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Flarsable

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Jul 23 11 1:41 PM

I remember this. Did we even get approval for ultimate moves? Or orbs?

Sorry, but I won't be re-appearing. Due to what happened before (various illegal things in terms of PF, see questions above), I'm not going to take the risk. And, Fern and Lead are what one may call "wanderers", so whenever an RPG is dead that they're in they jump to a new one. Which just so happens to be... dead, but I'm trying to revive it. And, some of the fresh new faces aren't exactly experienced.

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soble92

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Jul 23 11 3:40 PM

It is fine. I already have my heroes planned. This is going to be an independent fan-fiction, and it is not going to be canon to the Free-Spirit RPG.

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

Flarsable

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Jul 23 11 4:24 PM

Ah. I see.

Sonic Pulse is already a move. Maybe call it Mach Pulse?

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sovereignofsilence667

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Jul 23 11 5:19 PM

"Crono Crusher" should be "Chrono Crusher". Other than that, I don't think I see anything (though I squee'd when I saw that the Benthic Attack is still "Deep Submerge" like I suggested). "Heart-Wash" seems kinda iffy, but they're your attacks.

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soble92

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Jul 23 11 7:02 PM

Alright. The names are edited and i renamed heart-wash to "Tough Love."

Now, how about the effects?

Sobledit:

I added in the effects that were mentioned an an old topic related to this. There are still orbs that i didn't realize need moves and effects. Please help!

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

Last Edited By: soble92 Jul 24 11 6:26 AM. Edited 1 times.

patricol

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Jul 24 11 6:58 AM

Oh! I am so happy you brought it back ^-^

I guess Aura storm could be like in brawl: A huge beam of concentrated aura is fired at the opponent.

My Suggestions:

Duckiducky (DS#037)
Rubbarvaz (DS#038)
Larvyre (Community DS#039)
Pupyre (Community DS#040)
Lepradu (DS#150)

Pollutross (DS #180)

Jibayuna (DS #199 Legendary Contest winner)

Bayubisa (DS #200 Legendary Contest winner)
Torchild
Lightorch
Destorch
Phashift(Community)

soble92

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Jul 24 11 8:33 AM

Alright. Thanks Pat.

Now there are more moves and more effects. There are 4 types to worry about: Bug, Dragon, Normal, and Life.

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

SCD

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Jul 24 11 9:00 AM

PF Executive

Normal could be something that renders all the opponents' moves normal-type themselves.
Life could restore all the user's HP and keep it filled for a couple of turns afterwards.
Dragon could be some sort of breath weapon that has different effects depending on the opponent's primary type.
Bug could be some sort of nondamaging move that raises the stats of bug-types and lowers those of other types.

