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I've gone over the entry and noticed a few things.

1) It's ok if you want to enter Leechum's Dex Entries later

2) You didn't explain a few new moves/ abilities (Bloodsucker e.t.c.)

3) The evolution method doesn't seem viable to me. A vial of Tentacruel poison kind if makes it seem helpless without Tentacruel, in the sense that in it's pre evolved state it would be weak and easy prey for other Pokemon. How about a vial of normal poison obtained from any poison type?

4) Glausting's two Dex's say the exact same thing just rephrased. If brought down to the get go they basically just say Glausting searches for Tentacruel to take their poison

5) For the move explanations you did do, it would be good to use a move format to make it easier to read and understand. Like this

(Move Title here)
Base Power -
Accuracy -
PP -
Effect -
Flavour Text -

6) I would also recommend doing stats for your Pokemon. They are vital in getting it approved. I would recommend looking at your Pokemons types and looking at the stats they are good at (e.g. Dragon types usually have high Special Attack e.t.c.

Otherwise the concept is pretty good :P

I suppose. But the Tentacruel poison in my opinion makes it too dependant on Tentacruel. Evolution is a major factor in the pokemon world. And if you need another pokemon to evolve your basically screwed. And seeing as a pre evolution (Leechum) would have to fight a fully evolved Pokemon (Glausting) which is a major disadvantage basically screwing Leechum over even more. If it was a vial of normal Poison type poison Leechum would have more of a chance against smaller poison types e.g. Nidoran e.t.c.

(P.S. Thanks for the link to Bloodsucker.

Here is Dex A & B for Leechum

Dex A - Leechum is a bloodsucking pokemon. It roams the sea looking for Tentracruel poison so it can evolve (100)
Dex B - It's tentacle like wings earned it the name sea swallow. It injects poison from it's stinger. (92)

It could have Poison Point instead. That is a standard Poison type ability.

I would say Leechum should be a Poison Type and Glausting be a Water/Poison type. Leeches aren't bugs but segmented worms with relations to earthworms. There really is no other typing possible for Leechum other than Poison/Water type. But I advice making Leechum just a Poison type as it would emphasis the difference in power from the pre - evolution to the evolution unless Glausting will see like a larger more intimidating form of Leechum.

If you need help with stats just ask. I'm fairly good at making fair, balanced stats.