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KookyKoopa12

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Mar 15 10 11:33 AM

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Edit: Changed to ShinE's specifications, thanks!

TORTIRE (tortoise + tire)

Here's an image of the two Pokemon: http://img40.imagefra.me/...1eabe85kj6em_b076980.png

Pokedex Type: The Wheel Foot PKMN

Height: 2'7"

Weight: 72 lbs

Type: Ground

Pokedex Entry:

DIAMOND- Instead of back legs, it has a single wheel that allows it to move fast even on rugged terrain.

PEARL- To move at very high speeds, it will tuck its front legs into its shell and rev its wheel.

Evolves into Motortoise at Lv. 40

Ability: Sand Veil/Speed Boost

Found in: Majestic Mountains, outskirts of Cargan Desert

Moves:

LEVEL MOVES

Lv. --: Tackle

Lv. 7: Quick Attack

Lv. 13: Sand-Attack

Lv. 18: Sandstorm

Lv. 22: Agility

Lv. 28: Double-Edge

Lv. 34: Dig

Lv. 37: Rock Slide

Lv. 42: Earthquake

Lv. 45: Sandboard

Lv. 48: ExtremeSpeed

Lv. 52: Sand Jet

Lv. 55: Tremor

Lv. 58: Fissure

MOTORTOISE (motor + tortoise)

Pokedex Type: The Motor Shell PKMN

Height: 7'7"

Weight: 820 lbs

Type: Ground

Pokedex Entry

DIAMOND- It is big and strong enough to hold an adult human on its back. It is often used in Pokémon racing.

PEARL- It burns an enzyme in a specialized body chamber. The enzyme leaks a fluid that powers its wheel.

Evolves from Tortire at Lv. 40

Ability: Sand Veil/Speed Boost

Found in: Evolve Tortire

Moves:

LEVEL MOVES

Lv. --: Tackle

Lv. --: Quick Attack

Lv. 16: Sand-Attack

Lv. 20: Sandstorm

Lv. 25: Agility

Lv. 31: Double-Edge

Lv. 37: Dig

Lv. 41: Rock Slide

Lv. 45: Earthquake

Lv. 48: Sandboard

Lv. 53: ExtremeSpeed

Lv. 56: Sand Jet

Lv. 60: Tremor

Lv. 64: Fissure

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Last Edited By: KookyKoopa12 Mar 25 10 11:33 AM. Edited 4 times.

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DeckuZora

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Mar 15 10 12:10 PM

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Descriptions! Oh and the curse of a TM movepool list - er, can you put those into spoiler tags or something? The page is LONG! (Not that I should talk *looks at RPG topic*)

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Xer0

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Mar 15 10 12:16 PM

I like them, but Motortoise sounds . . . meh.

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ninjamatt2

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Mar 15 10 12:19 PM

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I agree about motortoise, how about just straight Motoise? A

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KookyKoopa12

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Mar 15 10 12:20 PM

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DeckuZora, I don't know how to do spoiler tags, and I'm not very good at descriptions... what do you think I need to go into detail a little more about? Oh, and motortoise was supposed to be a little pun. The "tor" is in both the words "motor" and "tortoise".

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DeckuZora

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Mar 15 10 12:22 PM

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Hm, I forget how to do spoiler tags - I've done em before but not in a while. Anyway, you need to provide a decent... Idea of what we're invisioning here. Like, start with the car for a body with a tortoise head? Or a tortoise body with wheels? I can't tell, so like, you have to describe it! ^^

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ninjamatt2

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Mar 15 10 12:25 PM

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Well deku, one thing i have noticed is the picture he links to gives a good feeling for how they will look

think you may have missed that.

And with Motortoise, I like how the tor is in both, and how they share it, but it just doesn't sound right when it is said. But its your choice at the end of the day.

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

Shining ShinE

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Mar 15 10 12:26 PM

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@DeckuZora: KookyKoopa has attached an image of his suggestion. Have you seen it? I'm asking, because it seems as if you have not.

KookyKoopa12

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Mar 15 10 12:26 PM

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Oh yeah... both Tortire and Motortoise are in the picture under Tortire's name. Sorry about that. @.@ If you want me to split the Tortire and Motortoise into two pictures I can do that.

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DeckuZora

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Mar 15 10 12:28 PM

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AUGH! I just saw it, SORRY!! I'm used to descriptions being with each pokemon. It's alright though, you don't gotta change since I'm the only weirdo who made the mistake.

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KookyKoopa12

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Mar 15 10 12:31 PM

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It's OK. And I kind of imagined Motortoise's name not to rhyme with tortoise, like "mo-tortoise", but more like rhyming with Blastoise, like "motor-toise". Does that make it easier?

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elementalpenguin

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Mar 15 10 1:47 PM

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Hmm, for the wheel on Tortire, perhaps the steel rod should not be included? I believe it might look better if it were directly connected to the body. The wheel, that is. The concept is fairly nice though.
In addition, I thought the new suggestion rules say that we should let the staff do TM/HM/MT moves?

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ninjamatt2

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Mar 15 10 1:51 PM

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Thats what I was thinking as well! It looks really unnatural. Maybe having the wheel like under the shell? Like a backwards three wheeler car, almost, where you can see the bottom half of it underneath.

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

elementalpenguin

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Mar 15 10 1:54 PM

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Exactly! That would look great, in my humble opinion.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

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Plokman

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Mar 15 10 2:00 PM

Cool idea. Though I agree with elementalpenguin Make it more like how a Wheelie in Kirby (Partner form that is) has its wheel. Other than that I really like it.

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Mar 15 10 4:30 PM

Yay the return of Tortire & Motortoise! I was wondering how to pronounce Motortoise... I got it right the first time, at least.

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KookyKoopa12

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Mar 15 10 4:40 PM

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So you think Tortire should look like this? I don't really know, I kinda like it.

http://img38.imagefra.me/...138wv6sr72rm_774ecfe.png

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elementalpenguin

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Mar 15 10 6:31 PM

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Yes, yes I do.

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Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
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Harden

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KookyKoopa12

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Mar 15 10 7:49 PM

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OK, I think I'm quite satisfied with my creations.

Anything else that needs to be changed?

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Last Edited By: KookyKoopa12 Mar 17 10 3:50 PM. Edited 1 times.

Plokman

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Mar 17 10 5:56 PM

Looking good. I can't see anything left to add.

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Pokemon I'm looking for and will trade for just make a offer

Eevee - Tell me what you want
Smeargle - Tell me what you want
Mewtwo - Tell me what you want
Chikorita - Tell me what you want
Porygon - Maybe getting one
Ditto - May be getting one

I'm also wanting to Barrow a set of Regis so I can get Regigigas I would trade these right back as soon as I caught Regigigas.

If your interested PM me.

Shining ShinE

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Mar 25 10 8:01 AM

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Comments!

- We like the names, and I personally love their classifications. Good job!
- We think level 46 is too high a level for these. We'd prefer to lower it to 40, to match the Ponyta line.
- Some slightly edited dex infos, since the pokémon's name is generally not included in DP-style dex info:

Tortire:
Instead of back legs, it has a single wheel that allows it to move fast even on rugged terrain. (96)
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To move at very high speeds, it will tuck its front legs into its shell and rev its wheel. (90)

Motortoise:
It is big and strong enough to hold an adult human on its back. It is often used in Pokémon racing. (99)
---
It burns an enzyme in a specialized body chamber. The enzyme leaks a fluid that powers its wheel. (97)

Last Edited By: Shining ShinE Mar 25 10 11:22 AM. Edited 1 times.

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