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Jigglyclops

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Apr 9 11 12:47 AM

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Well, note that I didn't say it was, but from where I see it, it needs to stand out more by itself than by those two pokémon's attributes. What does this pokémon have that makes it unique? That is, different from all pokémon you can think of?

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Cacapulse

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Apr 9 11 1:39 AM

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The formatting is pretty decent and complete, no complaints there. My issue here is that you say it isn't a mix between Honchkrow and Chatot, but it still seems like it. The metronome tail is probably the biggest offender, as it renders the originality of its appearance null. My suggestion here is replacing that with another shape and/or symbol associated with sound/music. Overall though this one is pretty solid.

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offthehook

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Apr 9 11 10:23 AM

I'm glad were getting something more reasonable than all the epic dragons and stuff we've been getting lately. Also isn't cacophony that unused ability from 3rd gen? Correct me if I'm wrong but I always thought that was kind of an off limits ability because it was cut out of coding in the 4th gen

Flarsable

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Apr 9 11 11:13 AM

Hence why it's bold. PF revived it and used it on Magtie and Magcry.

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offthehook

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Apr 9 11 3:08 PM

aha! That makes sense. I didn't realise that. Anyways about the suggestion, it really needs something in the design that kind of brings the point acrossed that its a loud annoying bird. Something that diffrentiates it from nevermore and honchcrow and chatot. Like a beard or something. Okay maybe not a beard but soemthing else like a big beak that looks like a loudspeaker or something. I'm just throwing things around here but I think you get my point. Its actually the same point thats been brought up twice. Oh well

JDLJDL

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Apr 9 11 4:13 PM

This seems a bit too similar to Murkrow/Honchkrow, yes.

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Flarsable

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Apr 9 11 9:07 PM

And Magtie and Magcry. While the suggestion doesn't have any magpie-related looks to it, it is a loud bird with the ability Cacophony, which again, was specifically revived for them.

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Rahjet

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Apr 10 11 10:33 AM

What if the tail feathers were a bunch of maracas?

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

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-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

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Cacapulse

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Apr 10 11 6:53 PM

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Hmmm... Let's think about it this way, which musical instrument can be considered to produce the most annoying sound? Let's base the design off that.

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Coolsteph

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Apr 10 11 7:50 PM

The vuvuzela, of course. I am glad we do not need to hear it anymore, but it is widely known as a highly annoying instrument.

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JDLJDL

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Apr 10 11 7:58 PM

Yes, vuvuzela.
Or unwanted Salsa music?

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Flarsable

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Apr 10 11 8:14 PM

Or a one-man band?

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Unova Star

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Apr 15 11 3:36 AM

How about a microphone inside its beak, make the tail have two cow bells instead, and remove the hat? Is it workable then?

Cacapulse

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Apr 15 11 6:43 PM

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Microphones... and cowbells? You need to think a little more organic, and less randomly.

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Unova Star

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Apr 17 11 6:58 AM

if i gave it a vuvuzela, where would i put it? Also, for the tail, how about three tail feathers; one red, one blue, and one yellow, with red being the top feather, blue the middle one and yellow the bottom feather. And thirdly, should i keep the hat, or should i scrap the hat?

Unova Star

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Apr 21 11 4:38 AM

Forgot to mention this earlier, because i completely forgot about when i was posting it; it was supposed to be an opposite to chatot, which was why i made it similar to chatot. If that doesn't help then i'll remind you about the illumise/volbeat pair: almost similar in appearance, with volbeat having (i think) a better moveset.

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Apr 21 11 7:35 PM

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Oh, so you intended it to be a counterpart of sorts. That makes it much easier to finalize the design.

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JDLJDL

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Apr 21 11 8:31 PM

The beak could be a reversed vuvuzela.

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Rahjet

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Apr 22 11 7:10 AM

The wings could look like accordions?

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

tootyfruity66

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Apr 22 11 9:30 AM

To me, and this is just my own opinion, but it seems as if you took two or three existing pokemon and fuzed em.

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