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ninjamatt2

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Mar 15 10 11:07 AM

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Hey guys! It was a tough choice to choose only two of my evolution lines to resubmit for the time being, but I really did have to start with my first ever submission on this board. My ghost bugs! Here they are in all their glory - and of course, following the new rules.

Name: Shyge (Pronounced like shy)

Name Origin: Shy + Slug
Elements: Ghost/Bug
Type: Shy Slug
Height: 13"
Weight: 11.1 lbs
Ability: Swarm/Suction Cups
Description URL: http://i135.photobucket.c...njamatt2/GhostPoison.jpg
Dex:

New Version

Shyge live in swarms of hundreds in old abandoned houses and forests, and are naturally shy.

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They only ever remove their masks to attack, revealing rows of razor sharp teeth underneath

Move List:
Lv--Leech Life

Lv--Growl
Lv 5 Astonish

Lv 10 Haze
Lv 14 Shadow Sneak
Lv 18 Bug Bite
Lv 22 Bite
Lv 26 Curse
Lv 30 U - Turn
Lv 34 Toxic

Lv 38 Poison Jab
Lv 42 Crunch

Lv 46 Vital Sieve

Stats

Hp - 55

Attack - 60

Defence - 55

Special Attack - 30

Special Defence - 50

Speed - 30

Evolution: SNAUNT (LV 19)

Name: Snaunt (Pronouned like Haunt)

Name Origin: Snail + Haunt
Elements: Ghost/Bug
Type: Scary Snail
Height: 19"
Weight: 34 lbs
Ability: Shed Skin/Shell Armour
Description URL: http://i135.photobucket.c...njamatt2/GhostPoison.jpg
Dex:

New Version

Only able to move very slowly, it lies in wait and grabs prey with its long sticky tentacles

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If it attacks prey bigger than itself, it will pass through a nearby wall or tree for a quick escape.

Move List

Lv--Leech Life

Lv--Growl
Lv 5 Astonish

Lv 10 Haze
Lv 14 Shadow Sneak
Lv 18 Bug Bite

Lv 19 Acid Armour
Lv 23 Shadow Punch
Lv 28 Curse
Lv 33 Recover / Heal Order
Lv 38 Toxic

Lv 43 Poison Jab
Lv 48 Shadow Ball

Lv 53 Vital Sieve

Stats

Hp - 70

Attack - 75

Defence - 85

Special Attack - 40

Special Defence - 75

Speed - 35

Evolution: TERRORM (LV 32)

Name: TERRORM

Name Origin: Terror + Worm
Elements: Ghost/Bug
Type: Fear Worm
Height: 60"
Weight: 66 lbs
Ability: Intimidate
Description URL: http://i135.photobucket.c...njamatt2/GhostPoison.jpg
Dex:

New Version

Often living alone, these PKMN are intensely territorial and will fiercely claw any intruders.

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When one of these is nearby, a high pitched screeching can be heard, like nails on a chalkboard.

Move List

Lv--Leech Life

Lv--Growl
Lv 5 Astonish

Lv 10 Haze
Lv 14 Shadow Sneak
Lv 18 Bug Bite

Lv 19 Acid Armour
Lv 23 Shadow Punch
Lv 28 Curse
Lv 34 Crush Claw
Lv 40 Toxic

Lv 46 Poison Jab
Lv 52 Swords Dance

Lv 58 X-Scissor

Lv 64 Vital Sieve

Stats

Hp - 90

Attack - 115

Defence - 105

Special Attack - 50

Special Defence - 95

Speed - 65

Please Please PLEASE give some criticism, especially on the dexes. I want to know whether my old dexes are better than the new ones (why I kept them). I also want advice on the colour schemes - seriously here, I am colour blind, so if anyone could help with what would be more appropriate colouring for a ghost/bug pokemon then please help.

Also, you concept artists can have a bit of leeway with Terrorm, his design is a bit old. And again, really need help with the colours!

Anyway, glad to get these back on here!

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

Last Edited By: ninjamatt2 Mar 17 10 11:53 AM. Edited 5 times.

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Mar 15 10 12:26 PM

I think the color scheme is fine. Very evil-looking. I'm kind of confused about Terrorm. Is the front circle its mouth?

