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FoxOfWar

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Mar 19 10 12:15 AM

Whips it is then. Maybe I will integrate the "one huge tail as a weapon" to another suggestion of mine.

EDIT: Collecting it all up, added height/weight roughly based on Pidgey line, gender differences and ratio, egg group & habitat; changed focus from special defense to special attack after seeing the numerous special moves in it's learned moves(and really, it makes more sense that way):
http://foxofwar.deviantart.com/art/Sonic-Birds-157651393
Gender ratio: 50/50
Gender differences: females have small crests running between their beak and back of the head.
Egg group: Aerial
Habitat: Mountainous areas, latter forms probably only on high mountain ranges/peaks. Another possibility is for only Sonchic being catchable of the line; rest you would have to evolve.

Sonchic
Normal/Flying
1'2" / 5.1 lbs

(Pearl) The thin mountain air it lives in also thins its blood, allowing it to react quickly to danger.
(Diamond) Though its wings are covered in down, they are durable enough to allow quick gliding bursts.
RIVALRY/KEEN EYE

Peck -
Growl -
Gust 4
Quick Attack 9
Screech 12
Wing Attack 17
Air Cutter 20
Whirlwind 25
Aerial Ace 28
Tailwind 33
Air Slash 36
Agility 41
Extremespeed 44
Roost 49
Razor Wind 52
Nose Dive 57

Base Total 250 (Pidgey has 251, Starly 245)
HP: 40 / Atk: 50 / Def: 30 / Sp Atk: 35 / Sp Def: 30 / Speed: 60

Evolves into Aureagle at level 24.

Aureagle
3'08" / 59.8 lbs
Normal/Flying
(Pearl) It nests in high mountain cliffs, where the thin air conditions its lungs for diving.
(Diamond) Its lungs are pressurized, allowing it to preform high speed dives from high altitudes.
RIVALRY/KEEN EYE

Peck -
Growl -
Gust -
Quick Attack -
Screech 12
Wing Attack 17
Air Cutter 21
Whirlwind 26
Aerial Ace 30
Tailwind 35
Air Slash 39
Agility 44
Extremespeed 48
Roost 53
Razor Wind 57
Nose Dive 62

Base Total 350 (Pidgeotto 350, Staravia 340)
HP: 50 / Atk: 70 / Def: 40 / Sp Atk: 50 / Sp Def: 50 / Speed: 85
Evolves into Zephyrach by level up /w Tailwind.

Zephyrach
5'02" / 85.07 lbs
Wind/Flying
(Pearl) Its four wings give it an edge in diving and speed flying. It can change direction mid-flight.
(Diamond) It flies at twice the speed of sound, more than enough to catch its chosen prey of ZUBAT.
RIVALRY/ANGER POINT

Tornado -
Peck -
Growl -
Gust -
Quick Attack -
Screech -
Wing Attack 17
Air Cutter 21
Whirlwind 27
Aerial Ace 32
Tailwind 38
Air Slash 43
Agility 49
Extremespeed 54
Roost 60
Razor Wind 65
Nose Dive 71

Base Total 470 (Pidgeot 469, Staraptor 475)
HP: 60 / Atk: 95 / Def: 50 / Sp Atk: 75 / Sp Def: 60 / Speed: 130

Any additions, or do we have a ready bunch o' birds in our hands?

Last Edited By: FoxOfWar Mar 21 10 4:56 AM. Edited 2 times.

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soble92

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Mar 21 10 5:29 AM

Bring on the staff to review!

*bumps*

Last Edited By: soble92 Mar 25 10 2:25 PM. Edited 1 times.

elementalpenguin

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Mar 25 10 3:58 PM

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Shining ShinE wrote:
I get that you are excited, but we'll look when it's this topic's turn; it's fair to review the suggestions in the order they are suggested to us, don't you think? Requesting us to come and look really won't make us review your pokémon faster.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Shining ShinE

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May 1 10 2:26 AM

PF Executive

Comments!

Before going into depth, I'd like to point out that we added a couple of Wind-type moves to the site, including a move called Jet Stream. Would that or other new Wind-type moves be fitting these?

Secondly, we should probably go with the alternative tail designs in your image. As the birds are right now, they just look like enlarged versions of a previous stage. One of our concept artists will probably remedy that by giving them some more features, but I wanted to point it out nonetheless, to hear if you guys are okay with that. Secondly, their color scheme is really inconsistent: we'd prefer to stick with one color for these, instead of three different colors. Which color (black, white or brown) do you guys prefer? I'm personally leaning to brown, but that's just a personal opinion.

There are some small errors in the info as well, but I'll cover those once these issues are solved.

soble92

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May 1 10 3:10 AM

I like the suggestions. The changes you'd want to make are perfectly fine by me.

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

KookyKoopa12

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May 1 10 5:17 AM

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I like white, it makes the birds look more "airy".

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Marbront
Basaltosor
Hawkyte

Castador (community)

APPROVED SUGGESTIONS:

Tortire

Motortoise

Nymphetal (community)

Rahjet

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May 1 10 11:22 AM

Although the type logo for Wind is brown.

