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Jigglyclops

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I'm looking forward to this pokémon as it's a nice type alternative (not counterpart) to the Spartic line. Just three things you should know:

1.- For the second dex (and the third one if we were to use it) remember that the 4th version of the pokédex never calls pokémon by their name, just "it". This is respected AND stated as a rule here in the PF so you need to change Glaciou to it.

2.- I think there is no mention of this anywhere in the rules but most 4 Gen dexes use two sentences for the dex, how about making it longer with "It is often seen releasing sparks" or another short sentence?

3.- The Heights and Weights are too rounded... meh I don't feel like correcting you on this; I never liked that restriction, I'll let another member do it.

Finally, I´m no welcome commitee but... Welcome to the Pokémon Factory!

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Hmm... I see what you mean. And it's honestly a rule that I can't refer to it by name? That's... meh. Not worth balking about. Will edit.

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Edited! Added some data into Dex 2 that sets up the possible Dex 3.

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I really like this suggestion, but there's a few things:

1- As far as I know, the Staff decides on a Pokemon's shiny coloration, not the suggestor.

2- If it's 1'4", and an electric chunk of ice, why is it less than 4 pounds?

Aside from that, this is one of the better suggestions I've seen in a while.

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Some of its moves are really overpowered. Try lv70 or so for Sheer Cold. Also, for a design suggestion, I think it should have a mime-like shape because its trapped in a translucent container. Also, Glaciou sounds like Glaceon, but im not sure if its a problem.

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Shiny Tiquil (Kiwi)
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Jigglyclops

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The mime shape isn't necessary, it could well resemble a sprite trapped in a crystal. Or for the Zelda fans out there, a fairy in a bottle.

Last Edited By: Jigglyclops Dec 5 10 12:18 PM. Edited 1 times.

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I was wondering about Sheer Cold. I will edit the move list to a less powerful, yet appropriately powered, Ice move.

On the design... I don't like the Mime idea. It just seems like I'm making an Ice/Electric Mr. Mime to me if I do that.

I can see where you're coming from on the name. Lets let the staff have more say on that?

On weight: It's more of an ice crystal than a chunk. Not very weighty, but it's thick enough to be OK against some attacks.

EDIT: Updated moves. Replaced Sheer Cold (which, I will note, 3 official Pokemon learn before level 50. One before Level 40. None of them are legendaries! Gasp! o.O) with Glacier. Moved it to 57. In between it now learns Frost Tower, which I wanted it to learn in the first place but put in Overdrive instead.

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You could make it evolve into an ice body with the electricity still inside if you wanted it to. It could be something like "Instead of trying to escape its icy prison, it now charges its ice body to move and uses it as armor." (100)

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

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I feel there are not enough single-form Pokemon. I would prefer if it didn't evolve. I'm not saying that in a future generation it couldn't get an evolution, but for now could we just leave it as a one stage Pokemon?

I probably sound difficult... I don't mean to if I am. It's not my intention.

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I feel this whole trapped thing is becoming clichéd. We have Sealuster, which is light trapped in darkness; a suggestion line where the first two are ghosts trapped in electricity (this is the Voltergeist line by the way), and there are others which are one thing inside another, that are not specifically said to be "trapped", such as Contron.

Also, it is not our fakes on Serebii, it is Serebii's found fakes with Dexes here that have been added to the site.

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Cliches work for movies, why not Pokemon? I mean, every generation has an electric rodent. That's becoming cliched.

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Fixed a grammatical error in Dex 3. Edited moves to number 15 total (because I'm OCD). Added Me First and Rage (because it's angry about its imprisonment!).

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You should stop double posting. Edit your posts instead.

My Suggestions:

Duckiducky (DS#037)
Rubbarvaz (DS#038)
Larvyre (Community DS#039)
Pupyre (Community DS#040)
Lepradu (DS#150)

Pollutross (DS #180)

Jibayuna (DS #199 Legendary Contest winner)

Bayubisa (DS #200 Legendary Contest winner)
Torchild
Lightorch
Destorch
Phashift(Community)

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Sorry. Some forums I'm on don't have a rule on double-posting.

Also, I'm a big fan of your Pokemon Duckiducky and Rubbarvaz!

So, what topic are the staff at? How long should it take them to review mine, or get to reviewing it? The suspense is killing me! Tongue

Last Edited By: The Chimera Virus Dec 7 10 11:52 AM. Edited 1 times.

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A long time. If you look in the Suggestions Under Review subforum, you'll notice one of my topics. This was suggested on March 15. it's not shown in that topic, because the original was actually here. You should just continue life as normal and eventually they'll get here.

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Ugh... >.<;

EDIT: Updated abilities to include a Dream World one.

LATER EDIT: Updated moves to replace Me First with Icy Floor, because let's face it, PF moves are so much more fun.

Last Edited By: The Chimera Virus Dec 13 10 8:36 AM. Edited 2 times.

Zoroark

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Magic type pokemon? NEVER HERD OF ONE.

The Chimera Virus

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Dude. Learn about PF's new types before you go around yelling.

Thanks!

The Sawyer Generation

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I have waited a while to say this but "You have put allmost everything one could put into one suggestion of a Pokemon, I would take a lot of hard work to make it even a little more descriptive. which is awsome.

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Aw, aren't you sweet. ^_^ Thanks. I have about 70 on backlog.

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