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Bombur Headline: Boy spots new breed of Tentacruel!

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ninjamatt2

Maniwor

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Nov 27 06 10:57 AM

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Ok, this loks interesting. Wow, a new tentacool. Deffinately related, this pokemon looks more peaceful than tentacruel. Perhaps a psycic or magic type, or even, as you mentioned, an electric type. That would make it an electric Jellyfish, which would easily fit in with the natural order of pokemon. rather than Tentacruels 'Gangster of the Sea' image, this would more be more peaceful, but using force when necessary, and with great power.

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Dark Caddisfly

Re: Maniwor

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Nov 28 06 6:57 PM

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I like it!!! The name is really cool and so is the pic. Wouldn't it be crazy if there were pokemon gang battles like Tentacruel vs. Sharpedo? Maybe it wouldn't be cool but interesting.................

Blinx900

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Nov 29 06 8:55 PM

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Some things so far

Name: Maniwor

Attribute: Poison/Elecric

Ability: Water Absorb

Type: Voltic squid pokemon

Height: 5' 04"

Weight: 163 lbs

Evolution method: Evolves from Tentacool at lv. 35 while holding a 'Yellow Shard'.

DEX:
MANIWOR constantly prowl the
seas, stopping the common gang
battles between TENTACRUEL
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and SHARPEDO. They use
Water, Poison and Electric
attacks with amazing power.

New move

Zap Acid
Electric
Power: 85
PP: 15
Acc: 95%
Sprays an electricity induced acid.
High critical hit ratio, may caus poisoning.

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ninjamatt2

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Nov 30 06 3:13 AM

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Cool, like the new attack. How about a Dex

MANIWOR constantly prowl the
seas, stopping the common gang
battles between TENTACRUEL
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and SHARPEDO. They use
Water, Poison and Electric
attacks with amazing power.

Blinx900

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Nov 30 06 5:22 AM

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I like it! I'll edit the post above with it.

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Dark Caddisfly

Re: Maniwor

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Dec 1 06 6:57 PM

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Waht about an attack list?

Blinx900

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Dec 2 06 11:59 AM

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Move list:
--Poison Sting
--Supersonic
--Thundershock
lv. 16 Constrict
lv. 23 Acid
lv. 29 Thunderbolt
lv. 35 Zap Acid
lv. 38 Barrier
lv. 41 Thunder
lv. 47 Screech
lv. 55 Hydro Pump

Base Stats:
hp: 100
atk: 70
def: 80
sp. atk: 100
sp. def: 100
spd: 120

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ninjamatt2

Re: Maniwor

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Dec 4 06 5:24 AM

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Cool. I like very much. Just out of curiosity, why would the yellow shard make it evolve. The yellow shard is only an item a man would trade for thunderstone. It has no electrical qualities itself. Maybe just Thunderstone? No body uses the classic evolution methods any more! Just use a thunderstone

Blinx900

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Dec 11 06 8:45 PM

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I see what you mean... but I want to hear the staff's opinion on it before I change anything.

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Gelatop

Re: Maniwor

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Aug 7 07 2:52 PM

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Hmm, I hope it's not too late, but here's a 2nd Name idea! How about Tentactric? Just because I prefer not to change a word's spelling simply! No that won't work! But MANIWOR does not imply Electricity! Volticle? Man'o'wire? Hydrozoap? Nemotactric? Shocklyp? Sholyp? Floaltic? Siphunder? Physhoclia? Oh, maybe one of those works!

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bentmetal

Re: Maniwor

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Aug 14 07 5:00 AM

I disagree Gelatop. I think the name is incredibly suitable, and the consoldiation into a single word changes its pronunciation, because you dont have the long O sound. The change in spelling does more for it, than say Seel. Names dont always have to have an "hidden" meaning every single time.

Also, the names dont have to refer to the type the pokemon is, infact sometimes its best that it doesnt because you are limited around a few familiar words, and you end up with a whole bunch of pokemon with Zap, Electric, Volt, etc in their names.

Gelatop

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Aug 14 07 8:34 AM

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Sorry! Fine, yeah, I like it too! But I just thought about the whole not saying Electric thing! Oh, and if it is Poison/Electric, it will be walking on the land. To make it a Voltic Squid, Water/Electric, with Poison moves!

Shining ShinE

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Aug 22 07 8:33 AM

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No. Dratini's family lives in the water too, and they're not Water-types either. So, it's not necessary for it to be Water-type. It might be nice, though, since the Tentacool have Water as their primary type. But I guess it's approvable either way.

Gelatop

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Aug 22 07 9:24 AM

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I guess you are right ShinE! But it looks too much like Water type!

Jigglyclops

Re: Bombur Headline: Boy spots new breed of Tentacruel!

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Aug 24 07 11:02 PM

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I agree with that too Gelatop, and could also add it looks like a fighting type too. But in the other side, Electric/Poison is a unique combination...

Shining ShinE

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Apr 1 10 6:27 AM

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I had overlooked this one, so a late bump...

ZeldaFan

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Apr 1 10 6:34 AM

Between this and Medusiren, the Tentacool family sure is big now

Perhaps this could be a male counterpart to Medusiren, using a Dawn Stone as well? Then the line would look like:

                     Medusiren
                          ^
                          l
Tentacute--->Tentacool--->Tentacruel
                           l
                           v
                      Maniwar

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