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JDLJDL

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Aug 2 11 2:03 PM

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1. A bit clichéd in concept, no?
2. The name "Starbula", how is this Pokémon related to nebulas?
3. The first Pokédex entry for Constellar should be "They were used..." rather than "It was used...".
4. Designs are pretty clichéd too.
5. Yeah everything is screaming "cliché! cliché! this has been done before!" Work on that.

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AlphaAquarii

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Aug 2 11 2:10 PM

1. u really think so?
2. nebulas are the birthplace of stars, and it also refers to the childlike appearance of the pokemon.
3. ok, I can fix that.
4.?
5.????

AlphaAquarii

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Aug 2 11 2:14 PM

I don't understand, where have you seen a design or idea like this before?

SCD

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Aug 2 11 5:19 PM

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Ridiculously great pictures you did of them!

the dex entries you did are okay, but maybe a smidgen too long. would it be possible to reword them to keep them within 100 characters?
Movelists need a lot of work though, firstly with adding more moves in. Starbula for example learns nothing from 25 through to 45, and Constellar is the same from 37 to 50.
Other than that this is a mighty fine first suggestion!

Last Edited By: SCD Aug 3 11 1:47 PM. Edited 1 times.

AlphaAquarii

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Aug 2 11 5:30 PM

SCD: thanks, and yeah I knew I was going to need work on the moves list for both. I was going to ask for help on those. And yeah I can do something about the dex entries.

SCD

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Aug 2 11 5:40 PM

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You don't actually need to add all that many moves, mostly it's the levels. You should spread them out a bit more, you have a few moves with only two levels between them.

AlphaAquarii

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Aug 2 11 9:03 PM

Ok, there we go! Quick fix...

SCD

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Aug 3 11 5:59 AM

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Much better!

sovereignofsilence667

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Aug 3 11 9:48 AM

I agree with SCD, this doesn't seem overdone or cliched at all. I really like them (though I must admit, your wonderful art helped to convince me).

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AlphaAquarii

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Aug 3 11 10:06 AM

Thanks:b I really want to get my name out there by showing my skills as an artist.

Last Edited By: AlphaAquarii Aug 5 11 4:40 PM. Edited 1 times.

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Empfindsam

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Aug 3 11 12:11 PM

I can see how the 'pokemon from the stars' idea could be seen as a bit hackneyed, but with the way you conceptualized it, I think you're just fine. I rather like these two, and how well you stuck with the theme as far as the movesets go - but then I just really like anything related to astronomy :'D

One question: Why does Starbula learn Meteor Strike before Light Screen but Constellar learns Light Screen first?

AlphaAquarii

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Aug 3 11 12:18 PM

Oops! Thanks for that. It should be Meteorstrike and then Light Screen. Just fixed it. And here is an updated pic of Constellar: http://i1225.photobucket....haAquarii/1312401904.jpg

Empfindsam

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Aug 3 11 2:20 PM

It kind of reminds me of one of these

http://www.art-made-easy....mages/wooden-manikin.jpg

but in SPACE!

btw is the ring around it actually part of the pokemon? Like does it always accompany it?

AlphaAquarii

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Aug 3 11 3:15 PM

Yeah that was my inspiration! I use art mannequins all the time for drawing, I thought it might make a good pokemon! And yeah the wheel is apart of the pokemon. I imagine the wheel spinning at high speeds in all different directions, like a gyro ball, reflecting all incoming projectiles.

Empfindsam

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Aug 3 11 3:35 PM

Nice. I have one of those on my desk as well. If that hadn't been part of your design concept, I was going to go run out and make one based on one of those myself, hehe

AlphaAquarii

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Aug 3 11 5:40 PM