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nsmbwii

Ancient Pot & Shard Pokemon (Shardery & Diabolurn)

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Jan 4 12 4:16 PM

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I'm hoping to give this a shot, so here we go!

Name: Shardery (Shard-er-ry) [Name Shard + Pottery mixed*]
Classification: Shard Pokemon
Type: Rock
HT: 0'05
WT: 2.1 Lbs
Description: A brown shard of clay with a single red eye with black pupil. It is surrounded by a purple mist that trails like a tail. It always floats above the ground.
Pokedex Entries:
-Dex A: A piece of an ancient pot that has developed a mind of it's own. It seeks it's scattered pieces to repair itself.

-Dex B: Legend says if someone helps it find it's missing pieces, good luck and fortune will be bestowed.
Ability: Levitate
Evolution: Evolves to Diabolurn at LVL30 holding or not holding one of the following items
Red Shard
Blue Shard
Green Shard
Yellow Shard
Cyan Shard
Black Shard
White Shard
Purple Shard
Orange Shard

Moveset:

--- Tackle

--- Harden

lvl 7 Rock Throw

lvl 13 Confusion

lvl 25 Ancientpower

lvl 30 Sediment

lvl 30 Rock Polish

lvl 35 Rock Slide

lvl 42 Stone Edge

Stats:
HP 30
ATK 60
DEF 50
SAT 60
SDF 50
SPD 80

Habitat: Ruins

Locations: Majestic Mountains Trail

*Name suggested by Unova Star

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Name: Diabolurn (Di-a-bol-ern) [Name is Diabolic with Urn]

Classification: Pot Pokemon
Type: Psychic*/Rock
HT: 2'11
WT: 23.6 Lbs
Description: A clay pot with with some wave-like patterns on the pot. It has a small hole in the front where a red eye with black pupil peers through. Two large holes on the side have two arms of purple energy come out. The fingers are round, like a glove's. A hole on the bottom has a lizard-like tale of purple energy poke out. It always floats above the ground.
Pokedex Entries:
-Dex A: Now reassembled, it becomes very agressive to anyone who tries to shatter it again.

-Dex B: If it breaks again, it hastingly attempts to repair itself with any fallen pieces or nearby materials.
Ability: Levitate
Evolution: Evolves from Peeses at LVL30 holding or not holding one of the following items
Red Shard
Blue Shard
Green Shard
Yellow Shard
Cyan Shard
Black Shard
White Shard
Purple Shard
Orange Shard

No Shard Form Moveset:

--- Tackle

--- Harden

--- Hypnosis

--- Sediment

--- Rock Polish

lvl 15 Rock Throw

lvl 20 Confusion

lvl 22 Psycho Shift

lvl 24 Ancientpower

lvl 31Psychic

lvl 34 Shell Smash

lvl 40 Glass Shards

lvl 44 Mind Swipe

lvl 50 Mind Assault

Red Shard Form Moveset

--- Tackle

--- Harden

--- Will-O-Wisp

--- Sediment

--- Rock Polish

lvl 15 Rock Throw

lvl 20 Confusion

lvl 22 Inflame

lvl 24 Ancientpower

lvl 31 Flamethrower

lvl 34 Shell Smash

lvl 40 Glass Shards

lvl 44 Scorch

lvl 50 Overheat

Blue Shard Form Moveset

--- Tackle

--- Harden

--- Whirlpool

--- Sediment

--- Rock Polish

lvl 15 Rock Throw

lvl 20 Confusion

lvl 22 Water Cage

lvl 24 Ancientpower

lvl 31 Wave Shot

lvl 34 Shell Smash

lvl 40 Glass Shards

lvl 44 Life Spring

lvl 50 Hydro Pump

Stats (For all Forms):
HP 70
ATK 70
DEF 110
SAT 70
SDF 80
SPD 40

Habitat: Ruins

Locations: Majestic Mountains Trail (Rare)

*This type varies depending on what item if any is used with evolution.

No Shard: Psychic
Red Shard: Fire
Blue Shard: Water
Green Shard: Grass
Yellow Shard: Electric
Cyan Shard: Ice
Black Shard: Dark
White Shard: Light
Purple Shard: Ghost
Orange Shard: Ground

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Last Edited By: nsmbwii Mar 22 12 3:04 PM. Edited 6 times.

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Coolsteph

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Jan 4 12 5:19 PM

The name (Peeses seems...immature) could use work, and you made a few spelling mistakes in your descriptions and Pokédex entries. The moveset could also be larger. Other than that, they are perfectly feasible, appealing designs.

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Rahjet

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Jan 4 12 6:58 PM

Is Psycho Boost not Deoxys-exclusive? Asking half-out of ignorance, half-out of concern.

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Jan 4 12 7:21 PM

No, it's exclusive. Also, Peesis (aside from the innuendo) is simply pronounced "Pieces", even though it's only one piece. Evolving at level 30 doesn't seem to really match putting it back together. It might be more accurate to have it be a trade with an item that's another shard, or a broken pot.