Current Suggestions:

Spikrist-->Krestile-->Sovereign

Ungrie-->Starven-->Gluddin

Clawtch-->Graspisces-->Neptalon (Comm. Works)

PF RPG Team:

1.Virrgoose (Neo)

LV: 14 ♂

-Tacke

-Leer

-Quick Attack

-Charm

-Copycat

2.Kolibrisk (Icarus)

LV: 14 ♂

-Peck

-Thundershock

-Supersonic

-Quick Attack

-Charge

Avantidude

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May 1 10 11:26 AM

Technically its orange... but what the hey?

Shining ShinE

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May 2 10 2:40 AM

PF Executive

Heheh, you guys do need to decide on one color. Maybe someone could post a poll for this issue?

Avantidude

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May 2 10 2:43 AM

I'll do it!!

ShinEdit: Found here ^-^

Last Edited By: Shining ShinE May 2 10 2:48 AM. Edited 1 times.

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FoxOfWar

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May 2 10 4:49 AM

Voted white, because I am biased and think I managed to color Sonchic the best.

As posted earlier, I'm fine with whichever tail designs we end up with, the birds are cool anyway. (And I will use the "thick & bulky tail on a bird" on another idea of mine later on, I think.)

Could possibly incorporate some of the new moves in there, too.

When life gives you lemons, you steal the sugar and put it on salt shakers.

Right?

Squirrelay

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May 2 10 11:58 AM

Pokémon Factory Worker

You know these don't all have to be exactly the same colors, but they should have similar. Kind of like what they did with the Charmander-line: the colors stayed similar, but not necessarily the same.

AlexFantastico

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May 6 10 7:11 AM

I got really inspired by this idea, so I've done a sketch of my vision of Zephyrach. It's inspired by Hououmon, and The Helmaroc King. Google them if you don't know what they are. Also, I really think this line ought to be brown/orange in colour

Jigglyclops

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May 6 10 8:55 AM

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Yeah, the front part resembles Helmaroc King and its tail looks like Phoenixmon. (Aw... I love that and Marineangemon)

Flarsable

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May 6 10 3:45 PM

Especially the mask. That makes it veyr Helmaroc-King like. Does this thing have feet?

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AlexFantastico

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May 6 10 9:51 PM

Hehe, yeah, Digiomon makes so little sense, but some of their monster designs are so damn cool. And yeah Flars, I'm pretty sure it has a set of massive talons hiding under those wings. I might try drawing it from a different angle to show them, but.... It will probably end up looking like a completely different Pokemon, drawing things from different angles is not easy for me.

Shining ShinE

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May 20 10 1:45 AM

PF Executive

All right. The poll has probably been active long enough now, and the winner seems to be brown.

- They lack classifications. Shall we go with "Jetstream Pokémon" for all three of them?
- With that in mind, it might be wise to add the new Wind-type move Jetstream to their move lists. I'd like to suggest the following lists:
Sonchic:
-- Peck
-- Growl
04 Gust
09 Quick Attack
12 Circulate
17 Wing Attack
20 Air Cutter
25 Whirlwind
28 Aerial Ace
33 Tailwind
36 Air Slash
41 Agility
44 Nose Dive
49 Roost
52 Strafe Dive
57 Jet Stream

Aureagle:
-- Peck
-- Growl
-- Gust
-- Quick Attack
12 Circulate
17 Wing Attack
21 Air Cutter
26 Whirlwind
30 Aerial Ace
35 Tailwind
39 Air Slash
44 Agility
48 Nose Dive
53 Roost
57 Strafe Dive
62 Jet Stream

Zephyrach:
-- Tornado
-- Peck
-- Growl
-- Gust
-- Quick Attack
-- Circulate
17 Wing Attack
21 Air Cutter
27 Whirlwind
32 Aerial Ace
38 Tailwind
43 Air Slash
49 Agility
54 Nose Dive
60 Roost
65 Strafe Dive
71 Jet Stream

- I'd like to suggest a couple of minor edits to their dex info:
Sonchic:
The thin mountain air it lives in also thins its blood, allowing it to react quickly to danger. (95)
Though its wings are covered in down, they are durable enough to allow quick gliding bursts. (92)
Aureagle:
It nests on high mountain cliffs, where the thin air conditions its lungs for diving maneuvers. (95)
Its lungs are pressurized, allowing it to perform high speed dives from extremely high altitudes. (97)
Zephyrach:
Its four wings give it an edge in diving and speed flying. It can change direction mid-flight. (94)
It flies at twice the speed of sound, more than enough to catch its chosen prey of ZUBAT. (89)

soble92

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May 20 10 3:28 AM

I like them a lot!

MY CURRENT SUGGESTIONS:

Sonchic (Approved: DS#081)

Aureagle (Approved: DS#082)

Zephyrach (Approved: DS#083)

Ionew

Bulbug

FoxOfWar

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May 20 10 10:19 AM

Solid movelists and dexes, those. Also, "Jetstream" is as classy a classification as any

When life gives you lemons, you steal the sugar and put it on salt shakers.

Right?

Coolsteph

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May 20 10 10:42 AM

I suppose my Paint drawing (with wings that I would think are of improved design) of AlexFantastico's Helmaroc King-like sketch is unneeded? I could always save it for later art presentations.

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