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Re: Nukumber

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Feb 18 03 4:01 AM

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Sounds good to me, but then again, it's not my pokmon. Makato?

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Makoto Kurayami

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Feb 18 03 4:15 PM

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yeah, I agree, that is a good name..so are we still having this a evolve once pokemon? or is it single?

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Feb 20 03 12:24 PM

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Well, here's the data we have at this point...

Name: Kiicumber
Classification: ???
Type: Water
HT: ???
WT: ???
Description: ???
Pokdex:
???
???
???
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???
???
???
Evolution: To Paracalox

Name: Paracalox
Classification: Echinoderm
Type: Water/Poison
HT: ???
WT: ???
Description: a long wormlike creature. It has a bunch of bristles with circular tips coming from all over the body. at the front end, the brisles get longer.
Pokdex:
Having no eyes, it
uses its highly
toxic feelers to
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guide itself. If
provoked, it emits
a mushroom cloud.

Paracalox is missing height and weight, but is otherwise approvable. However, Kiicumber is missing practically everything. You can flesh it out if you'd like, or just dump it.

Makoto Kurayami

hm

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Feb 20 03 3:41 PM

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kiicumber
echinoderm
HT?
WT?
type:water

Although it is
a pure water
type, it's
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poison sacs
have begun
to develope...

Now to worry about the HT/WT crisis

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Feb 20 03 7:11 PM

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"Although it is a pure water type, its poison sacs have begun to develop..."
No. Just...no. Mentioning element type, ending a dex entry with an ellipsis, and the whole cliff-hanger writing style...nnno.

Since its poison
sacs have just
recently started
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to develop, it
cannot yet use
poison in battle.

Still not perfect, but better.

Makoto Kurayami

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Feb 21 03 4:14 PM

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er...so, is that the dex you will be planning to use or what...and since i have this whole week offf from school, i have some time to solve the HT/Wt

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Mar 2 03 12:00 PM

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Well, it would have been usable...but with the shift to RS ir becomes too short, as does the dex for Paracalox. However, without the guidelines that we are still unable to establish, replacements cannot yet be written.

A discussion over AIM has yielded the following dimensions:
Kiicumber: 1'03", 6.0 lb
Paracalox: 3'06", 19.0 lb

Other than the dexes, one thing still remains to be done: you have yet to provide a description of Kiicumber.

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