And by request from soble here's some improvements. Edits are in bold, reasons for them are in bracketed italics.
Fire: Violent Volcano(inferno tempest seemed slightly nonindicative of what was happening)-The user calls upon the power of the Fire Orb, and then summons a volcano from the ground that shoots a column of white-hot(you can't have a laser made of magma, that's just silly) magma at the foe. This move will Burn the opponent on contact.
Life: Purity Luster- Fully restores the user's HP, and refills it if necessary for a couple of turns after use.
Ground: Terra Buster- The user calls upon the power of the Ground Orb, and then gathers the power of a Magnitude 10(moved down considering that mankind has never recorded a magnitude 10 quake on earth, and the energy release would equal about 63 exajoules, which is more than enough) earthquake into a sphere of energy, and then Launches it into the ground beneath the foe.(the word "flying" and phrase "through the ground" really don't gel well)
Grass: Blossom Shower- The user calls upon the power of the Grass Orb, and then summons down a rain of flower petals so beautiful that the opponents become entranced by them and unwilling to attack. While the foes are distracted, the user cuts them up with razor-edged petals. (had to change alot here, as the previous rendition sounded like a grass and wind move smushed together)
Bone: Skeleton(just a minor name change) Rush- The user calls upon the power of the Bone Orb. An unearthly aura emanates from the user, and bones of Pokémon past rise from the ground and assemble into a giant monster that pummels the foe into submission.
Poison: Acid Bath(more appropriate since this move pretty much has to be liquid in nature)- The user calls upon the power of the Poison Orb. A vicious stream of deadly acid(it pays to be ambiguous. Don't mention specific substances unless you're willing to do some research on them first) is shot out of one’s hands or mouth. It ingores any defensive buffs and dissolves the foe's hide into sludge, preventing defense from being raised.(added a couple of neat effects)
Heart: Tough Love- The user calls upon the power of the Heart Orb. It makes the foes so in love with the user, they fall(Grammar Hammer) under his/her/its control. Shadow Pokémon’s hearts are opened temporarily during this effect.
Wind: Air Wall- The user calls upon the power of the Wind Orb and then traps the foe in a cyclone. While trapped, the user performs a 4-hit attack, finishing with a cutting wind that always scores a critical hit.(more sweet overpowered effects)
Magic: Disillusion Wave- The user calls upon the power of the Magic Orb and dispels all illusions currently at work, including all the foes protections, stat changes, and moves such as Detect, Protect, and Shadow Force. (redundant bit at the end removed)
Sound: Mach Pulse- The user calls upon the power of the Sound orb, and then shouts at an ear-splitting decibel level, blasting away the enemy and rendering them(GramHam) near-deaf.
Ghost: Spirit Steal- The user calls upon the power of the Ghost Orb, and then sucks the soul out of the opponent with a weird vacuuming effect from the mouth.(GramHam)
Steel: Metal Meteor- The user calls upon the power of the Steel Orb. A herd of meteors made entirely of(removed unnecessary details) metal, that's been heated by contact with the atmosphere, falls from the sky and crushes all foes.
Antimatter: Deathly Void- The user calls upon the power of the A-Mat Orb. A huge void appears below all foes, and they are sucked in and ripped apart by the antimatter, and soon after are patched back together and spat out.(nowhere else do you mention the orbs are self-aware and bound to a moral code. Considering that a number of your other moves dissolve, disintegrate, winnow and/or crush the target, I thought it best to not mention this tidbit outright.)
Cosmic: Astro(removed superfluous s) Focus- The user calls upon the power of the Cosmic Orb, and forces the planets into a unique alignment, focusing all mystic energy stored within them on the user. It raises all stats by 3 levels.
Space: Spatial(don't make the same mistake Spacial Rend did) Scatter- The user calls upon the power of the Space Orb, and then tears apart the foe at an atomic level, scattering the particles across the universe before violently reuniting them a millisecond later.
Mist: Cloudburst(cirrus clouds are too wispy and icy for rain)- The user calls upon the power of the Mist Orb. Clouds are formed that start pouring rain that floods the area in about 2 minutes, drowning the foes into unconsciousness.
Virtual: Data Crash - the user calls upon the power of the Virtual Orb. Weird nanomachines(allows more plausible infection of organic opponents) are injected into the opponent that force a bodily shutdown, as the nanomachines eat away on the opponent's health.(general cleanup)

Bug: Insect Invasion- The user calls upon the power of the Bug Orb. A pheromone is distributed over the field that drastically raises the stats of bug-type Pokémon and severely lowers the stats of all other types.

Dragon: Basilisk's Eye- The user calls upon the power of the Dragon Orb. The user locks eyes with the foe, terribly weakening their resolve to fight (all moves lose 4PP) and spawning different effects on different types. Water-types are frozen, Fire-types are petrified, Grass-types are poisoned, Ice-types are burned, Bug-types fall asleep, Poison-types are confused, Fighting-types are infatuated, Psychic-types' accuracy harshly falls, Dark-types' evasion harshly falls, Normal-types' Speed harshly falls, Steel-types' Special Defense harshly falls, Rock-types' Defense harshly falls, Ground-types' Attack harshly falls, Electric-types' Special Attack harshly falls,
Ghost-types are Identified, Flying-types lose their Ground immunity, Dragon-types receive half their current HP in damage, Magic-types are Leeched (à la Leech Seed) , Light-types are cursed and Wind-types are removed from battle (à la Whirlwind).

