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sovereignofsilence667

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Mar 19 10 12:06 PM

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Grublash always looked in my head like a worm with a fatter size at its head and a slenderer size at its end with the scissor-claw. Also, looks good, Coolsteph! But I still think we should loose the stinger and just make it a long, slender abdomen segment.

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Would this be more worm-like?

Alternatively, which specific parts of each version are more the Grublash image in your head, so the desirable features can be amalgamated?

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Everything looks spot on except the tail. The scissor blades are separate, one on each side of the actual tail. It uses them by clenching muscles down there to cause them to shear whatever unfortunate thing happens to be around them. Thanks for drawing that, Coolsteph!

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More like this?

As you can tell, it was a struggle to keep the two blades separate from each other. I meant to depict them as being connected to the tip of the tail.

Also, if the "hole" (marking that looks like an hole) seems odd, I possessed the impulse to add that because---last time I checked my scissors---they possessed open portions for the fingers to grip them, so I wanted to reference that design in the depiction.

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Mar 19 10 2:37 PM

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Ah, I agree with Sov on the thinner waist part. Here's a quick drawover I did - if the stinger is kept, I think it should be as shown so that the actual stinger used for attacking is noticeably seperate.

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(concept art to fun to do.)

I think that the stinger should be kept. Stingers are typical of wasp-like insects, although for what I know the robber fly in specific uses its bristly arms to apprehend its prey more than its stinger.

I think it looks much more wasp-like now. Does anyone have any inquiries about anything else that should be improved on it? (because that will mean more concept art work for me, and I do like concept art, yes.)

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Possible Moves for Asileur: Scratch, Fury Cutter, Fury Attack, X-Scissor, Rage, Leer, Bug Buzz, Agility

Possible Moves if the stinger is kept or relevant (note: I do not think it is nessecarily poisonous, or a stinger really. Just that the abdomen segment is a signature body part of a wasp, and thus included it in the depiction.): Bee Stab, Quick Sting.

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