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Unova Star

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Jan 4 12 8:46 PM

Not sure if this is helpful, but if you go with Flarsable's suggestion, you could go with creating an alternate form for each of the different coloured shards (If others feel like having a shard of pottery having more than 5 forms (Due to there being a shard for each Stone, aside from Madstone)).
And on the note of Psycho Boost, I believe it is exclusive to Deoxys as the only other Pokemon that can learn it (Lugia) needs to be purified first.
Now, a name suggestion for the basic stage: Shardery (Shard + pottery). Sorry if it isn't good, I'm half asleep so can't concentrate properly.

With that out of the way, this suggestion looks pretty well and creative. Hope we can see more of this from you in the future.

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Coolsteph

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Jan 4 12 9:32 PM

Shardery would be a great name.
As for new moves---perhaps Glass Shards and TerrainBlast?

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Rahjet

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Jan 4 12 10:42 PM

Isn't TerrainBlast from Maqueterra's movelist as its sig and dependent upon its ability, Terramorph? I do like Shardery, though, and the idea for the Shard-evos as well. What about Rock Polish? or Harden? or Psych Up?

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nsmbwii

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Jan 5 12 5:43 AM

Man, I feel surprised by the feedback you all have given. I've noticed the amount of errors pointed out, but I assume this process happens frequently.

The name "Shardery" does sound much better then "Peeses" in opinion. Should it be changed to "Shardery"?

I checked, and Psycho Boost is Legendary-exclusive. Strange, as I used to think it could be learned by a handful of Psychics, but I guess not.

Moveset-wise, I guess that it would need a larger moveset. I felt like trying to keep it from being too big, but 2 to 3 additional moves would be good (And something that could replace Psycho Boost.) Possibly a move called Stone Repair in the vain of Recover?

I felt like giving the evolution line a Magnemite or Beldum-like feel. Though their dex entries states they combine to evolve, they still evolve from Level Up. Of course, I'm not talking down on the Shard evolution idea, which honestly I never thought about yet is still interesting. While the Shard idea works for flavor reasons, I feel like a simple Level Up Evolution requirement is okay as well.

About the Shard idea if implemented, should it have the color of the pot chang depending on the shard traded with? Would it be just a alternate color, or would Type, Moveset, or Stats change as well depending on the form?

Coolsteph

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Jan 5 12 6:05 AM

Oops, never noticed that TerrainBlast was a signature move.
Harden would be a fitting move for it to learn.

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Rahjet

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Jan 5 12 8:31 AM

I think if the Shard idea were implemented then it would definitely have all three of those change, nsmbwii.

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Jan 5 12 11:45 AM

Alright... these are kind of the ideas of new moves and where they would be positioned.

Peeses or (Shardery)

--- Harden

lvl 21 Psych Up

lvl 47 Mind Assault

Diabolurn

--- Harden

lvl 22 Psych Up

lvl 40 Glass Shards

lvl 50 Mind Assault

If the Shards are implemented in evolution, then the shard used could influence the 1st type of Diabolurn along with color. This is just a quick reference of how it could work. (I still feel like it should keep Moveset and Stats, rather just having a different type because of the shard influencing it's element. I just don't want this to be TOO complex...) No idea if there should be a different form for each shard or only a few.

Red = Fire
Yellow = Electric
Blue = Water
Green = Grass
Black = Magic
Cyan = ?
Orange = Ground
Purple = Dark
White = Light

Of course, this is not final or anything... no idea what Cyan Shard would make... and the other shards can still have the type changed.

Also noting what Flarsable said, a simple broken pot would also work as an evolution item just as well.

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Coolsteph

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Jan 5 12 1:37 PM

Cyan Shard: Maybe Ice?

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Flarsable

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Jan 5 12 3:03 PM

Black should really be Dark. Purple could be Ghost or Poison.

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Jan 5 12 4:37 PM

Ice sounds well for Cyan...

I kinda went with what Stone could be traded for the appropriate shard with Black and Purple shards.

Black= Moon Stone= Magic
Purple= Dusk Stone= Dark (Of course Ghost works too.)

So, based on popular opinion... which evolution method should be used?
1. Level Up
2. Shard-based
3. New Evolution item

Coolsteph

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Jan 5 12 6:24 PM

Maybe both?
If Shardery levels up while holding x shard, Diabolurn gains ytype.

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Unova Star

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Jan 5 12 6:28 PM

CoolSteph's idea works, and if no Shard, normal forme.

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Rahjet

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Jan 5 12 9:48 PM

Rahjet likes.

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Jan 5 12 9:55 PM

Moon = Magic? Midnight is a Dark type move.

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Jan 6 12 4:01 AM

Neat... Coolsteph's idea works really well, plus it gives a lot of potential on how you can customize Diabolurn. Alright... I think that should be the evolution method.

I guess I also can't really argue the reasoning for Black Shard being Dark. I guess Purple could still be Ghost.

Rahjet

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Jan 6 12 8:16 AM

So how many forms did we decide on?

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Jan 6 12 3:14 PM

9. One for each shard.

I think it'd be better suited as Poison, considering that Ghost has the exact same type advantages as Dark does... just different weaknesses. I can't say the same about Poison due to Light and Wind both being weak to it now.

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