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Gamermaster222

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Jul 6 10 6:49 PM

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think it needs anything else?

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TheNoob

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Jul 6 10 7:04 PM

Nope.

Flarsable

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Jul 6 10 8:29 PM

Noob, you're doing the control thing again. Perosnally, I like the design of Boeptera, but I think it needs more realistic wings, because it's still a snakefly. And maybe make its body a little more platform-like, to make more ideal jumping areas for the Grudive it carries. Peas and tank u! Also, Grudive needs a movelist.

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Gamermaster222

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Jul 9 10 8:29 AM

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Ok... before I start making the changes Flarsable, I want to know EXACTLY what needs changing so I don't have to go back and change it later on.

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Flarsable

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Jul 9 10 8:34 AM

Well, look at the wings. They are green quadrilaterals, with VERY pointy edges. Not very realistic, right? Well, when I say "realistic" that's what I mean. If you could make the wings look at least somewhat more like real snakefly wings. When I say "platform-like" I'm actually more syaing that if you could, to give it a wider and flatter top to the body (not the head).

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Gamermaster222

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Jul 9 10 8:36 AM

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OK so, let me make sure I got all this: The head is fine, you want a wider body with a more flattened top and wings that have actual curvature to them. Does that about cover it?

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Flarsable

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Jul 9 10 8:37 AM

Yes, besides the fact that I've never heard of the word curvature. But I'll look it up.

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Gamermaster222

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Jul 9 10 8:39 AM

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Ok, but do you want any changes to the back part of the body or the legs (just to make sure I cover everything)?

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Flarsable

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Jul 9 10 8:43 AM

The legs could be a bit bulkier, becasue right now I sort of think of it as a pond skater, which I know it's not.

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Gamermaster222

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Jul 9 10 9:14 AM

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Um... yeah, sorry to bother you but... I can't get the body reshaping to come out in a decent appearance. So I won't be able to get an updated picture for you. But at least we have the description for the staff to go by. Once again, sorry.

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Gargoyle (Name Pending)

Flarsable

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Jul 9 10 12:14 PM

And besides, we're supposed to have a text description of our Pokemno anyways...

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Void

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Jul 9 10 5:06 PM

Flarsable wrote:
And besides, we're supposed to have a text description of our Pokemno anyways...

Not necessarily. Rule 4 states: If you have a picture of it uploaded, you may display that instead of a text description.

elementalpenguin

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Jul 12 10 6:15 PM

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This is the Community Works, so we need a text description.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

elementalpenguin

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Jul 12 10 6:17 PM

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This is the Community Works, so we need a text description.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Miravistel

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Jul 12 10 7:15 PM

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Not necessarily. I believe we can work just fine off the image, since that was essentially the original description.

Flarsable

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Jul 13 10 10:34 AM

Well, Grudive was, but Gamermaster222 says he can't get a version of Boeptera in my image. So a text description for Boeptera, and I can't copy-paste Grudive's image, so any help on that?

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Flarsable

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Mar 29 11 5:11 PM

Staff, please close this. I've got a better idea.

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