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Flarsable

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Feb 23 10 3:54 PM

@elementalpenguin: I like them, but I think that evolving Typheog into Hurricroak would be a better fit as a guardian.

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elementalpenguin

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Feb 23 10 5:33 PM

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I meant Hurricroak - my bad. The guardians are the same as before. (Although I still like Castorm as Wind...) Anyways, in response to Sov - Yes, Hephaestus fits Fire much better than Prometheus, but he also fits Steel better than Fire. In regards to flying, this was a push shove one. The way I see it, Arachne fits the Bug position perfectly, which moves out Hermes. I think that the Pantheon must be included - all of it - and so I moved Hermes to flying. However, since our Bug guardian is not a spider, Hermes could viably be moved back, giving Ouranos the flying position, which might work better anyways. Perses works just as well for Antimatter - the only problem is that Perses is less well known than Perseus, who fits the bill not at all. In this light, I suggest Tartarus.

Now, my one other qualm was that Artemis really does not fit Crystal - an easy way to fix this, while satisfying your desire for Selene, is to make Selene Light once again, Move Apollo to Crystal, who in my opinion works even better as he has the aspect of light and medicine, which fits a bit better than silver. Also, he's gold, so he has that part as well. Finally, Artemis would be moved to Cosmic as deity of the moon. I know one of your qualms was that Selene had been absorbed later by Artemis as moon goddess, but I think in this case, it's a nice compromise. I'll check that the gender-personality aspect is still okay if we make these changes.

It all works, except - and this one is one of the ones that actually has to change if we do this - Vespiquen. Hermes is NOT a female name. SO, I suggest we change Vespiquen to Yanmega. Does this work? If all these changes seem good to everyone, I'll type up a full list with names for each of the guardians and their genders.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Last Edited By: elementalpenguin Feb 23 10 5:47 PM. Edited 3 times.

soble92

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Feb 23 10 5:57 PM

NO MORE GREEK!! I set the names and it is settled.

On to a new topic.

I am trying to figure out the locations of the orbs (7 per region). Mind helping me out? The guardian does not have to be within the region of its generation mind you.

Flarsable

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Feb 23 10 7:18 PM

So whose names are we using?

I have a list of possible locations for each types:
Fighting -
Flying -
Ground - Diglett Cave
Benthic - Route 214 South
Cosmic - Birth Island?
Ghost - Old Chateau or Mt. Pyre
Psychic -
Rock - Mt. Silver?
Heart -
Fire - Stark Mountain or Ardor Volcano
Dark - Cargan Temple (where the Gym would be)
Light -
Time -
Space -
Normal -
Crystal -
Steel -
Grass -
Sound -
Ice - Askorun Wastes
Dragon -
Poison -
Bug - Viridian Forest
Snow - Mt. Coronet
Water - Lake of Rage or Hoeen Ocean (the huge water area, but with an actual name)
Sand - Route 228 or Mauville Desert (the desert with Desert Ruins that I gave a name)
Virtual - Cyber Realm
Plasma -
Wood - Grandis Forest
Bone -
Electric - New Mauville
Wind - Sky Realm (possibly)
Magic -
Antimatter - Distortion World?
Life - Cave of Origin

It is very incomplete and I need help with it. I haven't even counted to see if there is seven of each yet, but that's because there are possibilities.

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elementalpenguin

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Feb 23 10 7:26 PM

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It might be nice to do it within the regions though... with that said...

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

sovereignofsilence667

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Feb 23 10 7:38 PM

Fire: Ardor Volcano
Dark: Cargan Desert
Water: Lake Valor
Grass: Flower Paradise
Wood: Viridian Forest
Benthic: Route 126
Ice: Sinto Temple
Snow: Lake Acuity
Ground: Seavault Canyon
Rock: Desert Ruins
Virtual: One Island
Light: Fullmoon Island
Magic: Newmoon Island
Sand: Route 111

I hope those are okay...

