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oran5777

The lost the sneaky and the distraction.

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Jun 30 11 12:37 PM

Tags : lost, sneaky, distraction

Name: Weramai
Classification: the lost Pokemon
Type: Psychic/Dark
HT: 3 feet 6 inches
WT: 47 pounds
Description: a humanoid pokemon, it has small claws and is bipedal

Pokedex Entries:
-Dex A: This pokemon has a terrible sense of direction, because of this it is always getting lost. 91 characters

-Dex B:This pokemon gets lost often, but still tries to convince others to follow it as it likes company. 98
Ability: Misdirection*
Evolution: evolves into Heraiam (hereheer) by lvl up holding GPS*
Moveset:
--- Scratch
--- Growl
lvl 8 Confusion
lvl 13 Follow Me
lvl 18 Bide
lvl 24 Reflect
lvl 28 Psy Orb
lvl 34 Nullify
lvl 40 Psy Bolt
lvl 44 Clone
lvl 55 Recall
lvl 60 Psychic

Stats:
HP: 40
A: 30
D: 31
SA: 70
SD: 55
SPD: 40
T: 266

Now for its evolutions:

Name: Heeraiam
Classification: Distracting Pokemon
Type: Light/Dark
HT: 3 feet 7 inches
WT: 48 pounds
Description: has about the same build as Weramai (Wherewer) but slightly taller and has smaller claws.

Pokedex Entries:
-Dex A: It constantly seeks attention and always shouts out where it is, this is often very annoying. 94 characters

-Dex B: Anytime anyone is around this pokemon will try everything to gain their attention, including harm. 100 on the dot
Ability: Attention Grab*
Evolution: evolves from Wherewer by level up with GPS*
Moveset:

Movelist:
--- Covet
--- Cuddle
--- Double Team
lvl 9 Encore
lvl 13 Follow Me
lvl 19 Radiant Beam
lvl 25 Light Screen
lvl 29 Dancing Light
lvl 35 Flare
lvl 41 Shine Sabre
lvl 45 Clone
lvl 50 Luster Flash
lvl 55 Recall
lvl 61 Luster burst

Stats:
HP: 106
A: 80
D: 65
SA: 100
SD: 65
SPD: 90
T: 506

Name: Nawtheer
Classification: Sneaky Pokemon
Type: Dark
HT: 3 feet 5 inches
WT: 45 pounds
Description: a very dark purple humanoid bipedal it has longer claws than Weramai (Wherewer) and much longer claws than Heeraiam (Hereheer).

I would like some better art for the whole set, the images I have up are the first sketches.
Pokedex Entries:
-Dex A: This pokemon loves to sneak around, often you dont see it unless it wants you to which is rare. 98 characters

-Dex B: This pokemon watches from the shadows, it spots you long before you even think you have seen it. 100 on the dot again
Ability: Sneaky*
Evolution: Splits off of Heeraiam (Hereheer) when Weramai (Wherewer) evolves if there is an open slot in the party and an extra pokeball.
Moveset:
--- Bite
--- Hide
--- Slash
--- Pursuit
lvl 9 Sneak Up
lvl 14 Thief
lvl 19 Stealth
lvl 25 Clone
lvl 29 Midnight
lvl 35 Night Slash
lvl 41 Targeting
lvl 45 Bribe
lvl 50 Knock off
lvl 56 Recall
lvl 61 Shadow Ray

Stats:
HP: 100
A: 41
D: 60
SA: 120
SD: 65
SPD: 120
T: 506

Misdirection: causes the opponent to lose 5 accuracy and for the pokemon with the ability to lose 10.
Attention Grab: causes the opponent to only attack the pokemon with this ability in a double battle.
Sneaky: causes the opponent to lose 20 accuracy if it targets the pokemon with this ability.

GPS: allows for an extremely detailed map of the users surroundings, boosts accuracy by 5

Nawtheer's habitat is towns and cities.
Weramai's habitat is towns and cities
Heeraiam's habitat is towns and cities
(Edit: changed their names and added habitat, dreamworld abilities coming soon.)

Last Edited By: oran5777 Jul 4 11 4:55 AM. Edited 9 times.

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Rahjet

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Jun 30 11 12:43 PM

Try to make the dexes highlight different things about each one, instead of saying the same or a similar thing a different way from its other dex. What if you called the split-evo Nawtheer (corruption of not here) or Ovuhderr (corruption of over there)?

