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BonzaiRob

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Posts: 2646

Jun 24 11 5:58 AM

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JDL spoke unfairly when he said people hate you, so I'm glad you didn't leave.
Some pointers, since you're making an effort now:
• Capital letters go at the start of a sentence, on the pronoun I (I'm, I'll, etc.), and on names. You don't capitalise all nouns unless you're German.
• Read more books. That will help you more than anything else. Find a series that you enjoy; Harry Potter would be a good start.
• Learn to separate criticism of your suggestions from criticism of you as a person. Taking other people's advice is a difficult skill to master.
• We are all works in progress; everyone has room to improve. Don't feel bad about it, just keep trying! That's what everyone else does.

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BonzaiRob

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Jun 24 11 12:42 PM

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After discussing it in the Staff Room, due to flaming another user, JDLJDL and Flarsable have been given a strike each. It would have been more if mr_bean_567 had not returned.

ShadowX

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Posts: 109

Jun 25 11 12:26 AM

@ flarasable i wouldn't use someones suggestion that seem's good on the site PokemonX and post it here. (either way I have two suggestions up)

Shadow is my aura.

mr bean 567

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Posts: 213

Jun 25 11 2:56 PM

I was so close to leaving im still thinking about it now, but thanks Bonzai for all your nice comments and yes I will fix up all me grammar and spelling.

two Fan Made pokemon made by pokemon vortex

Last Edited By: mr bean 567 Jun 25 11 2:59 PM. Edited 1 times.

mr bean 567

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Posts: 213

Jun 25 11 3:01 PM

Thanks I will continue to try my best at all my suggestions. I need help with my website can you help me Bonzai?

two Fan Made pokemon made by pokemon vortex

Last Edited By: mr bean 567 Jun 25 11 3:04 PM. Edited 1 times.

Jigglyclops

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Posts: 1261

Jun 25 11 11:15 PM

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One more thing mrbean567, please do not double post. If you want to say something else it is suggested that you click on "Edit" link right below your avatar.

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mr bean 567

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Jun 25 11 11:29 PM

I don't do it offen. Its just some times the things I say don't fit with the some of the other stuff I say y'know what I mean?

two Fan Made pokemon made by pokemon vortex

Rahjet

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Posts: 1032

Jun 26 11 6:03 AM

That's still no excuse. Just click Edit and then highlight whatever new information or comment you have by placing "EDIT:" before the aforementioned text.

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

BonzaiRob

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Posts: 2646

Jun 28 11 4:26 AM

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Sorry man, I'm too busy for anything in depth. I can answer some questions, that's about it.
And what Jiggly and Rahjet said is correct; if you're worried about the two posts being different, just make a note that it's an edit.

oran5777

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