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Spiritence and Grantomb The ghost king Poke'mon ( I came up with a First form)

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SCD

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Apr 14 10 7:35 AM

PF Executive

(If there is one thing I have to say about the design process on these images, it is:
CHAINSCHAINSCHAINSCHAINSCHAINSAAAAAAAAAA*aneurysm*
thank you.)

Since I felt there was an egyptian theme present in Grantomb I bled it down into Spiritence, with the tri-pronged crown you described becoming a set of Obelisks, each with an inset cartouche describing the true names of the royal spirits that compose it's body. The 'circuit pattern' in it's mouth really gave me some trouble as I didn't know what part of a circuit board you were wanting, but I sorted it all out for Grantomb. And it really cannot be understated just how much work went into those chains (I'll have to think twice about accepting a commission with chains from now on)...and I've just realised that one of the links on the right side of it's face is missing. Oh well.

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Jigglyclops

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Apr 14 10 7:42 AM

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Whoa, this is some serious design! Well done again SCD!! now let´s hope it´s what Plokman wanted...

SCD

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Apr 14 10 7:59 AM

PF Executive

Spread across two posts so you guys can experience the painstaking detail I put into these. Let it never be said that I draw Pokémon in half-measures.

I circumvented the circuit problem by being more abstract in the design, without using custom brushes. There is a break in the chain links that allows for the hands to attach and detach. The triad of obelisks have become a triad of tiny pyramids, $each one guaranteed to keep an edge on your razor for eons or your money back!$ Since this altered the kingly aspect of the 'mon, I reintroduced that through the blue and gold trim on it's shoulder-guards/diorama of the Pokégyptian sands, as sculpted on the nemes headdress present on the burial mask of Tutankhamun. the golden obelisks come with their own as-of-yet untranslatable Unown glyphs.
Overall, this was an attempt to create a creature with Regigigas's body plan while trying to make it look nothing like Regigigas whatsoever. I'll leave it to you to decide if I succeeded.

Plokman

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Apr 14 10 9:44 AM

0_o Holy crap!!!!!!!! Those are perfect!!!!! Thank you very much SCD! Now I've got to do something!!!

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Rahjet

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Apr 14 10 3:11 PM

Oh my word!! Those pics are incredible SCD! You are a fantastic 'mon-artist!

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

SoR

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Apr 14 10 4:14 PM

I must say, those are two of the most amazing drawings of pokemon I have ever seen.
@Plokman: You have the main entry on page 2 or 3 I think, can you move it back to page 1 so people don't have to read most of it to see how the pokemon has changed?

Plokman

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Apr 14 10 4:23 PM

SoR wrote:
@Plokman: You have the main entry on page 2 or 3 I think, can you move it back to page 1 so people don't have to read most of it to see how the pokemon has changed?

You think I should?

Pokemon Eggs on the GPP
Hopping for a Missingno. Gag one of these days.

Sign my Petitions: http://www.petitiononline.com/112PLKMN/petition.html

Pokemon I'm looking for and will trade for just make a offer

Eevee - Tell me what you want
Smeargle - Tell me what you want
Mewtwo - Tell me what you want
Chikorita - Tell me what you want
Porygon - Maybe getting one
Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

If your interested PM me.

SoR

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Apr 14 10 4:54 PM

Yeah, since you are already editing one post over and over, why not on the first page? That way at a glance people will be able to see the amazing drawings and updates.

Plokman

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Apr 14 10 4:56 PM

Oh alright. I'll go do it.

Pokemon Eggs on the GPP
Hopping for a Missingno. Gag one of these days.

Sign my Petitions: http://www.petitiononline.com/112PLKMN/petition.html

Pokemon I'm looking for and will trade for just make a offer

Eevee - Tell me what you want
Smeargle - Tell me what you want
Mewtwo - Tell me what you want
Chikorita - Tell me what you want
Porygon - Maybe getting one
Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

If your interested PM me.

SoR

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Apr 14 10 5:11 PM

Yay, much better! I also think you can get rid of the descriptions now that you have pictures.

Also, are you sure the prevo should be all male? You could have the split pharoah/pharoahess(or whatever) come from the prevo.

edit:
One of the pokedex entries says hordes, the proper spelling is hoards.
Also, the move set for both is rediculously OP. Almost all of their moves are attack based. Confusion shouldn't be learned until leve 15 or 16, and all the pokemon that learn it earlier aren't found in the wild until that level (at least in the few I checked.)

2 comparisons I have are Gastly and Spoink

Gastly:
01 Hypnosis
01 Lick
05 Spite
08 Mean Look
12 Curse
15 Night Shade
19 Confuse Ray
22 Sucker Punch
26 Payback
29 Shadow Ball
33 Dream Eater
36 Dark Pulse
40 Destiny Bond
43 Nightmare

Spoink:
01 Splash
01 Psywave
10 Odor Sleuth
14 Psybeam
15 Psych Up
18 Confuse Ray
21 Magic Coat
26 Zen Headbutt
29 Rest
29 Snore
34 Payback
41 Psychic
46 Power gem
48 Bounce

You might also consider including a few PF moves.

