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elementalpenguin

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Mar 15 10 2:13 PM

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Man, I love your concepts. However, the dex first part should be shorter, and the second should be longer - 80-100 characters. Will it have a female counterpart? THat might be nice.
Great job! I love these.

EDIT: Gah, I kept saying 80... it's 85.

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Last Edited By: elementalpenguin Mar 15 10 6:04 PM. Edited 1 times.

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Plokman

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Mar 15 10 2:46 PM

Thanks. I need to check the length of these to see. Pokédex Data 80 characters: The crest it has is said took like the crown of a long lost forgotten kingdom. Thats two characters short. and Pokédex Data 100 characters: This Poke’mon is said to be the spirit of a king who wishes to serve those who served him long ago. Thats just one character short of 100.

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Mar 15 10 4:24 PM

No, no, no! SHinE ment they could be 85 characters TO 100 characters, being anywhere between. Don't have one minimun and one maximum Dex entry.

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Mar 15 10 4:36 PM

Oh so both could be 100. Awesome! Thanks Flarsable.

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soble92

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Mar 15 10 5:41 PM

This made me think of a great riddle.

Who was buried in King Grant's tomb?

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Mar 15 10 5:46 PM

I know this one. Nobody is. Grant and his wife are entombed, not buried.

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Mar 15 10 6:06 PM

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Ah also, the type: Royal Spirit. Too long with the space. Needs to be 11 characters.

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Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
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Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
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Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Last Edited By: elementalpenguin Mar 19 10 2:48 PM. Edited 1 times.

Plokman

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Mar 15 10 6:09 PM

Aw the digity dang! I'll fix it.

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Mar 15 10 6:10 PM

Ok I think I fixed it.

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Mar 16 10 12:10 PM

I think I've worked out the kinks now.

Name: Grantomb
Pokédex Type: Royal Ghost
Height, Weight: 8’ 7” 200 LBS
Element Type: Ghost/Psychic
Description: A bipedal hulk that has three eyes on its torso (as it’s head is the area between its shoulders) that look like the Egyptian Eye. Its body is composed of green spirit energy with what looks like purple circuit patterns that run over it. It has two elephant like legs with five cubic toes like stone bricks. It has two three fingered hands that are disembodied and float along side it. These hands appear to be made out of stone with energy traces cut into them that glow with Psychic energy. In the center of each hands palms are two strange looking Eyes that have a strange glow to them. The Poke’mon also has a golden three pronged crest that rests where its head would be if it were human.
Pokédex Data: This Poke’mon is said to be the spirit of a king who wishes to serve those who served him long ago.
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The crest it has is said took like the crown of a long forgotten kingdom.
Evolution: Currently unknown. But it can learn Hyper Beam and Giga Impact so it is a last stage.
Special Ability: Pressure
Moves:
- Confusion
- Night Shade
8 - Hypnosis
12 - Sucker Punch
15 - Psychic
19 - Will-O-Wisp
22 - Shadow Ball
26 - Trick Room
29 - Dark Pulse
33 - Nightmare
36 - Shock Wave
40 - Tri Attack
44 - Dream Eater
50 - Dark Void
Gender Ratio: Always male
Gender Differences: None
Egg: Humanoid. Can only breed with Ditto.
Habitat: Castle Ruins
Stats: HP: 91
ATK: 99
DEF: 88
SP.ATK: 100
SP.DEF: 88
SPD: 89

I hope that fixed everything.

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Mar 16 10 12:59 PM

I think if he can only breed with Ditto, the Egg Group should be Ditto.

Besides, it would be Humanshape, not Humanoid.

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Mar 16 10 1:15 PM

Ok heres the fix.

Name: Grantomb
Pokédex Type: Royal Spirit
Height, Weight: 8’ 7” 200 LBS
Element Type: Ghost/Psychic
Description: A bipedal hulk that has three eyes on its torso (as it’s head is the area between its shoulders) that look like the Egyptian Eye. Its body is composed of green spirit energy with what looks like purple circuit patterns that run over it. It has two elephant like legs with five cubic toes like stone bricks. It has two three fingered hands that are disembodied and float along side it. These hands appear to be made out of stone with energy traces cut into them that glow with Psychic energy. In the center of each hands palms are two strange looking Eyes that have a strange glow to them. The Poke’mon also has a golden three pronged crest that rests where its head would be if it were human.
Pokédex Data: This Poke’mon is said to be the spirit of a king who wishes to serve those who served him long ago.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The crest it has is said took like the crown of a long forgotten kingdom.
Evolution: Currently unknown. But it can learn Hyper Beam and Giga Impact so it is a last stage.
Special Ability: Pressure
Moves:
- Confusion
- Night Shade
8 - Hypnosis
12 - Sucker Punch
15 - Psychic
19 - Will-O-Wisp
22 - Shadow Ball
26 - Trick Room
29 - Dark Pulse
33 - Nightmare
36 - Shock Wave
40 - Tri Attack
44 - Dream Eater
50 - Dark Void
Gender Ratio: Always male
Gender Differences: None
Egg: Human Shape. Can only breed with Ditto.
Habitat: Castle Ruins
Stats: HP: 91
ATK: 99
DEF: 88
SP.ATK: 100
SP.DEF: 88
SPD: 89

Well the Can only breed with Ditto is more like a place holder in case someone comes up with a female counter part to Grantomb. Like with Tauros and Miltank.

