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Coolsteph

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Apr 19 10 4:13 PM

(Nice shading on the picture) Not only do we have the Totodile line, but also the Crocodirt line and the Mangrove Gharial line. Still.....it could have a chance. Although I like Grass-type Pokémon (or rather making Grass-type Fakémon), it does not seem....Grass-type. It does not incorporate any plant parts or aspects into its design, and its thorns look less like thorns than non-Grass-type spikes.

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elementalpenguin

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Apr 19 10 4:13 PM

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I really like the concept here, but I don't see why it's Grass type. I Also think the first part of the first dex is... obvious... And your dexes are too long. Maybe a text description of the front is in order as well? I also think the dexes are a bit simplistic - I mean, what else would it use those thorns for? The interesting tidbits, like the fake gold, that's what I want to know.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
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Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

pikayoshigirl

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Apr 19 10 5:24 PM

Thanks for the feedback!

Maybe I should add leaves on its arms? I didn't want it to look like Sceptile, but I don't know where else to put anything grass-related. Maybe I could just change it to a Poison type, but it doesn't look poisonous either, except for the spikes.

Other Dex entries:

"If it gets too hot, the spines on its back will ooze out a warm liquid to regulate its body temperature."

"They can climb to the top of rocky cliffs with ease, where they keep their nest."

elementalpenguin

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Apr 19 10 5:30 PM

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Those are much better! For the second one, it needs to be longer... how about this: It climbs to the top of rocky cliffs where it keep its nest by pushing its spikes into the rocks.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

pikayoshigirl

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Apr 19 10 5:42 PM

"Using its spikes, it climbs to the top of rocky cliffs with ease, where it keeps its nest."

Does that sound correct?

Now I need to think of a name. My other Fakemon was called Embien, with credit going to Coolsteph.

elementalpenguin

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Apr 19 10 5:56 PM

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Yeah, I remember that thing! That dex sounds much better. Name? Umm. Lavallator?

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Coolsteph

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Apr 19 10 5:56 PM

You could put small leaves on its snout, tail or back---as a change of pace, you could even have one of its fangs made of a sharp leaf. You certainly do not need to put leaves on its arms.

EDIT: Name Suggestions:

Xyligator? (Xylem + Alligator) Cambicroc? (Cambium + Crocodile) Pericroc? (Pericarp---a botany term related to fruit---and Crocodile) Phloegator/Pholigator/Foligator? (Phloem---the innermost layer of bark in trees---and alligator, or alternatively the prefix "Foli" which I think means "leaf")

EDIT: Move Suggestions:

Possible moves:

Grass-type moves:
Aboreum and/or Verdure, Burnt Leaf, Sharpthorns, Wild Growth, Bullet Seed, Energy Ball

Fire-type moves:
Inflame, Kindle, Sauna, Scorch, Sunny Day

Other types:
Take Down and/or Body Slam, Slam, War March, Bite, Crunch, Hiss

Last Edited By: Coolsteph Apr 20 10 6:38 AM. Edited 2 times.

Jigglyclops

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Apr 20 10 6:44 AM

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This pokémon strikes me as Tribal.
Maybe something to work on with the name?

Shining ShinE

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Apr 20 10 7:02 AM

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By the way, another option would be to make it pure Fire-type ;)

elementalpenguin

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Apr 20 10 9:12 AM

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Yes, that's sort of what I was suggesting...

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

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pikayoshigirl

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Apr 20 10 12:32 PM

I really like Cambicroc, so I might just have to go with another one of Coolsteph's name suggestions!
I didn't want it to end in 'gator' because there is already Feraligatr.

Therislash

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Apr 20 10 1:08 PM

Maybe Fire-Dark (it doesn't look too happy) or Fire-Fighting (It's in a fighting stance) or Fire-Rock (it climbs cliffs and mountains

ZeldaFan

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Apr 20 10 1:11 PM

Fire/Ground?

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Rahjet

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Apr 20 10 2:14 PM

If it was to be pure Fire, why not Crocandle (CROCodile + CANDLE)? or Crokindle (CROC + KINDLE) or Crocoal (CROC + COAL)? or Furnacroc/Furnacrok (FURNACe + CROC)?

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

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ZeldaFan

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Apr 21 10 5:34 AM

I like Crokindle the best.

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Gelatop

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Apr 21 10 9:33 AM

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I like this idea as a 3-line. Name ideas are Flaman, Blazator, and Infernodile.

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pikayoshigirl

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Apr 21 10 11:11 AM

I think I may have figured out the names for the evolutionary line:

Crocandle--> Cambicroc (this one)--> Krakadile

Why Krakadile? 'Kraka' comes from the volcano Krakatoa =)

elementalpenguin

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Apr 21 10 3:40 PM

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You could make them all K's - Krokindle, Kambikrok, and Krakadile... No, that's a horrible idea. ^^; I love the Krakatoa origin though, which makes me think it should learn Eruption. It also makes me think Fire/Ground is a good idea.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Coolsteph

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Apr 21 10 3:59 PM

If Fire/Ground is a good idea, then Cambicroc for a name would not make sense at all----as its name derives from a part of a plant. As for Kambikrok----having them all start with a K is nice alliteration, but replacing a C with a K for the last letter of the name is....not the most tasteful of alterations. C would fit well there.

For the time being, we should wait for Pikayoshigirl is make a decision on what type it shall be.

pikayoshigirl

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Apr 21 10 4:58 PM

You mean you might actually consider using this thing?! Wow. I'm flattered!
Also, I got a really awesome idea for a grass starter, but I wonder if I'm allowed to make another thread on the 1st page.

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