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

oran5777

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Jun 30 11 12:49 PM

It's not really a split evo, more of a nincada into shedinja and ninjask type thing. I'll think about the names. And I'll work on the dexes later.

Cacapulse

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Jun 30 11 3:27 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

I love those names. :3 So nostalgic sounding.

My criticism for these is that there's little coherence between the three pokemon even though they're related. The others actually strike me as being Dark-types as well.

ALL GLORY TO MIENSHAO

Last Edited By: Cacapulse Jun 30 11 6:50 PM. Edited 1 times.

oran5777

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Jun 30 11 4:54 PM

Hmm, maybe... I'll sleep on it tonight.

Rahjet

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Jul 1 11 3:26 AM

I know it is, oran, I just have no idea what to call that type of evolution XD. For stats what about a parallel to the Nincada line? Something like:
Weramai (Wherewer)
HP: 40
A: 30
D: 31
SA: 70
SD: 55
SPD: 40
T: 266
Heeraiam (Hereheer)
HP: 106
A: 80
D: 65
SA: 100
SD: 65
SPD: 90
T: 506
Nawtheer
HP: 100
A: 41
D: 60
SA: 120
SD: 65
SPD: 120
T: 506 (Shedinja has Wonder Guard so we'll just make this even to the other evo)

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

oran5777

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Jul 1 11 7:34 AM

Seems good, I'll edit.

poketamer94

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Jul 1 11 11:40 AM

So wait, ur images won't work 2, or is it just your drawings?
btw, nice suggestions!

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oran5777

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Jul 3 11 3:15 AM

Its the images, I tried posting one to my DA account but it still wouldn't work.

SCD

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Jul 3 11 5:42 AM

PF Executive

I figure I may as well not stay silent: while the concept is sound, I really don't like the moves you've given them, you didn't seem to give much thought into keeping their theme consistent. I'll go through in order:

Weramai: You have put Psychic, a power 90 move, at level 34, in-between the power 45 Psy Bolt and the power 40 Psy Orb. Also having them all so close together makes learning them somewhat redundant, as you have precious little time in which to appreciate one before replacing it with another. I suggest you rearrange them; with Psy Orb at 28, Nullify at 34, Psy Bolt at 40, and Psychic at 60 (replacing Spirit Bomb entirely, I can't see any immense spirituality present in this pokemon, nor at such a low evolution stage). Also, since getting lost is it's thing, I think it should have Amnesia to replace Reflect.

Heeriam: the direction basis that this line uses doesn't really continue here, so I suggest it learns Follow Me, Clone, and Recall at the same levels Weramai does, replacing GuidingLight (HM move anyway) and Rainbow (probably a signature move of those color-based dragons). Solais and Holy shield should really be reserved for more 'heavenly' Pokemon than this one. Dancinglight and Flare would be more thematic I think. Luster flash should be learned a bit earlier too, like level 35.

Nawtheer: what I said about Follow Me, Clone and Recall should also apply to this one. I can't see a sneaky dark-type knowing Black Hole, since the things that have so far learned it contain terrible energies, are cosmological phenomena, or have cavernous spaces inside them, and I'm pretty sure Faintfear is the signature move of Phobain and Depanos. Targeting and Bribe I think would be much more appropriate.

If you feel the need to talk these suggestions over with me more privately, find me on the PF IRC channel. I'm on usually between 12:00 and 00:00 GMT. I may also be able to help you with your picture problem if you're still having trouble

oran5777

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Jul 3 11 6:31 PM

The reason I am not giving Nawtheer follow me is because that's the last thing it wants you to do. Oh and I did some research and I think that the Nincada evolution method is called a party affected evolution.

Last Edited By: oran5777 Jul 4 11 5:08 AM. Edited 1 times.

Chaocobo

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Jul 7 11 8:17 PM

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This is really cute!

I love the theme.

But I think instead of them being evolutions, they can could just be a set? XD (ex. Plusle + Minun)

They just don't seem to fit together as an evolution line imo.

YAY! I made a sprite for me! 0_o
I like making sprites.

Cacapulse

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Jul 8 11 12:42 AM

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^ Pretty good suggestion for this... suggestion!
That could fix the coherence issues I was talking about. What do you think oran?

ALL GLORY TO MIENSHAO

oran5777

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Jul 19 11 6:25 AM

Sounds good. Anything else?

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