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Chikorita - Tell me what you want
Porygon - Maybe getting one
Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

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ZeldaFan

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Mar 16 10 1:17 PM

If it will have a partner later, wouldn't that mean that it can breed with other pokemon, just only produce other Grantomb with Ditto?

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Plokman

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Mar 16 10 1:22 PM

I guess your right. Ok one more change!

Name: Grantomb
Pokédex Type: Royal Spirit
Height, Weight: 8’ 7” 200 LBS
Element Type: Ghost/Psychic
Description: A bipedal hulk that has three eyes on its torso (as it’s head is the area between its shoulders) that look like the Egyptian Eye. Its body is composed of green spirit energy with what looks like purple circuit patterns that run over it. It has two elephant like legs with five cubic toes like stone bricks. It has two three fingered hands that are disembodied and float along side it. These hands appear to be made out of stone with energy traces cut into them that glow with Psychic energy. In the center of each hands palms are two strange looking Eyes that have a strange glow to them. The Poke’mon also has a golden three pronged crest that rests where its head would be if it were human.
Pokédex Data: This Poke’mon is said to be the spirit of a king who wishes to serve those who served him long ago.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The crest it has is said took like the crown of a long forgotten kingdom.
Evolution: Currently unknown. But it can learn Hyper Beam and Giga Impact so it is a last stage.
Special Ability: Pressure
Moves:
- Confusion
- Night Shade
8 - Hypnosis
12 - Sucker Punch
15 - Psychic
19 - Will-O-Wisp
22 - Shadow Ball
26 - Trick Room
29 - Dark Pulse
33 - Nightmare
36 - Shock Wave
40 - Tri Attack
44 - Dream Eater
50 - Dark Void
Gender Ratio: Always male
Gender Differences: None
Egg: Human Shape. Can only breed with Ditto at this time.
Habitat: Castle Ruins
Stats: HP: 91
ATK: 99
DEF: 88
SP.ATK: 100
SP.DEF: 88
SPD: 89

Does that work? I'm not sure.

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Ditto - May be getting one

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elementalpenguin

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Mar 16 10 6:04 PM

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"Serve those who served him" is a bit strange. Not redundant by any means, but it is just a bit awkward, unless the link between the two actions was what you were going for.

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Plokman

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Mar 16 10 6:09 PM

It was. It's kinda like the Queens in the Septimus Heap series. He wishes to return the favor of those who served him in life.

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Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

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Mar 18 10 10:47 AM

I'm just putting this like I did for Marioneco
Name: Grantomb
Pokédex Type: Royal Ghost
Height, Weight: 8’ 7” 197 LBS
Element Type: Ghost/Psychic
Description: A bipedal hulk that has three eyes on its torso (as it’s head is the area between its shoulders) that look like the Egyptian Eye. Its body is composed of green spirit energy with what looks like purple circuit patterns that run over it. It has two elephant like legs with five cubic toes like stone bricks. It has two three fingered hands that are disembodied and float along side it. These hands appear to be made out of stone with energy traces cut into them that glow with Psychic energy. In the center of each hands palms are two strange looking Eyes that have a strange glow to them. The Poke’mon also has a golden three pronged crest that rests where its head would be if it were human.
Pokédex Data: This Poke’mon is said to be the spirit of a king who wishes to serve those who served him long ago.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The crest it has is said took like the crown of a long forgotten kingdom.
Evolution: Currently unknown. But it can learn Hyper Beam and Giga Impact so it is a last stage.
Special Ability: Pressure
Moves:
- Confusion
- Night Shade
8 - Hypnosis
12 - Sucker Punch
15 - Psychic
19 - Will-O-Wisp
22 - Shadow Ball
26 - Trick Room
29 - Dark Pulse
33 - Nightmare
36 - Shock Wave
40 - Tri Attack
44 - Dream Eater
50 - Night Slash
Gender Ratio: Always male
Gender Differences: None
Egg: Human Shape. Can only breed with Ditto.
Habitat: Castle Ruins
Stats: HP: 91
ATK: 99
DEF: 88
SP.ATK: 100
SP.DEF: 88
SPD: 89
Gender Ratio: Always male
Gender Differences: None
Egg: Human Shape. Can only breed with Ditto at this time.
Habitat: Castle Ruins
Stats: HP: 91
ATK: 99
DEF: 88
SP.ATK: 100
SP.DEF: 88
SPD: 89

From here on out I'll edit this post for things like the Move set and such. Sorry I am not trying to spam.

Edit March 18 6:06: Changed Dark Void to Night Slash since Dark Void is a Darkrai only move.

Edit March 19 5:48: Ok I changed the Poke'dex type to fit. It's now Rex Spirit as Rex is another word for King.

Edit March 19 6:28: Ok I changed the Poke'dex type to fit again. It's now Royal Ghost again. I changed the weight so it won't have two zeros in it.

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Porygon - Maybe getting one
Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

If your interested PM me.

Last Edited By: Plokman Mar 19 10 3:28 PM. Edited 4 times.

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Mar 18 10 2:18 PM

Hold the wagon. Dark Void is a Darkrai-exlusive move.

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Mar 18 10 3:02 PM

Aw nuts! I'm a fixing. Thanks for the heads up.

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Porygon - Maybe getting one
Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

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elementalpenguin

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Mar 19 10 10:22 AM

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Oh no! I made a mistake - Pokedex type is limited to 11 characters, not 12!

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

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