of Normal types seems to be common woodland creatures like pidgey, spearow, rattatta etc. More often creatures that live in the woods like Skench. If you don't think that's enough grounds for a normal type then feel free to change the type to pure poison.

Kangaskhan Kommando Re: Several Suggestions #-15 [-]

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Alright, here's the entry I liked the most for Skench from Culthulhu.

Its general odor
Is nowhere near
Its potential. In
------------------
concentrate, its
toxic stench can
KO most pokmon

And I can't believe I forgot Marpunchil! Well probably because I don't have her in my archives. So I'll make it up from scratch.

Name:Marpunchil
Root:MARsUpIaL/PUNCH
Type:Fighting
Classification:Kangaroo
Poke'dex:

Aggressive by
nature. It is
dangerous to
------------------
approach, because
of its powerful
kicks and punches

Description: A large Red Kangaroo with big red boxing gloves. However unlike a real kangaroo Marpunchil stands on it's haunches with it's back straight up right, not hunched over.
Footprint: A long Kangaroo Foot-print.
Evo:Nil
Attacks:
-Comet Punch
7 Rolling Kick
10 Jump Kick
15 HeadStrike
21 Quick Jab
32 Fire Punch
38 MegaPunch
41 Dynamicpunch

Elekid Bobby Re: Several Suggestions #-14 [-]

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Hey! I made a dex for Kleptocoon a while back. What ever happened to that?

Kangaskhan Kommando Re: Several Suggestions #-13 [-]

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No idea. It's probably in the OCC Chat for Selenica somewhere.

Culthulhu Re: Several Suggestions #-12 [-]

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I have it around here somewhere, though I do not think it was a full dex, I think it was just the image...at least thats all I ever saw, but I could be wrong.

The Kleptocoon dex image was made back when I had Nekorb as your manager and I was working with Hisu, this is all before PF fell on some really hard times...you might try giving Nekorb a qeustion or two about the image, as I have so far been unable to reach him.

Kangaskhan Kommando Re: Several Suggestions #-11 [-]

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Therein lies the problem. I don't have any clue how to contact im. Unless he's on the board I don't think I can.

Poryhedron Re: Several Suggestions #-10 [-]

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Sep 13 02 10:50 AM

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Hmm...
Although flightless it is a very adapt swimmer and quite ------------------ agile. If the ice on its tail melts, it will die.

The line length is 18, not 19. Your first line is a character too long. flightless would have to be hyphenated...or else the wording changed, something like:
Although it cannot fly, it is a very adept and agile ------------------ swimmer. It will die if the ice on its tail melts.

Kleptokoon's dex has the same problem, twice...
Despite its cute looks, this wily POKMON steals often. ------------------ When enraged, flame erupts out of the gems on its fists.

(For the sake of quality we never abbreviate POKMON in a dex entry.) A possible fix is to reword the first sentence:
Cute but wily, it will often try to steal things. When ------------------ enraged, flame erupts out of the gems on its fists.

Your dex for Elektageko has two different problems...
Its entire body surges with raw energy that pours ------------------ out of its eyes & mouth. Handling is not recommended

First, there is no ampersand in the Pokdex font. Second, we try to make dexes work grammatically. You'll need to make room for that final period. Here's a possible reworking:
Its entire body surges with raw energy that pours ------------------ from its eyes and mouth. Handle with extreme caution.

The dexes for Skircuit, Wattsilisk, Skench and Marpunchil work. Another thing I just now noticed, however, is that none of your ideas have height or weight. This is a bit of a problem. If you aren't sure what dimensions to give a pokmon, decide what other pokmon would be roughly the same size and check its listed dimensions (I can provide any you don't know.)

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Kangaskhan Kommando Re: Several Suggestions #-9 [-]

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Gah. Alright, just use the dexes you made. Also, seeing as how evolutions usually follow directly after a poke'mon, maybe I should flesh out Emperkoon before you accept Kleptokoon. As for the measurments...

Steelacien(Not sure if you wanted it's height or length):
Height:3'1"
Length:7'2"
Weight:163 lbs

Pengyn
Height:2'8"
Weight:57 lbs

PenCzar
Height:4'8"
Weight:131

KleptoKoon
Height:2'10"
Weight:45 lbs

Skench
Height:1'2"
Weight:20 lbs

ElektaGeko
Height:3'3"
Weight:63 lbs

Skircuit
Height:1'3
Length(head to toe):4'3"
Weight(woops 0^^):89 lbs

Wattsalisk
Height:7'2"
Weight:212 lbs

Marpunchil
Height:6'8"
Weight:168 lbs

Poryhedron Re: Several Suggestions #-8 [-]

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Sep 13 02 2:43 PM

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All righty then.

Pengyn approved as #PF114.
PenCzar approved as #PF115.
Skench approved as #PF116.
Marpunchil approved as #PF117.
Kleptokoon approvable; held back for Emperkoon.
Skircuit still unapprovable (no weight provided.)
Elektageko and Wattsalisk approvable; held back for Skircuit.

