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patricol

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Feb 16 11 6:05 AM

Its name is too long, but forr a first suggestion it's good.

My Suggestions:

Duckiducky (DS#037)
Rubbarvaz (DS#038)
Larvyre (Community DS#039)
Pupyre (Community DS#040)
Lepradu (DS#150)

Pollutross (DS #180)

Jibayuna (DS #199 Legendary Contest winner)

Bayubisa (DS #200 Legendary Contest winner)
Torchild
Lightorch
Destorch
Phashift(Community)

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Coolsteph

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Feb 16 11 11:20 AM

Define "reptilian." I think that means lizardlike, but it could also mean snakelike or even saurian. Is its body most like an iguana, goanna (Australian monitor lizard) anole...?

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

TheNoob

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Posts: 568

Feb 16 11 12:17 PM

Boneroar..... *snicker* Boneroar..........

HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

It looks like a good idea, but you'll really need to work it. We can gladly help people smooth the edges on their suggestions.

Coolsteph

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Feb 16 11 2:29 PM

(To prevent such immature jokes as demonstrated above) How about Marroar? Marrow (bone insides) + roar, and also has some resemblance to 'marauder' or 'murderer.'

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

The Chimera Virus

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Posts: 497

Feb 16 11 2:59 PM

I revised/redid the dexes for you.

Dex 1: It appears to be just a skeleton, yet, in reality an invisible layer of armor covers its body.

Dex 2: Although rarely seen, its presence signals the impending extinction of a certain Pokemon species.

FoxOfWar

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Feb 17 11 5:16 AM

From a purely visual standpoint, blood shot eyes make no sense on a creature that is purely bone.

Oh, and those stats are obscenely high. For perspective: anything over 100 is already considered pretty high stat for a non-legendary.

Move list could use some fleshing out. For a pokemon that has a lot of similar moves(I would think), take a look at what Feraligatr, Sandslash or Kabutops learns, dash it with a few choice ghost moves and possibly a few PF moves. Add some creativity, a dose of some moves you just like, mix well. Don't shake though, that makes for jumbled movelists and an upset tummy.

(Sorry that I've been AFK from here btw, been avoiding B/W spoilers like the bubonic plague.)

When life gives you lemons, you steal the sugar and put it on salt shakers.

Right?

The Chimera Virus

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Feb 17 11 5:44 AM

I am always willing to revise and create movelists, if you're interested.

Zoroark

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Feb 17 11 8:26 AM

sure I'm interested

The Chimera Virus

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Feb 17 11 9:25 AM

OK... I have taken the liberty of making this a recap post.

Marroar (Marrow+Roar)
Skeleton PKMN
Type: Ghost
Ability: Twilight
Height: 7' 05"
Weight: 50 lbs.

Dex 1: It appears to be just a skeleton, yet, in reality an invisible layer of armor covers its body.
Dex 2: Although rarely seen, its presence signals the impending extinction of a certain Pokemon species.

Moves:

1 Nibble

1 Growl

9 Night Shade

14 Bite

17 Protect

22 Bone Rush

27 Roar

30 Crunch

35 Shadow Ball

38 Calcify

43 Shadow Claw

49 Distort

55 Resurrect

60 Fossilize

Description: A large skeleton with crocodile-like features.

Stats:
HP: 80
Attack: 90
Defense: 97
Special Attack: 68
Special Defense: 80
Speed: 70
Total: 485

I redid the moveset utterly. I also redid stats to something more realistic.

Last Edited By: The Chimera Virus Feb 17 11 9:29 AM. Edited 1 times.

Zoroark

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Feb 17 11 11:15 AM

It's all done, How dose it look. will it be approved?

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DeckuZora

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Feb 17 11 11:58 AM

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It seems quite approvable. Now is the time you wait for us (the staff) to get to your suggestion. We're a two months behind, but considering the new rate of approvals is about 3/week, we should catch up (unless everyone suddenly posts 2 evolutionary lines all at once. I will personally hunt down any who attempt that >>)

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Coolsteph

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Feb 17 11 12:57 PM

Zoroark, I would have offered to present concept art earlier, but Antarctros gave me a concept art limit---basically, no giving concept art to suggestions with no future. However, now that a staff member has claimed this can be approved, might I offer my concept art? It was based on the outdated description in which you did not specify it was bipedal, however.

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Zoroark

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Feb 17 11 12:58 PM

Sure. : )

Coolsteph

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Feb 17 11 3:19 PM

Marroar Concept Art:
(removed to adhere to Staff)
Since too many Pokémon (including PF ones) are based on generic crocodiles, this one is based on a Phillipine crocodile specifically, although you cannot tell due to its huge jaw. Since it seemed blood-streaked eyes for something that was made of bones would be unrealistic, it instead has red streaks on the 'shadow surface' of its eyes, like how some geckos have stripes on their eyes. I based this on a picture of a crocodile skeleton, although I did simplify it so it would be easier to render.
(Staff, if you object to this, please delete this post. I thought it would be acceptable to add because DeckuZora thought positively of it.)

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Last Edited By: Coolsteph Feb 22 11 5:46 AM. Edited 1 times.

DeckuZora

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Feb 17 11 10:11 PM

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*shrugs* it's good to practice and get feedback for you, coolsteph, the only reason Antarctross wanted that limit placed on you is that he and ShinE feared you would alter the original suggester's description based on your sketch, or that people would expect your sketch to be used just because that is what they are used to. In other words, we don't mind you drawing concept art for other people, but we'd like the original suggester to A) give you permission, and B) have his own original description. Meantime though, stick to what Antarctross says.

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Zoroark

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Feb 18 11 4:44 AM

looks like a cool drawing of him. Thanks. I think Marroar will be a success

Coolsteph

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Feb 18 11 7:34 AM

Zoroark, did you alter your description based on my art? You are not supposed to do that; that is the reason, as DeckuZora described, why the limit was imposed on me by Antarctros.

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

Zoroark

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Feb 18 11 8:22 AM

Since that the concept art of Marroar showed him on four legs instead of 2 like in the description, I deiced to go with four legs so sorry about changing the description of him.

The Chimera Virus

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Feb 18 11 9:19 AM