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The Komodo/Salamander pkmn

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poketamer94

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Jul 7 11 6:09 AM

nice suggestions, but there's already a Salamander/Komodo Pokemon.

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SoR

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Jul 7 11 9:58 AM

Before I give all my critiquing, welcome to PF!

PF already have so many dragons and a new one is suggested ever couple weeks, so dragons are held to an even higher standard than the usual suggestion. On top of that, there are already two official 3 stage ground/dragon pokemon (flygon and garchomp) and PF already has its own 3 stage ground/dragon pokemon (#PF112 Tillache, #PF113 Orthyvrn, and #FA230 Harvechrn). I honestly don't see anything that this pokemon has that flygon or garchomp does not. PF also has tons of pokemon that live in the desert under the beating sun. This idea is interesting but everything that is interesting about it has already been explored with another pokemon (at least as far as I have seen). I think that it would probably be best if you either drastically revamped this or came up with a new suggestion.

Concept stuff being said, I'll move to some specifics.
Your second dex entry is only 78 characters, it has to be at least 85.
Its movelist is a little sparce and you need to include a bunch of non-attacking moves (like maybe dragon dance).

Flarsable

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Jul 7 11 11:10 AM

No, Tillache is a branched evolution.

"its self" is grammatically incorrect in the second Dex. It should be "itself". It should also be "dry, blazing hot deserts" instead of what you have in the first Dex.

Your stat total is actually 321, not 320. Please remove a number from a stat to match it.

The Komodo Salamaner is 9 characters over the limit of 11, and needs to be changed.

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Salamence Tamer

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Jul 7 11 3:18 PM

Ok im changing the type and move set and adding the evos to it.

mr bean 567

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Jul 8 11 9:17 PM

This is very intresting. I think this needs a little nitpicking but im not the person to do that. May I suggest JDL?

two Fan Made pokemon made by pokemon vortex

Flarsable

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Jul 8 11 9:40 PM

All three of their stat totals are off. Salamodo's is still 321, Salagon's is 437, and Komdogon's is 557. Please tone down their stats to match.

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Salamence Tamer

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Jul 9 11 7:34 PM

Now there stats have been "toned down".

Flarsable

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Jul 9 11 9:38 PM

Salamodo's is still off. Just by more now. Make it back to what it originally was and remove a single point from one of the stats.

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Rahjet

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Jul 10 11 8:04 AM

Salamodo's stats add up to 316 now.

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

Salamence Tamer

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Jul 10 11 3:14 PM

I once again "toned down" Salamodo's stats.

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Flarsable

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Jul 10 11 3:36 PM

And you added pictures! Well, first thing's first, they don't look like salamanders. Or komodo dragons.

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Salamence Tamer

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Jul 10 11 3:44 PM

Sorry I'm not a very good drawer.

Tankesha

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Jul 10 11 6:56 PM

I'm sorry but the pictures don't look like any reptiles I have ever seen. Also good job with the stats they are a lot better now.

Salamence Tamer

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Jul 20 11 10:01 PM

Well If nobody likes these pictures then why doesn't somebody else have a go at drawing them by hand or on any program that you can use on the computer.

Cacapulse

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Jul 21 11 4:32 AM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Because an image description isn't a requirement. There, plain and simple.

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Unova Star

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Jul 22 11 4:06 AM

Written ones are more preferred for the Staff, or so I read.

Suggestions:
Cybreno/ Cybevertix/ Cybenteine (Closed)
Coravin
Fairichi/ Giadilenda (Community Works)

Ascledrius

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None as of yet

If you need me to post to anything, PM me and tell me which topics I need to post to.

Salamence Tamer

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Jul 22 11 3:25 PM

Ok, so do you want me to remove those pictures then? Thats just a base idea of what they look like and The staff will make way better ones if this gets approved.

Last Edited By: Salamence Tamer Jul 22 11 3:27 PM. Edited 1 times.

Cacapulse

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Jul 22 11 5:16 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Do whatever you want, it's your suggestion after all.
(Though honestly, those pictures aren't doing your suggestion any favors. >_<)

ALL GLORY TO MIENSHAO

Last Edited By: Cacapulse Jul 22 11 5:20 PM. Edited 1 times.

poketamer94

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Jul 22 11 8:45 PM

I have something to say: true they don't look like komodo dragons or salamanders, but honestly, they look good to me. Me: I probably couldn't have drawn better than Salamance Tamer. So, please, I will ask very nicely: stop critizicing Salamance Tamer's drawings. Were here to help with Pokemon ideas, not to see who can draw better...

Cacapulse

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Jul 22 11 9:33 PM

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Ugh.

Nobody said that they can draw these pokemon better. Criticism is an integral part of the process to "help with pokemon ideas"; no improvements can be made without it. We can't just leave out some part of the suggestion from criticism just because they look good for a few people. Our goal here is to make an idea presentable to everyone.

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