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AlexFantastico

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Jun 3 10 4:14 AM

Woahhhh, hold up son, "A rough sketch by Mirastavel"? Last time I checked, I'm not Mirastavel:P

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elementalpenguin

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Jun 3 10 8:44 AM

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Last time I checked, it's also spelled "Miravistel," taking the name from mirage and avistel, creatures she creates.
Anyways, just a word of advice - although some people may know what you mean when you say OP, because this is the pokemon world, it tends to have the significance of "overpowered," not original post.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

TheNoob

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Jun 3 10 12:02 PM

AlexFantastico wrote:
Woahhhh, hold up son, "A rough sketch by Mirastavel"? Last time I checked, I'm not Mirastavel:P

'Scuse me, buddy, fixed that. Your dialouge reminds me of someone....

Last Edited By: TheNoob Jun 3 10 12:29 PM. Edited 1 times.

Rahjet

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Jun 3 10 6:04 PM

I am overjoyed that this is a standalone and that my ability suggestion was chosen! I think this is a really cool idea, but the three eyes thing is a bit too much IMO.

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

AlexFantastico

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Jun 3 10 6:10 PM

Yeah, I was aware of the correct spelling EP, I was just quoting the incorrect spelling in The Noobs post :P

Well furthermore son, your example reminds me of someone else :P

@Rahjet: The idea of the third eye does fit with this being a very powerful psychic pokemon, though.

Rahjet

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Jun 3 10 6:17 PM

Can't you just make the regular two eyes psychadelic or something? Like tye-dye, etc.? Or we could compromise and you could give it an eye looking "birthmark" on its forehead.

On another note, this reminds me: doesn't it seem as if this should learn Miracle EYE?

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

AlexFantastico

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Jun 3 10 6:27 PM

Yes it surely should learn Miracle Eye, and in my drawing the third eye is intended to be a sort of "birthmark" rather than a real eye. Whether it's real or not though, I think it's cool and it kinda gives this pokemon a little something unique?

Rahjet

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Jun 3 10 7:03 PM

Agreed. Perhaps it could be a little differently colored than the other eyes?

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

greek freak

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Jun 4 10 2:01 PM

Well, I started a job at a pokemon lab, and through some DNA testing, it is proven that Teloryx is distantly related to both Stantler and Breezelle, but it is still a standalone. Teloryx can also learn Miracle Eye, is Ground/Psychic, and apparently it developed the eye birthmark as a defence mechanism. Dartel and Bagdarrow are it's main predators.

TheNoob

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Jun 4 10 2:08 PM

Case closed, the dossier (ID based on info gathered) on this creature (see opening post) is complete.

Last Edited By: TheNoob Jun 5 10 12:06 AM. Edited 4 times.

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AlexFantastico

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Jun 5 10 4:56 AM

One last thing, I have to admit I raised my eyebrow at it learning Rock Polish? Replace it with Agility.

TheNoob

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Jun 5 10 7:00 AM

It's a ground-type, which means that Rock Polish is just it scraping its hooves and horns. Also, Rock Polish looks unassuming to most trainers.

AlexFantastico

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Jun 5 10 7:29 AM

Rock Polish is when you're a rock... and you polish yourself... I really think Agility would make more sense.

TheNoob

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Jun 5 10 7:31 AM

'Kay.

SoR

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Jun 5 10 8:17 AM

The three different kicks in the movelist are bad. There aren't any examples of it I can think of (Where you have to CHOOSE one of three moves) and making up two moves that don't really fit this pokemon is silly. Just leave it with Blaze Kick.

TheNoob

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Jun 5 10 8:22 AM

Got it. Note: This topic is to be no longer in use. I'll be closing it up until the staff approves of it.

Last Edited By: TheNoob Jun 7 10 3:10 PM. Edited 1 times.

elementalpenguin

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Jun 8 10 6:12 PM

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TheNoob, the Staff have made a topic about not putting "Awaiting Approval" or "Finished" in your topic titles.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

TheNoob

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Jun 9 10 12:56 PM

I saw it, but didn't realize I had done it 'til now. Also, for kicks and gigs, the topic is back, so you guys can debate about Teloryx some more!
Also:
I recently saw a pre-evolved Teloryx today, prancing in the desert sun. It was different, though, as his body was more lightly built, and its horns were shorter. This creature's birthmark was almost non-existent, like a tiny dot on his head. When I tried to register it in mah Pokedex, it broke, referring to creatures similar, such as Fawntler, Gazelle, and of course, Teloryx. This suggests it to be a counterpart of these lines! Rant on, friends! This topic has been reopened! Hi ho silver, AWAY!!!!!!!!!

Blueeyess202

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Jun 9 10 1:52 PM

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I've had these concepts around for som time and I was going to get to them eventually but it looks like you guys beat me to it, so have fun with these guys.

From left to right: A Steel-Type Scimitar Oryx, a Gemsbok pre-evolution, a Psychic-Type Addax alt. evolution. I originally planned for them to be varying hsades of brown/tan with white and black spots.