Last Edited By: SoR Apr 14 10 5:31 PM. Edited 1 times.

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Miravistel

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Apr 14 10 5:45 PM

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I would suggest that you leave the original description with the suggestion. Don't forget, one of the staff will redraw the pokemon anyway before spriting it. And as amazing at SCD's drawings are, they'd be impossible to sprite right and still get all that painstaking detail in. :P

Rahjet

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Apr 14 10 5:45 PM

Actually SoR, hordes refers to the pack of brutes-ish definition. Hoards is a verb that means to hog or collect.

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

SoR

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Apr 14 10 5:52 PM

@Rahjet: Yes, and it doesn't pack of brutes-ish gold

That sounds mean, but I mean it in a lighthearted way.

@Miravistel: Sorry, my bad.

Plokman

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Apr 14 10 6:14 PM

Oops I'll fix that. I know maybe Spiritence could have a dampining effect like Regigigas. I'll go fix that.

Pokemon Eggs on the GPP
Hopping for a Missingno. Gag one of these days.

Sign my Petitions: http://www.petitiononline.com/112PLKMN/petition.html

Pokemon I'm looking for and will trade for just make a offer

Eevee - Tell me what you want
Smeargle - Tell me what you want
Mewtwo - Tell me what you want
Chikorita - Tell me what you want
Porygon - Maybe getting one
Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

If your interested PM me.

SCD

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Apr 15 10 1:15 AM

PF Executive

Miravistel wrote:
I would suggest that you leave the original description with the suggestion. Don't forget, one of the staff will redraw the pokemon anyway before spriting it. And as amazing at SCD's drawings are, they'd be impossible to sprite right and still get all that painstaking detail in. :P

Yes, I know, Miravistel, and... I'm sorry. I got carried away this time.

Miravistel

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Apr 15 10 5:57 AM

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Oh, it's not a problem, no need to appologise. We do like to encourage creativity, and it's fun to see your fantastic art.

Rahjet

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Apr 15 10 1:00 PM

Oh, my bad SoR, I wasn't reading with context, I just thought you meant that there wasn't a word spelled "hordes"

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

Shining ShinE

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Jul 4 10 4:22 AM

PF Executive

Comments!

- First off: we love these; they're awesome ^-^
- We prefer "RoyalSpirit Pokémon" as a classification for both of them.
- We feel that they both should have "Indeterminate" as Egg Group. Evolution chains generally share the same Egg Group.
- Their dex infos need some work. We suggest:

Spiritence
It can be very greedy. It is attracted to any metal that glitters, but it hoards gold the most. (95)
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The destructive fits of rage that it is known for can shatter steel of even two inches thick. (93)

Grantomb
It is said to be the spirit of an ancient king who now wishes to serve those who served him long ago. (101)
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Its crest is said to represent a long forgotten kingdom. At times the crest shines brightly. (92)

- You introduced a new ability because their move lists are too powerful. We don't think that's the way to go. We would like to suggest new move lists instead:
Spiritence:
-Leer
-Night Shade
-Psywave
4 Teleport
7 Confusion
12 Hypnosis
15 Miracle Eye
18 Shadow Punch
22 Imprison
25 Force Punch
28 Tri Attack
33 Nightmare
37 Shadow Ball
42 Nasty Plot
46 Psychic
51 Spirit Bomb

Grantomb:
-Trick Room
-Shadowy Eyes
-Night Shade
-Psywave
-Stomp
4 Stomp
7 Confusion
12 Hypnosis
15 Miracle Eye
18 Shadow Punch
22 Confuse Ray
25 Force Punch
28 Tri Attack
33 Nightmare
37 Shadow Ball
42 Enlighten
46 Dream Eater
51 Spirit Bomb

- In this scenario, we suggest Levitate for Spiritence and Pressure for Grantomb.

That's it!

patricol

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Jul 4 10 4:44 AM

I don't think plokman will be appearing any soon. What shall we do then?

My Suggestions:

Duckiducky (DS#037)
Rubbarvaz (DS#038)
Larvyre (Community DS#039)
Pupyre (Community DS#040)
Lepradu (DS#150)

Pollutross (DS #180)

Jibayuna (DS #199 Legendary Contest winner)

Bayubisa (DS #200 Legendary Contest winner)
Torchild
Lightorch
Destorch
Phashift(Community)

SoR

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Jul 4 10 8:28 AM

For the breaking steel plates dex I'm pretty sure that "of" doesn't belong there. Maybe:
In destructive fits of rage it will pulverize stone and shatter steel plates up to two inches thick. (100)
Oh man, I love the word pulverize.

And for the dex that is 101 characters, on top of being 101 characters, it doesn't make sense, even by pokemon standards. I can't think of any pokemon that was once a human, and I don't think that anybody who served a long dead king would still be alive, so who would it help? I guess that would be up to Plockman on how to change that.

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