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Jul 15 10 11:45 AM

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Name: Denri

Pokedex Type: Static Dragon

Elemental Type: Electric

Weight: 19.8 lbs. Height: 2ft.

Description: This is a small four-legged shaymin-like creature. It is dark blue and yellow and covered with thin scaly armor. It has a large head relating to its body but the other limbs are in early development and are weak. Its tail is straight and yellow.

Pokedex Data: It can be found in tall trees, trying to catch lightning. It is closely guarded by older relatives.

Pokedex Data: Its cherubic appearance belies its ability to attack with up to 3,000 volts at full power.

Ability:Volt Absorb/Lightning Rod

Gender: 50/50

Gender Differences: None

Evolution: Evolves into Denkon starting at level 16.

Egg Groups: Monster/Dragon

Level Up Moves:

Start-Leer, Pound
7-Thundershock
9-Thunder Wave
15-Dragon Rage
17-Shock Wave
23-Dragon Dance
25-Protect
33-Thunderbolt
39-Dragon Pulse
54-Megavolt

Base Stats:
HP: 43 Atk: 35 Def: 41 SAtk: 65 SDef: 41 Spe: 72

EV Yield:
HP: 0 Atk: 0 Def: 0 SAtk: 0 SDef: 0 Spe: 1

Name: Denkon

Pokedex Type: Static Dragon

Elemental Types: Electric, Dragon

Weight: 82 lbs. Height: 4ft.

Description: This is a kind of yellow and blue salamader type creature. It has bulky legs and slightly disproportionate large arms. Its pelvis is almost on its back so the legs come out close to the spine. They become wings eventually. It has a lightning shaped tail and stands at around a 60 degree angle to the ground. It has a small spike instead of a hand. It has small scales.

Pokedex Data: Denkons usually travel in packs searching for storms. They draw lightning and absorb it.

Pokedex Data: It can be found wherever there is a thunderstorm; however, it rarely comes near civilization.

Ability: Lightning Rod/Volt Absorb

Gender: 50/50

Gender Differences: Females are longer. Males have a larger spike on both arms.

Evolution: Evolves from Denri starting at level 16. Evolves into Inakon starting at level 32.

Egg Groups: Monster/Dragon

Level Up Moves
Start-Leer,Pound, Thundershock
7-Thundershock
9-Thunder Wave
14-Dragon Rage
17-Shock Wave
26-Dragon Dance
29-Protect
36-Bullet Punch
39-Thunderbolt
46-Dragon Pulse
50-Dragon Claw

Base Stats:
HP: 62 Atk: 78 Def: 49 SAtk: 78 SDef: 49 Spe: 95

EV Yield:
HP: 0 Atk: 0 Def: 0 SAtk: 0 SDef: 0 Spe: 2

Name: Inakon (“Inazuma” is Japanese for lightning and “Drakon" is Greek for dragon)

Pokedex Type: Static Dragon

Elemental Types: Electric, Dragon

Weight: 195 lbs. Height 7.5 ft.

Description: My picture was pretty horrible actually, so I decided on a text description. This is a classic dragon with changes. There are no legs, or claws on the arms. The tail is the shape of stereotypical lightning and the arms are quite muscled. Instead of claws there is a sword-like spike at the end of the arm. It is dark blue and yellow. It has a streamlined body.

Pokedex Data: It is especially attracted to thunderstorms. It uses its sword-like arms to defend its territory.

Pokedex Data: It is said to have been born from lightning. Its powerful stabs paralyze its defenseless prey.

Ability-Levitate/Volt Absorb

Gender: 50/50

Gender Differences: Males have longer swords, females are a little larger in the head.

Evolution: Evolves from Denkon starting at level 32.

Egg Groups: Monster/Dragon

Level Up Moves

Start-Punches, Leer, Pound
7-Thundershock
14-Thunder Wave
10-Dragon Rage
17-Protect
21-Shock Wave
27-Dragon Dance
32-Thunder Stab-Damage: 40 Effect: 50% Chance paralysis, High critical hit ratio. Accuracy: 100% PP:15 Physical
41-Bullet Punch
45-Thunderbolt
56-Thunderstorm
62-Dragon Pulse
65-Dragon Claw

Base Stats:
HP: 85 Atk: 100 Def: 75 SAtk: 100 SDef: 85 Spe:135

EV Yield:
HP: 0 Atk: 0 DEF: 0 SAtk: 0 SDef: 0 Spe: 3

Last Edited By: SsAaVv Aug 5 10 5:27 AM. Edited 16 times.

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Rayquaza101

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Jul 15 10 2:10 PM

Uhhh, you can't suggest Legendary Pokemon. The Staff makes those theirselves, and them only. Believe me, I tried to, it dosen't work. Other than that, looks really good!

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SsAaVv

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Jul 15 10 2:17 PM

Oh I didn't know. I will edit it to non-legendary.

Rayquaza101

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Jul 15 10 2:23 PM

Can I say something else? You need a Diamond and a Pearl entry. No follow ups.

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SsAaVv

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Jul 15 10 2:45 PM

I edited it to a non-legendary and lowered the stats to a reasonable standard level. What do you mean by follow up? When I made the post I basically went down the row of rules and did everything. I added egg groups also.

Last Edited By: SsAaVv Jul 15 10 2:57 PM. Edited 1 times.

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Jul 15 10 4:19 PM

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You need 2 different dex entries

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Jul 15 10 6:07 PM

Oh ok, I fixed that. Is there like a vote or something that determines if your poke is artist worthy?

Last Edited By: SsAaVv Jul 15 10 6:13 PM. Edited 1 times.

SoR

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Jul 15 10 7:53 PM

^what are you asking with that?

