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DeckuZora #-19 [-]

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Apr 9 10 11:59 PM

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I'm going to bed soon, so this is just off the top of the head, when you make a split between abilities, you don't want to chose abilities that seem odd to have one over the other. In example, Intimidate's fine since a pokemon might or might not be intimidating, but have Poison Point as the alternative suggests some of these pokemon are unable to use the Poison Point ability which makes little sense. I like what I see so far and a poison dragon type isn't very frequent, but just thought you could keep what I said in mind. Maybe an alternative could be Intimidate/Hyper Cutter? Otherwise, welcome to the suggestions board!

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NARFNra #-18 [-]

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Apr 10 10 12:03 AM

Well, I always thought the ability type depended on which way the spikes were facing, forward or backward. Backward meant it was scarier because it looked larger, but had trouble poisoning on contact. Forward wasn't as scary looking, but was easier to poison head on threats.

soble92 #-17 [-]

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Apr 10 10 1:20 AM

Blade Whip and Blade lash sounds a lot like iron tail.

http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Iron_Tail

Maybe reconsider a different move?

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

JDLJDL #-16 [-]

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Apr 10 10 1:40 AM

Isn't a 75-power level move (with defense side-effect) that is Blade Whip too early to be learned at Level 10?
I mean, Pokémon learn moves like EMBER at lvl 10.
Try lowering the power, and adding a side effect against the user, for example the user has a 50-75% of flinching the next turn. That also gives the move a unique feel.
Even so, 75 is still too overpowered for level 10.
And wait, DRAGONBREATH at 14! Talk about OP.
Though, Slash at 60 is underpowered.
Other than that, good concept! We don't have enough dragon types...

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sovereignofsilence667 #-15 [-]

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Apr 10 10 6:49 AM

Pokedex entries should be two SEPERATE entries of 85-100 characters (spaces included). Blade Whip is overpowered for a move at Level 10, and Blade Lash should have, at MAX, 70 accuracy. Here are fixes for you:

BLADE WHIP
Power: 50
Accuracy: 100
Added Effect: 15% chance of lowering enemy DEFENSE by 1 level.
Flavor: Whips the foe with a bladed tail, and may lower their DEFENSE.

BLADE LASH
Power: 120
Accuracy: 70
Added Effect: 30% chance of lowering enemy DEFENSE by 2 levels.
Flavor: Lacerates the foe with a bladed tail, which may severely lower their DEFENSE

Therislash #-14 [-]

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Posts: 372

Apr 10 10 8:24 AM

Yeah, I agree. It's really OP'ed. Try taking off some of the moves. Maybe it could be an evolution of Seviper? They seem awfully similar. Also, if it learns so many Steel moves, shouldn't it be Steel type?

My picture and Seviper:

Last Edited By: Therislash Apr 10 10 8:38 AM. Edited 1 times.

Flarsable #-13 [-]

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Apr 10 10 8:52 AM

Maybe, but then we'd have to give Zangoose an evolution too, to keep up the counterpart thing going on. If you wanted this to evolve from Seviper, it would need similar coloring, some of the yellow hexagon things, and the signature super-long fangs (for some reason I feel people take this farther than they should, so I'll say not all of the fangs but two downwards one). Also, you should recolor either the eyes or the spikes, and if I were you I'd change the eyes to red and add a pupil so it once again resembles Seviper more.

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Last Edited By: Flarsable Apr 10 10 8:55 AM. Edited 1 times.

Therislash #-12 [-]

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Apr 10 10 9:04 AM

Well a Zangoose evo shouldn't be that hard.

Blueeyess202 #-11 [-]

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Apr 10 10 9:52 AM

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Viladrake would probably be better off as a standalone pokémon. Remember that we are trying to limit the amount of official pokémon evolutions approved now, so standards for those types of pokémon have to be extremely high.

sovereignofsilence667 #-10 [-]

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Apr 10 10 9:53 AM

But didn't the Staff say they already have a Seviper and Zangoose evo in the works?

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Flarsable #-9 [-]

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Apr 10 10 10:05 AM

I know they have a Prevo already, but...

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Rahjet #-8 [-]

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Apr 10 10 10:53 AM

I think you mean Poison Fang not Poison Bite, unless I'm mistaken. I love the type combo but think it needs less offensive moves, add in something to the effect of Haze.

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

Flarsable #-7 [-]

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Apr 10 10 11:01 AM

You're mistaken.

POISON BITE
Physical
Power 75
Accuracy 95%
20 PP
75% chance of enemy PSN
Chomp down and inject.

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NARFNra #-6 [-]

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Apr 10 10 11:36 AM

Yes, it originally learned Poison Fang at that level, but I switched some of the moves when I transplanted it here.

NOW EVERYONE READ THE FIRST POST AGAIN, I EDITED IT.

First, It's not going to be an evolution from anything. It will stay by itself, and anyway it's stats were designed to not have being an evo in mind.

Second, I changed around the order for the moves, and deleted several to maintain the Attack Move/Defensive Move Balance.

I also changed the pokedex entry, is that what you meant by two separate lines?

Last Edited By: NARFNra Apr 10 10 11:59 AM. Edited 1 times.

Rahjet #-5 [-]

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Apr 10 10 1:10 PM

My bad, that's exactly why I put that clause in the end there.

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

soble92 #-4 [-]

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Posts: 4584

Apr 10 10 1:31 PM

Blueeyess202 wrote:
Remember that we are trying to limit the amount of official pokémon evolutions approved now, so standards for those types of pokémon have to be extremely high.

What about pre-evolutions? I have 2 in mind that are both branch evolutions that seem PERFECT for the pf.

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

Blueeyess202 #-3 [-]

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Apr 10 10 1:37 PM

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Pre-evolutions will probably be graded even harsher considering we have room to breath by making certain evolutions into alternate evolutions. The same can't be said for pre-evos.

But don't let any of what I say discourage you from suggesting your pokémon, if they are quality suggestions then they will no doubt be accepted, and even if they are not, we work hard to get them up to par.

NARFNra #-2 [-]

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Posts: 281

Apr 10 10 2:18 PM

So any comments on the new Viladrake stuff?

JDLJDL #-1 [-]

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Apr 10 10 3:11 PM

It all looks good!
Here's some art:

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Therislash #0 [-]

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Apr 10 10 3:15 PM

IO think you should incorperate the mouth of my earlier drawing into yours, because it looks more like it's grinning.

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