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Rahjet

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Mar 28 10 9:24 AM

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I like the head of the drawing coolsteph did for me.. though I must admit, those pictures have a striking similarity. Let me try justifying its evolution one more time:

1. Predaroar has a very similar head/face to Meowth except for the headband (which some have questioned)

2. the color schemes are nearly identical except for the fighter's gauntlet things on the forearms and headband

3. Predaroar is intended as a bipedal evolution of Meowth, in order to give trainers a choice on which direction they want to go

Does that make enough sense?

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(As I was drawing it, my cat was looking at it inquiringly and meowing. Anthropomorphism of his mannerisms allows some excellent humor...is this better?)

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Don't get me wrong, I kinda like the idea of a fighter cat(the "Russian" from Like Cats and Dogs, anyone?) - I just think the idea falls flat on it's face when you make it part of the Meowth line which is fine as it is...

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It looks better. Although it still looks like a meowth. Let me suggest somethings:

Elongate the arms, legs, and tail.

Add more coins, a signature trait that meowth had.

Try drawing several poses to get a feel of what this pokemon should look like. (And post them here.)

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Coolsteph wrote:
Not always. Hyper Fang is....more of a rodent-inscisor-tooth move, for Raticate (and Pachirusu, although it is not a rodent...) and Crunch probably means it has a strong jaw and teeth, and having saber teeth does not nessecary mean they can crunch on things. I've tried drawing Predaroar, but it is not going well, so could someone else try?

How is Pachirusu not a rodent? It's a squirrel and they are rodents. Just saying not trying to get into a fight. Anyway this is a cool idea. Reminds me of one I had when I was in 5th grade (It was a fighting type but not a Meowth evolved form.) I may just suggest mine at some point. Anyway again I know that Payday is a novelty but it is the Meowth lines signature move so maybe have it as a move it already knows before evolution. And Cross Chop, Force Palm, and Mega Kick for moves.

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At Soble's request: I do not like this one as much as the previous, Meowth-traced one. But it is practice----a different pose to "get a feel" of it.

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... THAT'S what I'm talking about! SOOO much better than the trace-over.

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I agree soble that is awesome coolsteph! the body is so much better and I like that pose, but I loved the head on your first two drawings, too. I do not like Force Palm for this pokemon but Cross Chop I like and I am going to add Payday in as a "remembered move", thanks plokman

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No problem. At least I helped with two moves.

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(I am confounded as to why you like the non-traced one better, when I did alter the proportions of the ones that were traced, and, despite their flaws, were more....speedy looking, along with having a more convincing smirk. It does look less like Meowth, but the pose is stilted.) Perhaps Foresight or Detect for moves also?

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Yep though I was planning to put Payday in there, just not sure where, but Cross Chop is all you

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coolsteph, the problem with the traced one is that it was out of proportion, which the non-traced one fixes that problem. I don't think it needs any more moves, foresight doesn't accomplish anything since its ability is Scrappy, so that doesn't work. Detect can be taught and doesn't really fit this seeing as its not really an intelligent predator, more instinct and aggression.

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(I forgot about Scrappy. I just wanted my post to be a little more than a rant of my opinion, to be more....constructive.) How about Revenge/Payback, Bulk Up or Reversal?

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I get your point, coolsteph, makes sense. But Bulk Up is in there, and I don't particularly like Revenge or Reversal. Payback is a stretch, I'll see if anyone else likes it or mentions it.

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(sorry, I was not looking at the moves.) In this case, it seems the movelist has progressed well, and is now of proper amount. Anything else that needs to be done?

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well do I need to copy/paste your Amazing sketch to the original post before the staff will review it?

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You do not have to (they will probably review it regardless of whether or not it has a sketch there), but if you would like. (but please do not call it amazing. It is serviceable, I acknowledge that, but it is like being praised for a story you did not really work on when a story that you did work on and like more is not given any real attention.)

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I was trying to give you a compliment because the sketches served their purposes excellently, which is to give a workable basis for the idea. So thank you and I will just wait for the staff to review this i guess.

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Just so you know the staff review in the order of submission so the next ones would be on the day that the most recent ones were but at a later time. (I think what I just said is true as I read it in one of ShinE's posts.)

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Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

If your interested PM me.

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I am content in waiting for the staff to review this idea, I don't presume that I can rush them seeing as I have no clout in the matter. But I don't quite understand what you are saying, could you try to explain it differently?

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