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elementalpenguin

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Feb 23 10 8:00 PM

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Kanto:
Fighting - Machamp - Ares - Rock Tunnel
Flying - Pidgeot - Ouranos - Viridian Forest
Ground - Dugtrio - Gaia - Diglett's Cave
Benthic - Omastar - Proteus - Seafoam Islands
Cosmic - Clefable - Artemis - Mt Moon
Ghost - Gengar - Thanatos - Pokemon Tower
Psychic - Alakazam - Athena - Cerulean Cave

Johto:
Rock - Tyranitar - Atlas - Mt. Silver
Heart - Blissey - Aphrodite - National Park
Fire - Typhlosion - Prometheus - Burnt Tower
Dark - Houndoom - Nyx - Dark Cave
Light - Lanturn - Selene - Whirl Islands
Time - Xatu - Cronos - Ruins of Alph
Space - Stantler - Circe - Ilex Forest
Hoenn:
Normal - Slaking - Hera - Mt. Pyre
Crystal - Sableye - Apollo - Mirage Island
Steel - Metagross - Hephaestus - Granite Cave
Grass - Sceptile - Persephone - Routes 120 -122The route that goes to Lilycove from Fortree - it has tall grass?
Sound - Exploud - Echo - Rusturf Tunnel
Ice - Walrein - Orithyia - Shoal Cave
Dragon - Salamence - Ladon - Meteor Falls

Sinnoh:
Poison - Skuntank - Dionysus - Fuego Ironworks
Bug - Yanmega - Hermes - Eterna Forest
Snow - Abomasnow - Chione - Route 217, the blizzard area with the icy rock.
Water - Empoleon - Poseidon - Lake Acuity
Electric - Electivire - Zeus - Mt. Coronet
Sand - Hippowdon - Psamathe - Route 228, the one going to Stark Mountain from Resort Area.
Virtual - Porygon-Z - Mnemosyne - Abandoned Galactic HQ

Bombur:
Wood - Skeletree - Demeter - Decorus Woods
Bone - Cudgeleton - Hades - Cargan Temple
Wind - Hurricroak - Aeolus - Lake in the Middle.
Plasma - Stelmos - Phlegethon - the mountains.
Magic - Astromur - Hecate - That valley place.

Antimatter - Gravitark - Tartarus/Pandora/Perse - Cargan Temple
Life - Pharaleoh - Hestia - Askorun Wastes

Needs some adjustment for sure, but there's mine, if you want to keep it all region specific, which would be nice. I know I have the Temple twice, help me out here... I don't know any Bombur locations... Phew... that was hard...

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Last Edited By: elementalpenguin Feb 23 10 8:03 PM. Edited 1 times.

Drufle

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Feb 23 10 8:08 PM

You can probably move one of the Bombur ones to Ferrarum Fortress. It seems like a good place.

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elementalpenguin

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Feb 23 10 8:12 PM

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I don't know what that is. XD Is there somewhere I could actually find the important places list? All our maps are not too far since they're for RPG purposes. I know of one map on Pokengine, but it's a bit of a hassle to check.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Drufle

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Feb 24 10 1:05 PM

The new map that was just recently released allows you to mouse over areas and get their names. For an idea of the area, you can go to the Placings List and see what kind of Pokemon live there. For example, Ferrarum Fortress is a dungeon/fort kind of place, with mainly Steel and Dark Pokemon. But it's still a cool place.

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Flarsable

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Feb 24 10 3:49 PM

I'm thinking you could move Hurricroak from The Lake in the Middle (which is known as Vintage Lake, FYI) to Feather Cliff, near Vantos Village where you get the Kite. Also, I believe That valley place is the Valley of Bombur, but the Magic Wands found there are now at vintage Lake. So, I think you should move Hecate to Vintage lake. Also, why Mt. Pyre for Slaking? Being the place where most Pokemon die, it would be better suited for the Ghost type.

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Drufle

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Feb 24 10 6:22 PM

Well, Ghost isn't in Hoenn, and I think we're done moving types. And Mt. Pyre would be a great place for a guardian, considering there are already two orbs up there.

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elementalpenguin

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Feb 24 10 7:52 PM

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Exactly. Also, Slaking is so... powerful. I think Mt. Pyre fits it. My. Pyre is like the endgame dungeon to me - the pinnale of the region. I think Slaking goes well there.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

sovereignofsilence667

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Feb 24 10 9:15 PM

Plus, if you think about it, isn't that supposed to be the resting place of Pokemon? Well, then, that makes sense to me to put Slaking there.

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And also, maybe, you could check out my newest project? Remember: Read and Review! Thank you!
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Flarsable

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Feb 25 10 3:30 PM

When they say resting, they mean where we put the graves and carcasses. The final resting place.

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soble92

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Feb 25 10 4:55 PM

I got my placings list thanks to you guys. However, this will be a surprise.

Now for the last part of your contribution: the ULTIMATE moves!!