Normal: Basic Breaker-The user calls upon the power of the Normal Orb. All the opponent's moves are turned into the Normal-type.

Last Edited By: SCD Jul 24 11 11:04 AM. Edited 2 times.

soble92

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Jul 24 11 9:08 AM

Thanks SCD. I shall name them as such:

Normal: Nature Drain

Dragon: Wyvern Fog

Bug: Protective Swarm

A massive thank you to Mopp!!!

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

Last Edited By: soble92 Jul 24 11 11:17 AM. Edited 1 times.

Flarsable

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Jul 24 11 11:22 AM

So, are all of these moves OHKOs? (Yes, minus the non-damaging/specifically said otherwise ones.)

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soble92

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Jul 24 11 11:34 AM

No. I am not a fan of OHKO moves. But these moves are EXTREMELY powerful. Probably 350 base power.

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

Flarsable

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Jul 24 11 11:43 AM

Wouldn't that just destroy them anyway?

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soble92

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Jul 24 11 11:49 AM

... You're right. 250 sounds better, which is the base power of explosion

Ok. I need to find locations for 12 of the orbs. Here is what they are:

Fighting

Poison

Rock

Snow

Grass

Psychic

Mist

Wind

Magic

Plasma

Dark

Light

Four of them need to be in Kanto. Three of them need to be in Johto. Two of them need to be in Hoenn. One of them needs to be in Sinnoh. Two of them need to be in Bombur.

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

Last Edited By: soble92 Jul 25 11 1:02 PM. Edited 1 times.

Flarsable

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Jul 25 11 2:17 PM

A couple of questions:

1. Is Unova here, too? It's not on the list.

2. If not, which region will have an extra orb? There are 36 orbs, and so if there are five regions there will be an extra one.

Either Mist or Snow should be in Sinnoh. Mist would be hidden in Mt. Coronet's basement, and Snow would be somewhere north of it. Dark and Light should be together, probably in Bombur.

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soble92

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Jul 26 11 11:17 AM

Unova is here, but it already has it's orb spots filled. (Each region has 6)

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

patricol

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Jul 27 11 3:12 AM

The grass orb should be in Bombur, probably in Grandis Forest. The fighting orb could be in Mt. Mortar. The poison orb could be in the Great Marsh.

My Suggestions:

Duckiducky (DS#037)
Rubbarvaz (DS#038)
Larvyre (Community DS#039)
Pupyre (Community DS#040)
Lepradu (DS#150)

Pollutross (DS #180)

Jibayuna (DS #199 Legendary Contest winner)

Bayubisa (DS #200 Legendary Contest winner)
Torchild
Lightorch
Destorch
Phashift(Community)

Last Edited By: patricol Jul 27 11 3:22 AM. Edited 1 times.

Flarsable

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Jul 27 11 4:51 PM

Me and soble figured it out in the IRC without telling anyone, so sorry.

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soble92

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Jul 28 11 7:43 PM

yeah :/ sorry

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

patricol

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Aug 3 11 3:22 AM

OK then...

My Suggestions:

Duckiducky (DS#037)
Rubbarvaz (DS#038)
Larvyre (Community DS#039)
Pupyre (Community DS#040)
Lepradu (DS#150)

Pollutross (DS #180)

Jibayuna (DS #199 Legendary Contest winner)

Bayubisa (DS #200 Legendary Contest winner)
Torchild
Lightorch
Destorch
Phashift(Community)

Omega Aries

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Oct 21 11 7:24 PM

why did you guys stop this forum topic is awsome

some one start it back up or i will make my own orb related RPG!

BTW if you make an RPG of this, First post here I want to be a part of it but I don't want to be alone

Last Edited By: Omega Aries Oct 22 11 6:08 AM. Edited 2 times.

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