The movelist needs serious work. Most non-legendaries don't learn moves at higher levels (above 80 I think). There are huge gaps where it learns no moves at all and then learns a bunch of moves near each other. You also need to make sure the moves are in the right place. Dragon dance is much better than howl but somehow this learns that move early.

You don't get to decide move tutor and egg moves, the staff decides that, so I hope you are okay with you egg move ideas just being ignored. We have a completely different set of TMs and HMs at PF, so your TM and HM suggestions not useful.

You need to make sure you have two dex entries, not just one. They have to be between 85 and 100 characters, spaces included. They also have to be completely stand-alone, so they can't reference one another.

That whole note at the end reminds me of #10 on this: http://www.cracked.com/funny-3809-internet-argument-techniques/.

Although it may not have been your intention, the whole egg move, HMs, etc. section is really spitting in the face of everybody here. I understand people who don't follow the rules because they haven't read them or they don't understand them, but you come here and say you know what the rules are and you still refuse to follow them. Apparently just because you participated in the make a pokemon contest on another site you can disregard the rules and do whatever you want. I find that very disrespectful of everybody here. I don't mean to be a jerk, I just wanted to let you know how I feel.

And welcome to PF

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Jul 15 10 8:07 PM

I am extremely sorry, seriously. I will get started on editing right away and delete the bs at the end. My moveset was actually for a legendary I just have not changed it yet. I hope this poke turns out ok even I had a bad start because I put a lot of work into it. Again I apologies for any disrespect and Thanks for the welcome.

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Jul 15 10 9:19 PM

I finished the edits but I cannot decide between thunder wave or dragonbreath for level 15. Please tell me the other changes you want. BTW that Internet argument thing was pretty hilarious even though it made me feel pretty lame.

Last Edited By: SsAaVv Jul 15 10 9:34 PM. Edited 1 times.

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elementalpenguin

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Jul 15 10 10:28 PM

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Welcome, SsAaVv! In response to your question about "artist-worthy," all suggestions that are at a suggestion-ready level are approved, and then are always drawn and sprited. ^^
As for the movelist... from what you have this seems a bit more attack-oriented, but it does learn Dragon Rage the level before... I say Twave.

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Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

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SsAaVv

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Jul 16 10 5:17 AM

Ok thanks. I swapped swords dance for dd and Draco meteor for extremespeed and did another round of stat lowering. I'm going to start work on 2 previous evolutions and adjust this one's moves to match later evolutions.

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Jul 16 10 6:53 AM

I added a pre-evo and changed the other moveset accordingly. I used starter pokemon for reference and this is about as good as them. Im planning o also adding another pre-evo for Denkon.

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Jul 16 10 7:37 AM

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Just a tip - don't double post. Edit your previous post instead. Also, it's not necessary to have the evolution level in the movelist, and the male-female split at the last move doesn't make any sense.

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Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

SsAaVv

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Jul 16 10 8:28 AM

How should I split then. Should I do it by secret id, or just put both moves seperately, or choose one? Also is it too cheap if it can learn both thunderstorm and megavolt?

Last Edited By: SsAaVv Jul 16 10 9:08 AM. Edited 1 times.

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Jul 16 10 10:51 AM

Secret ID? This isn't the games, you know. I think you could just have it learn both of moves separately. It could be at the same level, if you want.

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SsAaVv

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Jul 16 10 12:22 PM

I split the moves and added the pre-evo for denkon. I still want ideas for improvement though.

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Jul 27 10 11:52 AM

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Well, let's see. There's a number of things that need work.

The classification of "Static Dragon" is too long; Pokémon classifications have a character limit of eleven, including spaces. "Static Dragon" is thirteen characters long, for which "StaticDragon" is too long as well. You're gonna have to pick something else. How about "ShockDragon"?

Now, Denri's Pokédex entry:

DENRI are generally found in tall trees where they try to catch lightning. They travel in large groups with DENKON.

In the D/P style of dex info, the Pokémon's own name is normally not used; instead, it is referred to by "it" or "they". How's this?

It can be found in tall trees, trying to catch lightning. It is closely guarded by older relatives.

Denri's second Dex entry:

This cherubic pokemon is quite dangerous actually. It can shock at thousands of volts if at full power.

Much like with the previous entry, "this POKéMON" is generally no longer used, and "it" is used instead. I'm not sure "cherubic" is an adequate descriptor for Denri, seeing as it has no angelic or particularly child-like traits, but that's your call.

Its cherubic appearance belies its ability to attack with up to 3,000 volts at full power.

For the same reasons as Denri, Denkon's Pokédex entries need some changes. How do you feel about these?

It tends to travel in packs, searching for storms. It attracts lightning to absorb its power.
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It can be found wherever there is a thunderstorm; however, it rarely comes near civilization.

Inakon's Dex entries, revised:

It is especially attracted to thunderstorms. It uses its sword-like arms to defend its territory.
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It is said to have been born from lightning. Its powerful stabs paralyze its defenseless prey.

Thunder Stab is a cool move, but giving it a 50% chance of Paralysis and a high Critical Hit ratio may be a bit too hax. How about removing the high Critical Hit ratio?

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Aug 4 10 8:16 PM

I am really sorry for disappearing but now I'm back. I love the new dex entries but I'm too lazy to copy paste now on my iPod. The idea of thunder stab was to replace the old standard of where many last-evo pokemon get a sig move with great damage. This is my change to that and the had makes it good. I am going to lower the damage to 40, if you think that's cool tell me.
EDIT: Okay I changed the dex entries and thunder stab.

Last Edited By: SsAaVv Aug 5 10 5:25 AM. Edited 1 times.

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