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ShadowX

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Jul 31 11 2:00 AM

when u post a comment how do u upload pokemon.
I got 2 more pokemon for my reigon
Drillinor & Drillieroc.

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Flarsable

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Jul 31 11 12:00 PM

Some critique:

1. Just because other people are making a region doesn't mean you have to.

2. Wrathness's name isn't very creative, and its basis seems to be... I don't think it has one. Try to base it off of some horror (keep it kid friendly) and go from there.

3. On the same note, Elegenoil seems like Porky's troopers mixed a chicken and a dog. If it's supposed to be a hippogriff or something similar, please update your artwork with hooves or whatever it is. Also, take the wing in front and re-add the body line because the wing is on the other side as far as I'm concerned. Change the legs so that two of them are partially behind the other two to help with the depth as well. Also, its stats don't add up. For whatever reason, you added two extra stat points to its Speed that it doesn't really need.

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Salamence Tamer

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Jul 31 11 9:49 PM

ShadowX- you go to add reply then you can insert pictures from there
Flasable- Elagenoil is meant to be a griffin which is half Lion half Eagle, thats also where the name comes from its lionegale backwards. Also The wing on Rigerwrath (Wrathness) adds to its personality, and yes I dont have to make this Region but I want to. Im also changing the stats.

Salamence Tamer

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Jul 31 11 10:25 PM

These are the Grass Starters for the region there Grass/Bug Flowug, Guberwolf and Burapter -

Last Edited By: Salamence Tamer Jul 31 11 10:34 PM. Edited 1 times.

ShadowX

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Jul 31 11 10:36 PM

Here are two pokemon you could add to your Reigon.

Drllinor

Drilleroc

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Salamence Tamer

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Jul 31 11 10:38 PM

Also ShadowX is working on this region with me.

Salamence Tamer

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Jul 31 11 11:14 PM

These are the Fire Starters Fire/Poison Pylaze, Flamake and Ekanserif-

Last Edited By: Salamence Tamer Aug 1 11 9:58 PM. Edited 1 times.

Salamence Tamer

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Aug 1 11 10:04 PM

These are the Water Starters The 2nd and 3rd stages are Water/Dragon the 1st stage is Water only. the names are Walash,Aquagon and Watagon-

JDLJDL

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Aug 2 11 2:05 PM

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ShadowX

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Aug 2 11 11:06 PM

Slaemence tamer I think they look a lot like feralagator i know u like red spikes but yeah.

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Salamence Tamer

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Aug 2 11 11:12 PM

Have You got any more pokemon you can add to the regoin ShadowX?

Bgreymon

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Aug 2 11 11:28 PM

That thing looks like a Feraligatr with two arms on one side.
Maybe don't have it as a lizard (do something original).

Salamence Tamer

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Aug 6 11 12:55 AM

Here are the common land pokemon- Ordoox Normal type and Fozap Normal/Electric

Green KoopaTroopa

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Aug 6 11 12:58 AM

you might want to get rid of the scribbles on ears and the feet are a bit to big tails like bibarels but that is ok after all it is a normal type.

Green KoopaTroopa

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Aug 6 11 1:49 AM

I have a picture for Ordoox and Fozap. But it won't load.

sovereignofsilence667

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Aug 6 11 11:32 AM

Not to be too incredibly mean, but these things are all scribbles. There's no depth to the-- everything is drawn like it was facing the imaginary camera, even though no one could ever do that. You have to have CURVES and SURFACES! Like this, which I drew to improve upon "Rigewrath" (my file name calls it "Etheraith, but it is your region so you don't have to take my advice). I eliminated the silly little wings you added on for "personality" (how a limb can add to one's personality, I'll never know):

^ Please to be Clicking mah Babies! I'm trying to fill out the various Regional Dexes. YAY FOR HOURS AND HOURS OF LABOR!

And also, maybe, you could check out my newest project? Remember: Read and Review! Thank you!
A Summoner's Sacrifice: A Final Fantasy X Prequel Fic

Last Edited By: sovereignofsilence667 Aug 6 11 3:56 PM. Edited 1 times.

Salamence Tamer

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Aug 6 11 10:54 PM

I know but would you mind drawing Elagenoil for me? Becasue I want the legends to look perfect.

sovereignofsilence667

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Aug 7 11 11:55 AM

I actually kind of would mind, since I have my own regional Pokemon that I need to draw. Think of this as a chance for you to improve your skills as an artist.

^ Please to be Clicking mah Babies! I'm trying to fill out the various Regional Dexes. YAY FOR HOURS AND HOURS OF LABOR!

And also, maybe, you could check out my newest project? Remember: Read and Review! Thank you!
A Summoner's Sacrifice: A Final Fantasy X Prequel Fic

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