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I've gone over the entry and noticed a few things.

1) It's ok if you want to enter Leechum's Dex Entries later

2) You didn't explain a few new moves/ abilities (Bloodsucker e.t.c.)

3) The evolution method doesn't seem viable to me. A vial of Tentacruel poison kind if makes it seem helpless without Tentacruel, in the sense that in it's pre evolved state it would be weak and easy prey for other Pokemon. How about a vial of normal poison obtained from any poison type?

4) Glausting's two Dex's say the exact same thing just rephrased. If brought down to the get go they basically just say Glausting searches for Tentacruel to take their poison

5) For the move explanations you did do, it would be good to use a move format to make it easier to read and understand. Like this

(Move Title here)
Base Power -
Accuracy -
PP -
Effect -
Flavour Text -

6) I would also recommend doing stats for your Pokemon. They are vital in getting it approved. I would recommend looking at your Pokemons types and looking at the stats they are good at (e.g. Dragon types usually have high Special Attack e.t.c.

Otherwise the concept is pretty good :P