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greek freak

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May 11 10 11:55 AM

Thanks, guys. Okay, so:

Name: Gazzale
Pokedex Type: TornadoHorn
Element: Wind
Ability: Wind Absorb
Ht: 2'11
Wt: 76 lbs.
Moveset:
- Tackle
3 Tail Whip
9 Turning
12 Stomp
14 Sand-Attack
18 Wind Hoof
24 Tailwind
31 Circulate
35 Wind Shield*
39 Wind Horn
43 Cuddle

Name: Breezelle
Pokedex Type: TornadoHorn
Element: Wind
Ability: Wind Absorb
Ht: 4'9
Wt: 136 lbs.
Moveset:
- Tackle
3 Tail Whip
7 Whirlwind
10 Turning
13 Stomp
16 Sand Attack
21 Wind Hoof
23 Storm Surge
27 Agility/ Tailwind
33 Circulate
38 Wind Shield*
43 Wind Horn
49 Baton Pass
53 Me First

*Wind Shield
Pow.:NA
Acc.: 95
Raises speed and defense one level each.
Coats user in wind to raise speed and defense.

Last Edited By: greek freak May 11 10 3:17 PM. Edited 1 times.

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SoR

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May 11 10 3:16 PM

I think it is "Wind Shield", not Sheild. Other than that it looks good.

Flarsable

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May 13 10 3:20 PM

Yeah. We could use a defensive Dragon Dance.

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greek freak

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May 15 10 3:44 AM

If I'm not mistaken, this idea is pretty complete. Does anybody else agree? ~~say yes~~

Shining ShinE

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May 16 10 3:25 AM

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It isn't complete yet. I see no dex info, for example.

greek freak

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May 16 10 3:42 AM

Oh. Forgot. How about these dexes? (by the way, ShinE, who approves the pokemon?)

Gazzale:
It's protected by Breezelle, though it can fight well when needed. Its tornado is its main weapon. (100)
Its tornado grows in strength and speed when it is fighting. Scientists think this gives it energy. (98)

I'll do Breezelle after I eat breakfast. Just ate, so:

Breezelle:
It can control its tornado so it grows or shrinks on its command. It can move something by this. (98)
It can suck up most things and shoot them out by using its tornado. Its horns contain the tornado. (99)

They need a little work, mostly Breezelle's first.

Last Edited By: greek freak May 16 10 3:59 AM. Edited 1 times.

Gelatop

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May 16 10 7:24 AM

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They could use some work.

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May 16 10 9:02 AM

We wait for this topic's turn for review, the Staff looks it over, posts ideas for changes, and then approves it once it's satisfactory. So for now- waiting. ;p

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elementalpenguin

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May 16 10 10:15 AM

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Breezelle's second dex is redundant - I'm sure the trainer can see the horns contain the tornado.

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greek freak

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May 16 10 10:25 AM

I'll try to think of something better. And Gelatop, I said they needed a little work.

It can control its tornado so it grows or shrinks on its command. It can move something by this. (98)
It can suck up most things and shoot them out by using its tornado. Its tornado shows its mood. (99)

Is that better?

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May 16 10 10:29 AM

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"It can move something by this" is fairly awkward. How about "It can control its tornado so it grows or shrinks on its command, transporting objects."

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

SoR

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May 16 10 10:29 AM

(Edit: EP beat me too it, but.. ) Using the words "Things" and "Something" make it sound weak and indecisive. Also, try to keep the same idea throughout the dex, as the second one has two cool ideas but neither are related.

greek freak

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May 16 10 11:35 AM

How about this?

It can control its tornado so it grows or shrinks on its command, transporting objects. (87)
Its tornado shows its mood by growing, shrinking, becoming faster or slower and other ways. (94)

Gelatop

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May 16 10 12:34 PM

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How about this?

It can control the size of its tornado on command, allowing it to transport objects.
Its tornado reveals its mood by changing its speed, size, or strength.

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greek freak

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May 16 10 12:38 PM

Those are both too short.

Gelatop

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May 16 10 1:08 PM

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Sorry, but yours drags on, so I improved it. I hope you don't mind.

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SoR

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May 16 10 1:22 PM

No, he means the first one is one character over the minimum limit for dexes and the other one is 14 characters too short. So the second one can't actually be used.

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May 16 10 1:31 PM

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Then let's add to it.

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greek freak

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May 16 10 1:59 PM

Your dexes are just shorter versions of mine. So, if we added on, they would be the same.

SoR

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May 16 10 4:29 PM

how about:

The size of its tornado is directly related to its strength, making it easy to pick out the weak. (97)
An expert can tell what it is feeling from a distance with a look at the speed of its tornado. (94)

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