skiier pokemon in Suggest A Pokémon Forum

RSS
Email

0 Points

<< Previous Topic Next Topic >>

skiier pokemon

Author

Comment

firedarkshay

skiier pokemon

Lead

[-]

Registered User

Posts: 4

Jan 2 11 11:50 AM

Tags : None

Name: polarch, origin: Pole+ Monarch
Pokedex type: The Skier Pokemon
Height: 5 feet and 2 inches.(sorry new at this)
Weight:100 Ilbs
Type: Pure Ice
Description:Looks basicly like a Human only with Ski googles for eyes, Ski poles for hands, And skis for feet.
Pokedex entry: This pokemon is always found on top of tall mountians , skiing up and down it. This pokemon climbs up mountains using it's strong arms to pull itself to the top in order to ski it's way down.
This pokemon does not evolve.
Special abilities: Snow warning/ Snow cloak
Moves: Powder snow level:0
Hail:level 10
Headbut: level 15
Snowball: level 17
Double team: level 20
Snowboard: level 30( am I allowed to make it naturally learn an HM?)
Sword edge: Level 40
Crystal Cut: Level 50
Snow fort: Level 55
Blizzard level :Level 60
Avalanche: level 63
Frost Cannon:Level 65
Frost tower: level 70
Sheer Cold :Level: 80
Glacier: level 90
Habitat: tall mountain
Base stats:HP: 30
Attack:40
Defense:50
Sp. attack:60
Sp. Defence: 70
Speed: 90

Advertisement
	Remove this ad Remove this ad

greek freak

[-]

Suggestions Board Regular

Posts: 1452

Jan 2 11 12:06 PM

Okay, first off, this is way, way, way, way, way too human. I'd suggest changing it from a human to say, a polar bear. Or maybe an ice-skater penguin. Anything besides a human.

Next, nothing besides a legendary learns a move higher than about 85. And speaking of moves, that move list is way to . . . pattern-ish for my liking. And it should learn some more variety of types. Ice- and normal-type moves only is boring.

Lastly, somebody else handle this. I'm not much use.

I am an artist, although a pathetic one. Check out my fakemon, Zelda, Harry Potter, and other types of art on my dA profile, found here: http://euclidofthexenons.deviantart.com/

I read for fun and entertainment, not because I have to. When bored, I flip through a dictionary. I hope to write a 300+ page novel one day, and have gathered several ideas.

I play Pokemon for fun and for inspiration. Not to trade with unfamiliar people or battle them over the Internet.

Celebrate, ~~peasant,~~ as the ~~beginning~~ end of my ~~pathetic~~ epic post has been ~~started~~ reached.

firedarkshay

[-]

Registered User

Posts: 4

Jan 2 11 12:11 PM

hey, it's my first try, cut me some slack

Flarsable

[-]

Suggestions Board Regular

Posts: 8827

Jan 2 11 1:29 PM

It may be your first try at making a Pokemon, and I'm okay with that, but it's not your first try seeing a Pokemon, is it? Generally, it's best to base your movelist on another Pokemon in terms of level-wise (maybe Delibird?) and maybe look at some other suggestions (approved ones would be better) for a template, so-to-speak, for your Pokemon. Each Dex must be 85-100 characters, and the only tall mountain in Bombur is Mt. Pinacle, which is not a snowcap. So it will need a relocation to... somewhere. I'm not sure where, since the only icy places are a ton of glaciers, a forest, and a route between them, as well as a frozen bridge.

Award for Extreme Patience
Always hotter than the competition. I got the award for Braving the Marquee of Doom!

Coolsteph

[-]

Suggestions Board Regular

Posts: 1553

Jan 2 11 4:45 PM

I think this artwork should help. Humanoid, but not too much. Anything you that you want me to change in this?

How about these for Pokédex entries?
It spends its time making makeshift mountains with Powder Snow buildups, so it may ski upon them. (97)
With its strong arms, it climbs to the tops of slopes. Its path down is paved with glittering snow. (99)

Sableye, Lvl. 9 (approx.) (male)

Tiquail, Lvl. 7 (female)

Normgon, Lvl. 6 (female)

Sunny (Sunkern) Lvl. 7 (female)

Grubva, Lvl. 7 (male)

Dark Ariados is released.

Most recent battle: Against a Grubva

DeckuZora

[-]

Posts: 2318

Jan 2 11 6:21 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

I'm bringing the lack of snow-capped mountains up in the staff room. Don't change your dexes, wait for us to hit a decision. Meantime, fix the movelists and other info up a bit. I like coolsteph's design to be honest, but firedarkshay has the final word.

Oh, and instead of saying what you don't like, why don't some of you offer to fix his moveset? I would, but I'm busy with a NHD report. Still 1200 words short for some reason...

New Signature Pending...

elementalpenguin

[-]

Posts: 2712

Jan 2 11 6:32 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Alright! Here's some suggestions. First of all, the weight should be just below or above 100 lbs - exactly 100 is unnatural. Next, I like the concept of it as Coolsteph did it, as long as it's not too humanoid, a cool suggestion. I'll help with moves later. Abilities are perfect. As for stats, just making sure you know those are pitiful stats for a single stage. I'm fine wth that, just making sure you know. At least it's better than Luvdisk. XD
Also, as long as the HM really fits, as Snowboard does in this case, it can learn it.

[url=http://vdexproject.net/user.php?user=14678][img]http://vdexproject.net/p/14678/party.png[/img][/url]

Advertisement
	Remove this ad

DeckuZora

[-]

Posts: 2318

Jan 2 11 6:48 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Do help with those moves. Learning moves on every 10th level worries me to death.

Edit: ShinE pointed out, Bombur does have snowy peaks in the Majestic Mountain range. So don't change that.

New Signature Pending...

Last Edited By: DeckuZora Jan 3 11 2:59 PM. Edited 1 times.

The Chimera Virus

[-]

Suggestions Board Regular

Posts: 497

Jan 3 11 3:05 PM

Revised Moveset:
1 Growl
1 Powder Snow
1 Mud-Slap
6 Snowball
10 Double Team
17 Crybaby
23 Aurora Beam
28 Collect
28 Consume
35 Snowboard
39 Vapor Wall
41 Cold Snap
46 Frost Tower
54 Frost Cannon
60 Glacier

OK, made it more varied and interesting. Hope you don't mind. 15 moves total.

Last Edited By: The Chimera Virus Jan 3 11 3:08 PM. Edited 1 times.

elementalpenguin

[-]

Posts: 2712

Jan 4 11 12:18 AM

Pokémon Factory Worker