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hazzamon

My first suggestion, haha!

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Mar 15 10 12:55 PM

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Here is an old idea that I have wanted to suggest for a really long time.

NAME: Toxosaur (TOXic + dinOSAUR) http://haz-za.deviantart.com/art/Toxsaur-134800486

POKEDEX TYPE: Mushroom Pokemon

HEIGHT: 1 meter and 87 centimeters (to base of mushrooms), 2 meters and 50 centimeters to tip of mushrooms

WEIGHT: 89 kilograms

ELEMENTAL TYPE: Poison/ Dragon

DESCRIPTION: http://haz-za.deviantart.com/art/Toxsaur-134800486 It originally had leaves growing all over it's body but these are now scales that so happen to be leaf-shaped.

POKEDEX DATA: (help here) Its toxic mushrooms spray a sickening powder that can poison a full-grown KANGAHSTAN. (Diamond) This dragon-like Pokemon lives deep in the forests of Bombur to hunt its prey (Pearl).

EVOLUTION: None as of yet

SPECIAL ABILITY: Effect Spore/ Stench

MOVES: To be completed soon...

NEW MOVE:

Mushroom Cannon
Special
Power 90
Accuracy 85%
10 PP
The user charges up on the first turn and then releases a cloud of noxious gas onto the foe during the second turn.
Charges up a cloud of toxic
gas to unleash on the foe.

My website: http://hazzasfanficcentral.webs.com/

I will not be arounf PF so much anymore, but I will visit occasionally :)

Last Edited By: hazzamon Mar 16 10 11:40 AM. Edited 3 times.

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elementalpenguin

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Mar 15 10 1:53 PM

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I really like the idea! Poison is an under-appreciated type, IMO.
Alright, the first dex is good, actually. But It's KANGASKHAN.
The second dex needs to be 23 characters longer. For special abilities, I suggest Stench/Effect Spore.
Keep up the good work!

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hazzamon

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Mar 15 10 8:53 PM

Thanks EP! I was going to go on to Bulbapedia but I was late for school :P

My website: http://hazzasfanficcentral.webs.com/

I will not be arounf PF so much anymore, but I will visit occasionally :)

Coolsteph

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Mar 16 10 11:12 AM

Since you seem to be interested in the fan art I made of your Tox(o)saur, I shall thus show it to you.

I used this to practice my shading skills. I did not think that the leaf-shaped scales were feasible, for it would probably be rather difficult to implement in a small sprite if it was approved or even impossible. Thus, the only scale on its body that seemed particularly important to me, the scale that I chose to depict, would be the one on its snout. I attempted making it a "belt" of scales, but it only looked awkward so I removed it.

Additionally, on your Dex entry....it's means "it is" or "it has". You might want to use "its" instead.

Cyrus Shadowclaw

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Mar 16 10 11:26 AM

That sounds like a nice idea - I would want one! How about it learning Toxic quite soon? And the powders straight off or something?

Last Edited By: Cyrus Shadowclaw Mar 16 10 11:32 AM. Edited 2 times.

hazzamon

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Mar 16 10 11:33 AM

@ CoolSteph: Wow that looks cool! I'll fix up the dex right away

@ Cryrus Shadowclaw" Yeah, it does. But everytime I right the movelist, something happens and I lose the stuff I've written

So I'm leaving it until I've woken up a little bit XD

My website: http://hazzasfanficcentral.webs.com/

I will not be arounf PF so much anymore, but I will visit occasionally :)

Cyrus Shadowclaw

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Mar 16 10 11:48 AM

Oh no! Copy paste it first, then try. OO

Shining ShinE

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May 7 10 2:31 PM

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Comments! Nice job for your first suggestion, hazza ^-^

- We don't think this pokémon should be part Dragon-type. Depending on whether you want its scales to be leaves or not, we suggest to make it either pure Poison-type or Poison/Grass.
- Its name isn't that creative. Cacapulse did some research and discovered that the most poisonous mushrooms in the world are known by the genus name 'Amanita'. So, working with that, we'll toss in some naming suggestions:
Amanodon (AMANO + DON 'tooth'), Gigamano (GIGA 'savage giant' + AMANO), Gigamanita (GIGA + aMANITA), Iguanomano or Iguanamano (IGUANa' + aMANO).
Or, using other words as a base: Shroomidon (SHROOM + DON "greek for tooth" and a common dinosaur root), Truftile (TRUFfle + RepTILE). Take a pick or feel free to suggest your own new name ^-^
- Your new move is acceptable, apart from its name, which is too long. Might we suggest the name Spore Burst? It would then look like this:

SPORE BURST
(Grass-type)
Special
Power 80
Accuracy 85%
10 PP
The user charges up on the first turn and then releases a cloud of noxious gas onto the foe during the second turn
Enemy PSN
Release a burst
of toxic spores.

