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Flarsable

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May 31 12 2:53 PM

So what part of this makes it deserving of being in Community Works?

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ZeroChill

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May 31 12 8:32 PM

This is a template. I couldn't just come here with no ideas. You might as well imagine there is nothing on that post. A lot ifpeople here have more experience and could think of something 10x better. I only inputted the info so you guys would see how I wanted the Pokemon. By all means if someone uploads a better evolutionary template, I could delete all that and put it in.

Cacapulse

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May 31 12 11:26 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Oh , you probably saw the stickied template post here and thought this is how Community Works suggestions are done. I apologize.
These usually just start with pictures or descriptions of a concept. A good example of a starting Community Works post is "The Symbiotic Pokémon". Yours is pretty much complete so it doesn't qualify. You don't seem to have another regular suggestion at the moment so with your permission I can move it to the main suggestions forum.

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ZeroChill

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Jun 1 12 8:24 AM

Sure move it Cacapulse. Thank by the way.

patricol

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Jun 2 12 2:28 AM

Wouldn't it be better if Luminous would summon Solais like Sand Stream or Drought?

My Suggestions:

Duckiducky (DS#037)
Rubbarvaz (DS#038)
Larvyre (Community DS#039)
Pupyre (Community DS#040)
Lepradu (DS#150)

Pollutross (DS #180)

Jibayuna (DS #199 Legendary Contest winner)

Bayubisa (DS #200 Legendary Contest winner)
Torchild
Lightorch
Destorch
Phashift(Community)

magemaster529

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Jun 2 12 5:18 AM

Kolorios stats are really high with a total of 605. That tops every event pokemon, pseudo-legendary pokemon, and every "trio" pokemon( the regis', the legendary dogs, the legendary birds ect.)

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ZeroChill

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Jun 2 12 5:47 AM

Thanks patricol and magemaster529! I have changed everything according to your recommendations. What do you think of it now? Comment your thoughts please.

Suggested Pokemon

Haloros

Kolorios

Wispabre

Umbrades

magemaster529

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Jun 2 12 5:55 AM

I think the stats are way better now. An on a side note Kolorios is now rivaling Togekiss.

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Last Edited By: magemaster529 Jun 2 12 5:57 AM. Edited 1 times.

ZeroChill

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Jun 2 12 6:34 AM

Lol. Mann Kolorios is rivalling a Togekiss :P Thanks for the advice magemaster. Thanks to your contribution Kolorios is a much better balanced Pokemon. From the start I always wanted Kolorios to be a Special Tank. Hopefully it will get accepted. All I can do is wait.

Suggested Pokemon

Haloros

Kolorios

Wispabre

Umbrades

Flarsable

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Jun 2 12 10:31 AM

Just a note, apparently Kolorios evolves from Kolorios.

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ZeroChill

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Jun 2 12 10:35 AM

Sorry x| I spent so much time adding in extra details like egg groups, egg cycles e.t.c. trying my best to heighten it's chances of getting approved that I overlooked the little things. Thanks Flars! You're a lifesaver.

Suggested Pokemon

Haloros

Kolorios

Wispabre

Umbrades

Flarsable

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Jun 2 12 10:37 AM

I guess I'm going to save your life twice... it says Holorios, not Haloris. Also, Haloris's name reminds me a lot of Solaris, which only makes it sound more, "Holier than thou."

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ZeroChill

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Jun 2 12 10:42 AM

*Passes out* btw its Haloros (Halo + Eros) But the idea of a Solaris based pokemon seems interesting. I could work on it after this project. Could any PF worker look at this. I know you already have Pokemon you're working on right now, but I need to know if there is any mistakes.

Suggested Pokemon

Haloros

Kolorios

Wispabre

Umbrades

Last Edited By: ZeroChill Jun 3 12 2:45 AM. Edited 1 times.

Flarsable

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Jun 3 12 11:08 AM

No, a Solaris Pokemon would not work, because Solaris is already an entity in another popular franchise(even if in a game that erased itself from the continuity of the series). It may or may not be copyrighted.

Award for Extreme Patience
Always hotter than the competition. I got the award for Braving the Marquee of Doom!

ZeroChill

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Jun 3 12 11:58 AM

Well I suppose that idea just spontaneously combusted. Anyway I do have another Pokemon idea that I shall upload as soon as this idea is approved/rejected. Hopefully not the latter, but it's not my decision.

Suggested Pokemon

Haloros

Kolorios

Wispabre

Umbrades

oran5777

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Jun 5 12 3:29 AM

For future scanning it would help if you go over the pencil with a pen, to darken the lines. The staff tend to like it when there is a text description as they are going to make new concept art and turn that into a sprite. (I think I got that right, but I'm not a staff member.)

Pokemon: Windigo

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ZeroChill

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Jun 5 12 4:17 AM

I did go over it with a pen... My scanner is just really rubbish. I will make a text description now though.

Suggested Pokemon

Haloros

Kolorios

Wispabre

Umbrades

ZeroChill

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Jun 17 12 11:53 PM

Anyone have any other qualms or advice on this?

Suggested Pokemon

Haloros

Kolorios

Wispabre

Umbrades

SCD

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Jun 18 12 6:53 AM

PF Executive

This is a very thoroughly developed entry, and thank you very much for that because we get SO many suggestions that don't even bother to read the submission rules. I am however not fond of the current classification for each pokemon; they allude to real-life abrahamaic religions, which have no place in the pokemon universe. Also, Arcadian Force is 1 character too long for an attack. You could remove the space and make it fit that way, but that is hardly ever pleasing to the eye.

*Magemaster because I am a massive pedant I need to point out that "Arcadia" is simply the noun of "Arcadian"; there's no need to bring spanish into this.

Last Edited By: SCD Jun 18 12 8:18 AM. Edited 1 times.

magemaster529

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Jun 18 12 6:57 AM

You could call it "Arcadia Force". "Arcadia" is spanish for "Arcadian".

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