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cuddles24

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Jan 5 11 4:39 PM

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Name: Whirlraith (WHIRLpool+wRAITH)
Whirlpool Pokemon
Height: 5'5''
Weight: 116 lbs
Type: Water/Ghost
Description: A grayish-blue humanoid. Its body is heavily muscled. Four fingers on each hand. Feet are blocky with no toes. Its head has no face. The arms open in an wide, DNA-like spiral, similar to Deoxys' arms.
Dex 1: In old times, it was thought to create whirlpools and drag in unlucky sailors.
Dex 2: none yet
Evolution: none
Abilities: Storm Drain/Aftermath
Gender Ratio: 50% male, 50% female
Gender Differences: none
Habitat: rapid-moving bodies of water
Moves: (these don't have levels yet, I'll need help on them)
-Whirlpool
-Shadow Punch
-Peril Tomb
-Spindrift
-Vicious Suck
-Aqua Ring
-Curse

So, what do you think?

Last Edited By: cuddles24 Jan 12 11 3:43 PM. Edited 1 time.

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The Chimera Virus

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Jan 5 11 8:29 PM

This has potential! However, I would suggest having it look different for a female. I mean it would add some variety to this plus there's not many Pokemon with gender differences, well, overtly noticeable ones, here at PF.

So, I dolled up a moveset for ya.

Moves:
1 Whirlpool
6 Curse
10 Cheer Up
17 Vicious Suck
23 Shadow Punch
30 Aqua Ring
35 Spindrift
41 Peril Tomb
46 Doom Crux
52 Hydro Pump
56 Destiny Bond

Does this look acceptable?

sovereignofsilence667

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Jan 6 11 1:03 PM

Here's one I made, using TCV's as a base:

-- Whirlpool
-- Vicious Suck
-- Leer
6 Curse
10 Water Gun
13 Vapor Wall
17 Capsize
19 MacabreDance
23 Water Pulse
26 Aqua Ring
30 Shadow Claw
33 Doom Crux
35 Spindrift
39 Rain Dance
41 Peril Tomb
46 Destiny Bond
52 Hydro Pump
56 Water Cage
66 Ripcurl

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cuddles24

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Jan 7 11 5:51 PM

@Chimera- Thanks for the moveset! As for gender differences, I'll probably need some help. Whirlraith isn't the most detailed Pokemon, so it'll be a bit difficult.
@sovereign- The moveset's awesome, but the intervals are a bit weird. Also, why's Shadow Claw in there?

Flarsable

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Jan 7 11 9:32 PM

Isn't Vicious Suck where you suck the foe's life through water, not creating a strong whirlpool?

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cuddles24

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Jan 8 11 1:55 PM

@Flarsable- It doesn't say whether or not Vicious Suck is a whirlpool or not, but I'm keeping it on just the same. Even if it is sucking life, it fits the Ghost part.

sovereignofsilence667

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Jan 8 11 2:28 PM

If it is a Ghost-Type and it has hands, then why doesn't it make sense for it to learn Shadow Claw. Also, what about the intervals is "weird"?

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cuddles24

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Jan 8 11 7:18 PM

@sovereign- Well, the hands are more blocky, and not really claws. It's sort of like scratching something with the flat side of a brick. As for the increments, it goes: 6, 4, 3, 4, 2, 4, 3, 4, 3, 2, 4, 2, 6, 6, 4, 10. I'm not seeing a pattern there.

Cacapulse

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Jan 8 11 7:54 PM

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Well, Cuddles(the HTF Fan?) does have a point, but we can always fix that movelist when its under reviewal though.

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elementalpenguin

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Jan 8 11 9:32 PM

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cuddles24 wrote:
As for the increments, it goes: 6, 4, 3, 4, 2, 4, 3, 4, 3, 2, 4, 2, 6, 6, 4, 10. I'm not seeing a pattern there.

There is not supposed to be a pattern.

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Cacapulse

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Jan 8 11 9:47 PM

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On the contrary, there is. This isn't that obvious with earlier generations, as there have been numerous changes implemented through the games. Usually, it goes: A B A B... or A A A A.... etc. There have been more 'exotic' ones, but most—if not all—level-up move levels follow some sort of pattern.

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The Chimera Virus

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Jan 9 11 10:19 AM

I don't do patterns, really, I just go with whatever. Nothing too close or too far.

cuddles24

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Jan 10 11 6:10 PM

@cacapulse- yeah i guess your right thanks
@evervyone-besides the move levels and moves what do you guys think of the pokemon itself any sugestions to improve it

Coolsteph

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Jan 10 11 9:02 PM

Here, some artwork of it.

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

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cuddles24

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Jan 11 11 1:08 PM

@Coolsteph-thanks but sorry i for got to add it has a neck and a head but still aswome

Xer0

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Jan 11 11 3:09 PM

Okay, this has been killing me, sorry. But isn't this based on the Whirlpooh from the novel The Watsons Go to Birmingham? Even if it is - especially if it is - it's a cool idea, but I just need to know >.<"

*hated that book*

If not, maybe more should be done to make the idea more than a ... gray shadow ...

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Therislash

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Jan 11 11 7:19 PM

His forearms should spiral in an open, wide dna spiral in which he can create spirals of motion

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Flarsable

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Jan 11 11 7:21 PM

Like Deoxys?

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The Chimera Virus

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Jan 11 11 7:34 PM

Xer0 wrote:
Okay, this has been killing me, sorry. But isn't this based on the Whirlpooh from the novel The Watsons Go to Birmingham? Even if it is - especially if it is - it's a cool idea, but I just need to know >.<"

*hated that book*

If not, maybe more should be done to make the idea more than a ... gray shadow ...

I REMEMBER THAT BOOK! OMFG! I'm actually from around Detroit.

Therislash

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Jan 11 11 7:42 PM

@flarsy sort of, but it joins again as a hand to create an uncoiled pod-shape

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cuddles24

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Jan 12 11 1:54 PM

@Xero-yes thats were i go t it from but i added a little more ditale instead of just a bunch of cinder blocks put toughter and i made it taller i also changed its color from grey to a bluish grey

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