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Flarsable

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Mar 1 11 8:46 PM

Wow. I'm impressed. You've have everything you need, and reasons behind all of it, and you actually read the rules. Lots of people have that problem is that they don't read the guidelines. Happiness works normally here, you can make branched evolutions, and Dream World abilities are applicable. the only criticism I could possibly give to such a detailed suggestion (this is...simply amazing for people who suggest Pokemon as one of their first few posts (usually their first)) is that it doesn't really have a basis and so it doesn't look related to Lustar going on description only. And the eye in mouth thing reminds me of Jirachi (which looks kind of like a star... hm.)

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Devotchka

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Mar 1 11 9:02 PM

Thank you very much for the compliment!

I didn't just want to throw something out there with no supprot. Granted, the move thing might have been a little excesive, but I figured I should give reasons for a dark/wind poke'mon learning ice type moves amoung other things.

What I was kidna going for was with Crystar being the holy poke'mon, I kinda wanted Bekenastro to be like its counterpart. Not, necessarirly devil/demon ish, but the opposite of a holy being maybe that of something evil or foul. As for the relationship with Lustar, I know its far fetched but I was thinking maybe its streamers become the appendages, while the star body becomes more human like, each point becoming a limb? (head, legs, arms?) Does that make any sense?

Again, thanks for the positive comments. Even if this doesn't get approved I'm glad I am on a good start.

Rahjet

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Mar 2 11 2:51 PM

Welcome to PF Devotchka! This is certainly one of the single most impressively complete suggestions I have ever had the pleasure of reading. AND on top of that, it is your first one. This is incredible IMHO. I can see it in my head pretty vividly, but I have to agree with the Flars-y One it does not seem like a Lustar evo to me. Perhaps you could give it a pre-evo of its own, maybe a Dark/Ice-type to help with the move justification for clarity's sake? Or it would surely be a great standalone, too. I hope I don't have any nightmares with this thing attacking me in them... *shudders*

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The Sawyer Generation

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Mar 2 11 4:00 PM

I would also like to welcome you. I would like to say that this whould be a great stand alone. Also, the whole meaning of its existance tells me that that it should probobly be a non-gender pokemon that can only mate with a ditto.

Devotchka

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Mar 2 11 6:09 PM

Thank both Sawyer and Rahjet for the compliments. I'm glad to have good start here

Happy my idea forms an image in your head: my words are much better over art skills. I can't draw but flat things :'( Now you mention it, I see Lustar not related as hoped.

But I think idea might be ok alone. Or maybe, it can have a child of the opposite. Like Manaphy, but instead of something like that, it breeds the purity of humanity. While Bekenastro is the darkness of humanity, this "child" is the little ounce of sentience become the guardians of the humans and pokemon? Not like, a deity guardian, but watching all over those of good grace...Maybe changed Bekenastro to Dark/Ice (darkness and cold-hearted cruelty) and the "child" be Light/Wind (purity and 'breathing' hope into others?...)
-Maybe make it how Bekenastro can breed this 'baby' of light when at a certain place of purity (the lighthouse maybe, or something like that?) but of course after having escaped from Bekenastro, the 'baby' no longer wants to return to the fear and darkness so it cannot evolve into Bekenastro...not sure if that would work or not.

If it's Ditto only, what would that make egg groups?

@Rahjet, apology if it gives you nightmares xD That wasn't my intention, but I'm glad words are getting something vivid across

Zoroark

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Mar 3 11 4:50 AM

Welcome to Pf Devotchka! This pokemon sounds cool and evil. No wait it is EVIL! Gaw haw haw haw haw! Nice work.

Void

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Mar 3 11 6:22 AM

Welcome to PF, Devotchka! I know this has been said before, but this is one of the most impressive and complete suggestions I've seen in my short time here, as well as being like something out of a high-budget horror movie. As for egg groups, it would still be Mineral and Indeterminate, just genderless. However, Sadism will have to be replaced, seeing as it's TM-exclusive. Might I suggest Black Hole as a substitute? In closing, welcome, and kudos on your first suggestion.

Only Always

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Mar 3 11 9:12 PM

Aw, I wish I had your writing skills...

Excellent fakemon, by the way.

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Cacapulse

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Mar 3 11 9:47 PM

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Just curious though, what was the inspiration for this really, really good example of Nightmare Fuel?

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elementalpenguin

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Mar 3 11 11:18 PM

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Good job. That's all I have to say. I love seeing suggestions this complete. c:
Oh, and welcome to PF.

Hope you stay for a while! We like people like you.

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Devotchka

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Mar 4 11 1:41 PM

@Cacapule: A horror movie marathon, with primary influencess from Shutter, A Tale of Two Sisters & One Missed Call, as well as being medicated with Vicodin & Morphine after surgery

Nightmare fuel? I hope you're not thinking about Bekenastro before you go to bed xD

@everyone else. Thanks for all the compliments. I'm glad that I have a good start to an idea.

I hope I can continue to push this idea into submissions.

Cacapulse

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Mar 4 11 7:17 PM

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Oh yes. Asian Horror. Now I love this... creature, even more.

Those mouth-eyes are from the One Missed Call poster amirite?

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Only Always

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Mar 5 11 12:30 PM

Oh god, I absolutely HATE that poster.

It gives me nightmares. D:

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Jigglyclops

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Mar 5 11 1:01 PM

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My god! I absolutely enjoy imagining that creature in a pokémon game! It should be great both defeating it AND HAVING IT! I really gotta compliment your effort on detailing your idea and I'm also glad it has been already.

I really, REALLY hope this gets approved in the DS generation.

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Devotchka

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Mar 6 11 11:09 AM

@Cacapulse, yep, exactly what it's from. That was the first thing I watched...a very bad choice at 1 in the morning X.x I truly am glad you like the idea.

Glad my writing skills might be able to go somewhere xD

@Only Always, I didn't see the promotional poster until after the movie, which actually scared me more xD I agree with you on why you don't like the poster.

@Jigglyclops, Thanks for the compliment. As do I hope that Bekenastro will get approved for Pokefactory's DS generation.

BHumphr9

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Mar 6 11 11:28 AM

There is a very small chance that it will not get approved.(which means theres a gihugerous chance that it will get approved.)

(oh, and ps. At times I am the same person as The Sawyer Generation. I just wanted to let you know that.)

Devotchka

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Mar 22 11 1:07 PM

I don't know if I'm allowed to do this, but any chance would any else be able to give their input on my idea? (If not I can delete this post kindly).

Void

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Mar 22 11 5:25 PM

All I can offer are move suggestions. I can think of Malice Eater, Hex Claw, Frost Breath, and possibly Sulfur Plume.

Tankesha

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Mar 22 11 6:30 PM

No, don't this is an amazing idea I love all the description.

Shining ShinE

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Mar 23 11 11:05 AM

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Ah, like Cacapulse and EP have already said, great job! A well-thought out suggestion with complete info; very nice! At first sight, the move list might be a bit too long; that was something that struck me.
Also, I was going to suggest it should have a pre-evo to make it less 'legendary', but I think I agree with the others that it works nicely as a stand-alone.

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