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sovereignofsilence667

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Mar 25 10 10:56 AM

"Move at speed" doesn't sound very... flow-y. Might I suggest "move speedily"? Same amount of characters, and it flows better. Also, in Totire's second dex, you should remove the "s" on "shells". Other than that, the new dexes look pretty good!

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Shining ShinE

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Mar 25 10 11:24 AM

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I've changed it to "move fast" for simplicity's sake. The line has enough characters anyway. I've removed the 's' you mentioned. No clue how that 's' ended up there :P

KookyKoopa12

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Mar 25 10 11:33 AM

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OK, ShinE, I edited it to what you said, thanks so much for the feedback!

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Shining ShinE

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Mar 25 10 11:37 AM

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Approved as #DS041-2.

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Gelatop

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Mar 25 10 3:32 PM

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AWESOME!

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APPROVED SUGGESTIONS:

DS#153 - Lullabass (Community)

DS#191-192 - Runroader and Torroado (Community)

KookyKoopa12

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Mar 26 10 11:24 AM

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Yep. Now that Tortire and Motortoise are accepted can I make another suggestion?

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Miravistel

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Mar 26 10 12:55 PM

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As the rules say, once this topic is closed you can post a new suggestion.

Plokman

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Mar 26 10 1:50 PM

Yes another one in the list of ever growing PF Pokemon!

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