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Mar 15 10 12:51 PM

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Yeah, its supposed to be like a round mouth with spiky teeth. I might give the picture a bit of an update.

Also, any opinion on which of the dexes to use?

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

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Mar 15 10 12:53 PM

Which dex? You're supposed to use the DP style ones, the single lines.

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Mar 15 10 12:56 PM

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Yeah but they are still the right amount of letters

Just curious which has the best content.

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

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Mar 15 10 1:00 PM

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Although the have the right amount of characters, they do not form two seperate sentences. The DP-style dexes have the better content, I think. One of Terrorm's entries needs to be changed, though, since its entries are connected to each other, and we need to seperate entries.

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Mar 15 10 1:15 PM

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Ah ok, that's absolutely fine. Thanks for that. I'll change those right now

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Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

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Mar 15 10 1:59 PM

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Also, the type doesn't work for Terrorm. The max characters is 12. I like the concept art though, especially Snaunt.

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Mar 15 10 3:06 PM

I got to ask why no one ever uses Bug as a element? I admit that it might be that the most common bugs to use are already done. (Like Ants, spiders, scorps, bees, the works.)

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Mar 16 10 8:16 AM

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Probably for the same reason you gave. What about the colours? Are they ok for the time being?

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Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
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Mar 16 10 9:33 AM

I would give them a bit less contrasting-with-each-other colours, ie. probably make both the red and blue colors a fair bit darker - or lighter(though that would ruin this line's theme) - as it stands, the red and blue fight a lot at least in my eyes.

As for the idea itself, I'm not sure if I like it or am totally creeped out by it. Or maybe I just have an overactive imagination...

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Mar 16 10 12:32 PM

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Probably a good idea, I was younger when I first designed these, and still working with primary colours. Also, like I said, the colour blindness often results in me mixing colours that normal people wouldn't dream of mixing. Thanks for the advice though.

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

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Mar 16 10 2:39 PM

You're color blind?

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Mar 17 10 7:58 AM

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Yep. Can't tell my blue from my purple, ect.

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Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
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Mar 17 10 8:53 AM

In TERRORM's dex, you should (and can) expand PKMN to POKEMON; it looks nicer, and is more in line with the DPPt style. Also, everything after Bug Bite is different between Shyge and its evolutions. That said, these look pretty awesome!

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Mar 17 10 9:11 AM

Maybe they could learn Vital Sieve?

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Mar 17 10 11:52 AM

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Ooooh I like Vital Sieve. Didn't really look at the PF Moves when coming up with the lists, might do now.

And yes, the moves change a bit depending on the form, I know that isn't very common but each one is quite different, some moves just didn't make sense on another. I can change that if need be though.

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

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Mar 17 10 8:02 PM

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No, it makes sense in my opinion.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

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Mar 19 10 3:24 PM

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Comments!

We love these pokémon; we're glad you brought them back ^-^

- Are we right to assume that you meant the following HTs: 1'03'', 1'09'' and 6'00''?
- Are we right to assume that in Shyge's sketch, the small yellow line is its eye?
- You have given us a choice between two moves in Snaunt's move list. We'd like to go with Recover.
- We propose the following reworked dexes:

Shyge:
Shyge live in enormous swarms in old, abandoned houses and forests. They are naturally very shy.
They only ever remove their masks to attack, revealing rows of razor-sharp teeth underneath.

Snaunt:
It is only able to move slowly, so it lies in wait to grab prey with its long, sticky tentacles.
If it attacks prey bigger than itself, it will pass through a nearby wall or tree for a quick escape.

Terrorm:
Often living in solitude, they are intensely territorial and will fiercely claw any intruders.
When one of these is nearby, a high-pitched screeching can be heard, like nails on a chalkboard.

We're sure we can work with their colors, so don't worry about that ;)

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Mar 19 10 5:26 PM

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Cool, I'm perfectly happy with the new dexes, the heights ect are fine, and you are right to assume the yellow line is it's eye. I'm also perfectly happy with recover and you can do what ever you want with the colours

North Korea either have 6 or 12 nuclear warheads.
Any other number of warheads is inconceivable.
Kim Jong-il thinks of them like eggs.

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Mar 21 10 3:32 AM

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Shyge, Snaunt and Terrorm approved as #DS032-4!

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