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Good first suggestion, empireomega, we really like these.

- You need to work on their dexes. Each line needs to be 85-100 characters. Some are too short now. Also, just stating their equipment isn't that interesting. Some info about their behavior, for example, would be nice.
- It's probably a good idea to replace "by the U.S. Army" with "by an army", just to prevent any problems arising from mentioning real-world stuff.
- Sigmabot shouldn't learn Metal Claw, it has no arms whatsoever. Maybe you could replace Metal Claw in all their lists with Construction (a new move that will soon arrive on the site).
- The description of Sigmabot is unclear about its eyes. Could you describe them somewhat better? Are we right to assume that Sigmabot has three eyes; one on the head and two closed eyes on the monitor it's connected to?
- We think the names are in the wrong order. We thing the order Alphabot / Sigmabot / Omegabot makes more sense.
- We'd like to suggest a special evolution method for these, considering that they are man-made. We have based this on the Porygon line, but instead of software, we'd like to evolve them with hardware (since they are weaponry). We'd like to suggest two new items: New Parts and Spare Parts (comparable to Up-Grade and Dubious Disc). The evolution process would be this:

1st form evolves into 2nd form when it levels up while knowing Construction and holding New Parts (indicating that its weaponry gets upgraded)
2nd form evolves into 3rd form when it is traded while holding Spare Parts (something goes wrong during the trade, thus explaining its agressive behavior.

We really like this evolution methods; we hope you do too ^-^

6. We're glad you like it ^-^
5. Well, alpha is the first letter of the Greek alphabet, omega is the last, and sigma is somewhere in the middle. We feel that their order is more important that how cool or important the letters are. So, yes, we'd definitely like to change the order of their names.
1. Spaces do count. Let me go into your dexes with more detail:"

Basic form:
It was created by an army to assist in collecting data. It is outdated, but remains active. (92)
This line works.

It is not nearly as powerful as its cousins, weilding only small weapons for defense. (85)
This line is barely long enough; maybe it should be a little longer. Also, the first part of the sentence is not that interesting, and dex infos rarely mention a pokémon's relatives, let alone calling them 'cousins'. You need to change this line.

First evolution:
An upgraded version of Sigmabot that now has arms and legs. It is programmed to fight and fight well. (102)
This line is too long. Also, especially the first sentence sounds more like a description of how the pokémon looks than real dex info. This line needs work.

Its weapons arsenal now includes a flamethrower and a mirror field. It is more commonly used in warfare. (104)
This line is too long as well. The second sentence sounds good, but the first sentence again sounds like a description. Rewording is needed.

Second evolution:
[It] has gone berserk and now destroys all it sees. It has been dubbed a public threat. (86)
DP-style dex info rarely uses the formula "This Pokémon", so I replaced that with "It". This line is barely long enough, but it is workable.

It now wields a massive particle beam, a psychic disruptor pulse, and a force field. (84)
This line is too short. Mentioning its weaponry again makes it sound more like a description than like real dex info. This line needs work.