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ZeldaFan

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Mar 29 10 4:07 PM

Better than it was, but it still needs work. Cage Drop particularly makes no sense to me, what about Tumble?

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Tankesha

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Mar 29 10 4:23 PM

ok zeldafan i liked your idea so i put tumble in for cage drop and it was all you. so what do you think now

Last Edited By: Tankesha Mar 30 10 4:22 AM. Edited 1 times.

ZeldaFan

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Mar 30 10 4:35 AM

A lot better, great. I don't really think Ohmecron needs ThunderPunch when it already has so many Electric moves, but that's about it.

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than Palkia. If you are part of the 18% of users who
know Palkia is better than Dialga, please copy-paste
this to your signature.

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Tankesha

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Mar 30 10 12:53 PM

ya but i want it to learn that because that is like his trademark move

Rahjet

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Mar 30 10 1:18 PM

Really? It seemed to me that Power Surge was more of the sig move here since it has to do with circuitry and these are the circuit and resistor pokemon? Also, I would like to recommend the ability Electric Engine as another ability for the latter two stages, or maybe just the last one because it is such a shame that only one pokemon should have such a creative ability and I think it fits quite well here, especially for Ohmechron.

Tankesha

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Mar 30 10 2:20 PM

well i really want it to learn thunderpunch but ill look into the new ability

Rahjet

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Mar 30 10 2:28 PM

It can learn it through a move tutor you know, just puttin that out there

Tankesha

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Mar 30 10 2:37 PM

true but i kindof just want it to learn it ok

ZeldaFan

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Mar 30 10 3:42 PM

You mean Electivire's ability Motor Drive? That sounds good to me.

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this to your signature.

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Flarsable

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Mar 30 10 3:47 PM

I was thinking that, and it would make it more of a counterpart to Magmortar, who doesn't have a signature ability.

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Tankesha

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Posts: 100

Mar 30 10 4:31 PM

ok ill change it to motor drive

Tankesha

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Apr 5 10 2:53 PM

i finaly added dexes on all the pokemon

elementalpenguin

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Apr 12 10 10:55 AM

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Alright, your dexes need some work. I don't think every one should begin with "this pokemon," and some of the grammar is... lacking. They're also all over the limit.

This pokemon's super magnetic field attracts all metal near it whether it wills it or not.
This pokemon has an amazing determination, but with its poor durability it can't do half it plans to. (This is still one character over the limit.)

This pokemon is not a sight to see. Its very unpleasant appearance even scares away small animals.
Low intelligence makes it do stupid things with no thought of consequences, like running into walls.

It relies only on brute strength, growing confused at the thought even of planning its next attack.
This pokemon never backs down from a fight, but it freezes pokemon in fear just because of its face.

May I suggest those instead?

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Rahjet

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Posts: 1032

Apr 12 10 3:57 PM

For the first dex of Chrohm, maybe you should put "The very unpleasant appearance of CHROHM is so frightening that it even scares away small animals."

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

elementalpenguin

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Apr 12 10 4:23 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

That sounds much better.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Miravistel

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Posts: 1832

Apr 12 10 6:53 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Just a reminder: D/P dexes don't use the phrase "this pokemon" or the pokemon's name, just "it".

elementalpenguin

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Posts: 2712

Apr 12 10 7:08 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Oh right. My bad.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Tankesha

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Suggestions Board Regular

Posts: 100

Jun 8 10 12:37 PM

I Fixed The dexes

meeprox

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Posts: 32

Jun 15 10 4:21 PM

This is very cool! I like it.

~Meeprox~

Rahjet

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Posts: 1032

Jun 20 10 9:32 AM

thanks alot

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

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