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ZeldaFan

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Mar 17 10 7:55 AM

Let's see... 130 speed would put it at the same level as Jolteon, Aerodactyl, Mewtwo, and Crobat, tied for 6th on the base speed list. Not bad.

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soble92

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Mar 17 10 11:00 AM

6th? Which 5 other pokemon are faster than 130?

ZeldaFan

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Mar 17 10 11:11 AM

Let's see... Electrode has 140, Deoxys (Attack) and Deoxys (Normal) have 150, Ninjask has 160, and Deoxys (Speed) has 180.

Not bad at all.

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sovereignofsilence667

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Mar 17 10 11:59 AM

Playing with the big boys now, isn't it? XD I think I have some dex info up my sleeve:

Sonchic
(Pearl) The thin mountain air it lives in also thins its blood, allowing it to react quickly to danger.
(Diamond) Though its wings are covered in down, they are durable enough to allow quick gliding bursts.

Aureagle
(Pearl) It nests in high mountain cliffs, where the thin air conditions its lungs for diving.
(Diamond) Its lungs are pressurized, allowing it to preform high speed dives from high altitudes.

Zephyrach
(Pearl) Its four wings give it an edge in diving and speed flying. It can change direction mid-flight.
(Diamond) It flies at twice the speed of sound, more than enough to catch its chosen prey of ZUBAT.

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ZeldaFan

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Mar 17 10 12:18 PM

Nice! Looking good, now we just need descriptions/art and abilities. How about Keen Eye for Sonchic and Aureagle and Speed Boost for Zephyrach?

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FoxOfWar

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Mar 17 10 12:44 PM

Speed boost is insane overkill. I'd rather go with something else... Anger Point? I could see this hawk/huge bird of prey being pretty fast to anger. Or it being Reckless(doubles recoil moves' power). Or being rather Rivalrous.

Keen Eye/Guts or any of the above works for the first two forms, IMNSHO.

soble92

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Mar 17 10 12:58 PM

Alright. i think all we need now is physical descriptions (i.e. color, weight, height, etc.)

Sonchic:

Color- White

Weight- light

Height- small (like a chickadee)

Specifics- (help plz)

Aureagle:

Color- Brown

Weight- medium

Height- medium (standard eagle size)

Specifics- (help plz)

Zephyrach

Color- Orange

Weight- medium-large

Height- Large (as in can carry a trainer on its back)

Specifics- (help plz)

FoxOfWar

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Mar 17 10 1:08 PM

I'll draw 'em later today or tomorrow, I think. And I'll whip up some specifics. I'll use peregrine falcon as the basic form

Throw suggestions as for their looks and I might use them.

FoxOfWar

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Mar 18 10 7:51 AM

(pardon the double post)
*kracks knuckles*

Aaand here we got some birds for us: http://foxofwar.deviantart.com/art/Sonic-Birds-157651393

Threw in alternate tail options on soble92's suggestion. But the idea is this: instead of the traditional claw-and-beak approach, this speedy bird used it's phenomenable speed and the bulk of that BONY tail(or whip-like tail) to deliver hits? This would allow us to widen it's movepool from traditional "bird" movesets a bit, set it apart from them and well - if a bird size of a bear descends from the sky with speed of a peregrine falcon(I assume it would use the weight of the tail to put even MORE oomph into it's dives) and also HITS as hard as a bear with it's tail - if that is not scary, I don't know what is.

So anyway, what do you reckon?

soble92

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Mar 18 10 11:02 AM

The wings look a little bushy. But either than that... I think I might cry of epicness. I prefer the whipy tails.

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FoxOfWar

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Mar 18 10 11:11 AM

They look bushy because I got lazy-ass on the coloring job and seriously need practice on drawing feathered wings, heh.

sovereignofsilence667

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Mar 18 10 11:15 AM

Nice artwork! I prefer the whippy tails as well; more aesthetically pleasing.

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FoxOfWar

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Mar 18 10 11:25 AM

Maybe we could have the second form have two or three tails to further separate the forms, and have last form still keep that lovely I-will-break-your-bones-at-sonic-speeds tail?

soble92

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Mar 18 10 11:46 AM