- You still need to provide us with a move list.

That's it!

Gelatop

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May 9 10 7:11 AM

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I like Amanodon most.

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May 9 10 10:47 AM

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I'll go tell Haz on DA since presumably she might not be checking her PMs anymore.

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Supersonic

Harden

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Leer
Peck

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May 16 10 4:43 PM

Well I guess Hazz is ignoring this.

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May 17 10 5:52 PM

Or she left, which is funny since she said she was leaving in the Feedback area. But how wil it get changed & approved?

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May 17 10 7:45 PM

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We've contacted her outside of the site, so its now up to her to come and make the changes suggested or to do something else.

hazzamon

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May 17 10 9:52 PM

Shining ShinE wrote:
Comments! Nice job for your first suggestion, hazza ^-^

- We don't think this pokémon should be part Dragon-type. Depending on whether you want its scales to be leaves or not, we suggest to make it either pure Poison-type or Poison/Grass.
- Its name isn't that creative. Cacapulse did some research and discovered that the most poisonous mushrooms in the world are known by the genus name 'Amanita'. So, working with that, we'll toss in some naming suggestions:
Amanodon (AMANO + DON 'tooth'), Gigamano (GIGA 'savage giant' + AMANO), Gigamanita (GIGA + aMANITA), Iguanomano or Iguanamano (IGUANa' + aMANO).
Or, using other words as a base: Shroomidon (SHROOM + DON "greek for tooth" and a common dinosaur root), Truftile (TRUFfle + RepTILE). Take a pick or feel free to suggest your own new name ^-^
- Your new move is acceptable, apart from its name, which is too long. Might we suggest the name Spore Burst? It would then look like this:

SPORE BURST
(Grass-type)
Special
Power 80
Accuracy 85%
10 PP
The user charges up on the first turn and then releases a cloud of noxious gas onto the foe during the second turn
Enemy PSN
Release a burst
of toxic spores.

- You still need to provide us with a move list.

That's it!

Sorry about making you all wait, I was out of town.

@Shine: I will take your pointers into account and will change the name to " Shroomidon" (It has a nice ring to it ^^). And I will change the type to Poison/ Grass.

I will be uploading a move list ASAP. Just send me a reminder on dA if it's for longer then a week.

My website: http://hazzasfanficcentral.webs.com/

I will not be arounf PF so much anymore, but I will visit occasionally :)

Gelatop

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May 18 10 4:09 AM

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Aw, I wanted Amanodon.

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Shining ShinE

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May 19 10 1:41 PM

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To be honest, Amanadon was my favorite as well, but it's up to hazza, since it's her suggestion ^-^

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Jun 1 10 12:45 PM

Hey, it's Hazzamon here, just lost my other password so I can't log into my other account

But finally, I have a movelist. Oh, and Amanadon sounds pretty cool as well too for a name so, yeah ^^;

Movelist
- Tackle
- Tail Whip
6 - Poison Sting
10 - Absorb
14 - Poison Powder
16 - Energy Ball
20 - Spore
24 - Poison Fang
28 - Razor Leaf
32 - Grass Whistle
36 - Acid Armour
40 - Spore Burst
44 - Sludge Bomb
48 - Gunk Shot

How's that for my first move list?

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Jun 1 10 3:14 PM

Should it be learning a Power 80 move at level 16?

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Jun 1 10 10:19 PM

I admit it does need some work...

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Jun 2 10 9:12 AM

Simple solution!

- Tackle
- Tail Whip
6 - Poison Sting
10 - Absorb
14 - Poison Powder
16 - Razor Leaf
20 - Grasswhistle
24 - Poison Fang
28 - Energy Ball
32 - Spore
36 - Acid Armor
40 - Spore Burst
44 - Sludge Bomb
48 - Gunk Shot

Switched Razor Leaf and Energy Ball, and Spore with Grasswhistle as Spore is better than Grasswhistle in every way conceivable. ;P

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Jun 2 10 12:41 PM

Wow, thanks ZeldaFan! I hate making movelsists, I suck at them XP

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