These moves can only be accessed when an orb is recieved. They are more powerful than any official move. Shall we begin?

Drufle

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Feb 25 10 5:44 PM

I'll make a couple moves.

Grass: Arboreal Cannon
The ultimate of plant-like moves. Giant vines shoot up from the ground and hold the enemy in the air as thousands of long, bladed leaves are fired at the foe.

Electric: Charge Bolt
The ultimate of electrified moves. The user charges up an insane amount of energy then concentrates it into a single bolt that is fired into the clouds. Multiple lightning bolts then fire from the sky, electrifying the enemy.

Bone: Skeleton Rush
The ultimate of bone moves. An unearthly aura emanates from the user, and bones of Pokemon past rise from the ground and assemble into a giant monster that pummels the foe into submission.

Dark: Blackest Fear
The ultimate of dark moves. An unbelievable darkness falls upon the field, causing complete blindness in all but the user. The pitch black surroundings bring out the greatest fears of the enemy, causing them to faint from pure terror.

Light: Blessing of the Sun
The ultimate of light moves. The user takes on a shroud of pure light, making them as bright as the sun. This prevents the enemy from attacking, as the heat created by the shroud is too much to bear, and the pure light removes any type of evil from the enemy. (This of course excludes "bosses", such as guardians or, of course, Exodus)

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Flarsable

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Feb 25 10 6:13 PM

Poison: Hydrochloric Acid Ray
The ultimate of chemical/compound moves. A huge ray made of hydrochloric acid (one of the deadliest acids known to man) is shot out of ones hands or mouth. In a nutshell, it pretty much dissolves the opponent's HP into nothingness.

Heart: Heartwash
The ultimate move of love, it makes the foes so in love with the user, they become under his/her/its control. Shadow Pokemon's hearts are opened completely (or purified) upon end of effect.

Ice: Permafrost
The ultimate ice move, the opponent is encased in a block of ice that only the strongest of Fire moves (All Fire type moves with base power 120 or above without power-boosts) can melt. The foe's HP gets sapped from frostbite until it faints or the ice melts. If the ice melts, the foe's Speed is lowered harshly.

Fire: Magma Cannon

The ultimate fire move, the user summons a volcano form the ground that shoots a laser of pure magma at the foe. The move will instantly Burn the opponent on contact.

Wind: Air Wall
The ultimate gust of wind, a huge gust from behind that travels as fast as a bullet train and rips apart and/or blows away anything & everythingin its path, besides you and your allies.

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Drufle

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Feb 25 10 6:41 PM

More moves!

Magic: Houdinian Trick
The ultimate of magical moves. A large glass cage is conjured up and thrown on top of the enemy. A deck of cards, each the size of a door, is launched at the cage. They shred the cage apart, and the combination of shattered glass and razor-like cards cuts the foe in an incredible way.

Psychic: Psionic Blast
The ultimate of psychic moves. The user focuses all of their intellect, wisdom, and brainpower into a pulse of pure energy that overwhelms the enemy.

Fighting: Knockout Combo
The ultimate in fighting moves. A completely random, yet perfectly organized combination of punches, kicks, and other various martial arts are used to knock the enemy into unconsciousness.

Flying: Wing Blade
The ultimate of bird-known moves. If the user lacks wings, wings grow instantly from the arms. The user takes off into the sky, then divebombs towards the enemy at high speeds and rams directly into the foe, knocking the air right out of them.

Sound: Sonic Pulse
The ultimate of sound moves. The user shouts at an ear-splitting decibel level, blasting away the enemy and rendering them near-deaf.

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Flarsable

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Feb 25 10 7:24 PM

Yep!

Water: Flash Flood
The ultimate of water moves. Coulds are formed that start pouring rain that floods the area in about 2 minutes, drowning the foes into unconsciousness.

Ghost: Spirit Steal
The ultimate of ghost moves. The user sucks the soul out of the opponent using a weird vacuum shot form the mouth.

Steel: Metal Meteor
The ultimate in steel moves. A herd of meteors made 100% from 15-5PH metal that's been heated by contact with the atmosphere falls from the sky and crushes all foes.

Antimatter: Deathly Void
The ultimate of anti-matter moves. A huge void appears below all foes, and they are sucked in and ripped apart by the antimatter. They are only ripped to unconsciousness, the orbs are good & won't allow death.

Time: Before-Pound
The ultimate of time moves. The user hits the foe so hard, that instead of hitting them, the attack goes back in time and attacks them then.

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