Kangaskhan Kommando Re: Several Suggestions #-7 [-]

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With a bit of tweaking (and a much better name) I decided to submit Emperkoon anyways.

Name:Firakoona
Root:FIRe/raccOON
Type:Fire/Dark
Classification:Angry
HT:4'10"
WT:102 lbs
Poke'dex:

Quick to Anger,
when it uses RAGE,
the fuse on it's
-------------------
tail bursts into
flames and it into
a fiery rampage.

Description:A larger kleptokoon minus the sac with thick powerful legs and arms and bright red eyes. A bright red ruby spine runs down it's back an creates flame in adition. An unlit fuse When Angered flame erupts from its Ruby spine and fist gems.
Evo(s):Nil
Attacks:
-Scratch
-Leer
-Ember
-Theif
-Rabies
-Bite
-Pay Day
-Rage
-Fire Punch
-Fire Wheel
48 Aggravated Burn
53 Flamethrower
59 Crunch
64 Slash

What I really didn't like about Emperkoon was the atroucious name, not to mention how hard it would be to fill it's classification of "emperor" with all the sneaky pre-evos.

Poryhedron Re: Several Suggestions #-6 [-]

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Hm. I thought Emperkoon wasn't that bad, but it's your decision.

Problem with the dex: when it says the fuse on its tail bursts into flames and it into a fiery rampage, I assume you mean it bursts into a fiery rampage, letting the previous verb carry over...but it really looks like a word is missing. I found an alternative; as always, you can accept this
or find a different way to solve the issue.
Quick to anger. When it uses RAGE, its tail fuse ------------------ bursts into flame, sending it into a fiery rampage.

One other thing; move lists are optional, so this could be approved anyway, but I've already said Aggravated Burn is too long...and Aggravtd Brn just looks bad. There's got to be a more workable name for that move...we don't yet have a Fire move called Scorch or Kindle or Incinerate or SearingFlame...there are plenty of possibilities.

Kangaskhan Kommando Re: Several Suggestions #-5 [-]

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Alright, I guess Scorch sounds the best. It implies a burn with it. And yes, as always the poke'dex looks perfect.

Poryhedron Re: Several Suggestions #-4 [-]

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Sep 13 02 7:35 PM

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All right. Kleptokoon approved as #PF119, Firakoona approved as #PF120.

Poryhedron Re: Several Suggestions #-3 [-]

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Sep 14 02 8:55 AM

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Just noticed you added weight for Skircuit...Elektageko & Co. approved as #PF121-3.

Elekid Bobby Sketches #-2 [-]

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Ok, I have several of the Sketches done and ready to scan. The lizards are done, I had to make some alterations to them to make them flow better and allow all of Wattilisk's appendages to fit. But, I'm sure you'll agree, they are all for the batter. I followed Kleptokoon's description this time. I have that and its evo. Steelacien isn't approved yet, but I drew one up anyway, just in case. I just remembered Skench, so I can do that one, too, and Marpunchil. I'm having a little trouble with the Penguins. Do you still want the char-esk tails with ice cubes? It just seems a little corny, and I can't tell if that discussion was confirmed. So, here's what I have in this batch:

Elektageko
Skircuit
Wattalisk
Kleptokoon
Firakoon
Steelacien
Marpunchil
Skench

and I also have the following
Lickityke
Mosslus
Mosstrous
Ignoramoos
Enormoos
Upsidaze and Co.

So that's 16 fresh Poks with more on the way. I'm getting more sketches from Culth. I'm not sure what to make of Lode. It's an odd possition. Please IM me about this, Culth. That is all.

Poryhedron Re: Several Suggestions #-1 [-]

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Sep 23 02 2:33 PM

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Ah, yes! Steelacien! Going back to the info posted for it, we need to work on the dex, since, as you suspected, it doesn't fit. There were some possibilities offered in the relevant Selenica OOC topic:
Surprisingly tame, despite its military purpose. ------------------ As it develops, new equipment will upgrade its body. Despite their war- like purposes, it is actually quite ------------------ tame and docile. Equipment forms as it develops.

By the way, just checking, how is the name spelled? I've seen you use both Steelacien and Steelacean with some regularity.

Kangaskhan Kommando Steelacian #0 [-]

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Sep 23 02 3:23 PM

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Definatly with an a. The e is just my natural inclination to spell it that way, however cetacian is definatly with an a. And also I'd like to change Steelacian's weight, if I could from 163 lbs to 282. I figure with it's back made completely out of metal, it would be a lot heavier.

As for Pengyn...well I dunno, I just liked the idea. (really, I think it was just Wonder Boy venting at me for criticizing his Odstretch idea)Maybe instead of placing the icecube on the tail it could be at the end of two large head feathers? Ofcourse that would make a change in the dex...

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