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sovereignofsilence667

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Jul 10 11 9:20 PM

I'm trying to pick Dream World abilities... I think it'll be:

Wicklit: Cute Charm
Witchavate: Contrary
Malefitch: Cursed Body
Benefitch: Magic Guard

AND before anyone gets on my case about how a single evolutionary line can't have different Dream World abilities for every stage, I direct your attention to the Oddish Line, who in fact DO have a different Dream Ability every step of the way (in case you're curious: Oddish has Run Away, Gloom has Stench, Vileplume has Effect Spore, and Bellossom has Healer).

^ Please to be Clicking mah Babies! I'm trying to fill out the various Regional Dexes. YAY FOR HOURS AND HOURS OF LABOR!

And also, maybe, you could check out my newest project? Remember: Read and Review! Thank you!
A Summoner's Sacrifice: A Final Fantasy X Prequel Fic

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poketamer94

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Jul 11 11 5:07 AM

sovereignofsilence667 wrote:
I'm trying to pick Dream World abilities... I think it'll be:

Wicklit: Cute Charm
Witchavate: Contrary
Malefitch: Cursed Body
Benefitch: Magic Guard

AND before anyone gets on my case about how a single evolutionary line can't have different Dream World abilities for every stage, I direct your attention to the Oddish Line, who in fact DO have a different Dream Ability every step of the way (in case you're curious: Oddish has Run Away, Gloom has Stench, Vileplume has Effect Spore, and Bellossom has Healer).

actually, that makes these Pokemon seem unique!

Shining ShinE

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Posts: 7573

Jun 16 12 3:05 AM

PF Executive

Comments!

Good job on these. They are interesting and complete! The split evolution works nicely.

There are some issues, though:
- Since these are witches and not fairies, we think they can do without the wings.
- Malefitch is much too much like Maleficent, from Disney's Sleeping Beauty, and even though no-one will notice, copyright infringement is not a good thing. Thus, Malefitch should be rid of Dragon Rage and Sharpthorns, and probably redesigned to look less like that character. We'd suggest taking some design cues from The Wizard of Oz; that at least is in the public domain.

sovereignofsilence667

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Jul 14 12 7:39 PM

Okay, I'm fine with the Move List comments, and I'll get some sketches up within the week as an "I'm sorry" for not seeing this for a month. ^.^;

EDIT: Here they are~! I changed their designs on a couple of them, and I edited their descriptions in the OP to reflect those changes.

^ Please to be Clicking mah Babies! I'm trying to fill out the various Regional Dexes. YAY FOR HOURS AND HOURS OF LABOR!

And also, maybe, you could check out my newest project? Remember: Read and Review! Thank you!
A Summoner's Sacrifice: A Final Fantasy X Prequel Fic

Last Edited By: sovereignofsilence667 Jul 16 12 4:40 AM. Edited 1 times.

Shining ShinE

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Jan 27 13 12:02 PM

PF Executive

Okay, based on these new sketches, we do like the first two stages (especially the second one), but we're still not fond of the last two. We're now pondering whether it would be wise to either make this a two-stage pokémon only, or to ditch the evil with and heavily rework the good one as it is still too humanoid.

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