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Gracidea700

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Apr 24 09 10:51 PM

Nice poem here's mine:

The yellow sun on a crayon.
Or is it the other way around?
No one would care anyway.
But if they did what would they say?
Its difficult to answer,I should know.
How you ask?
I can't seem to say...
this is pointless...have a good day.

BOO YA! I liked it what about you?

Thank you Deep for the great drawing!

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sovereignofsilence667

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Apr 24 09 10:58 PM

Very nice. How about this?

Nobody
By SovereignofSilence667

What does it mean?
What is a 'Nobody'?
What does it mean to be left at the edge of oblivion?
Forgotten by everyone
Including light and darkness themselves?
Are we really here?
Can someone who shouldn't exist
Be able to walk around
As alive as anyone else?
Are we really Nobodies?
Do we really not have a heart?
Just a body for moving
And a soul for living?
But no heart means no worries
No more fear of the darkness on the fringes
Where we find ourselves confronted with the truth
No, we make our home in the chasm between dreams and reality
A world that never was
Our world that never will be
And we pray to the glorious moon
'Where is my heart?' we cry
Only to receive no answer
The silence deafening
As boisterous as the choir of lost hearts she holds hostage
But we proceed
All is according to plan
We work towards our one true goal
The kingdom to where all hearts return
The light at the heart of all darkness
Maybe we don't exist…
But we can pretend to exist
We may even be able to fool ourselves
One big game of pretend
But when the game's over
We won't be there
Because a Nobody
Isn't really there at all…

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hazzamon

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Apr 24 09 11:04 PM

That was really good Sov *sheds a small tear* Ah geez I got something in my eye. ait, it's just a peice of glass *Pulls it out and flicks it away*

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Gracidea700

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Apr 24 09 11:07 PM

That was good...and how did that get in your eye Hazzamon?

Thank you Deep for the great drawing!

hazzamon

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Apr 24 09 11:15 PM

My good glass sword got broken by a stray Onix burrowing through my lair. I din't realise it got in my eye.

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sovereignofsilence667

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Apr 24 09 11:20 PM

I'm really not that good. I can't be, since I'm only 14. I'm not as good as some other people...

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Gracidea700

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Apr 24 09 11:22 PM

Anyone can be good no matter what age.

Thank you Deep for the great drawing!

hazzamon

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Apr 24 09 11:22 PM

Your 14? Wow only a year younger than me (i'm 15 and 2 and a half months) and you're that good.

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sovereignofsilence667

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Apr 24 09 11:23 PM

*BLUSH* I'm REALLY not that great... am I?

^ Please to be Clicking mah Babies! I'm trying to fill out the various Regional Dexes. YAY FOR HOURS AND HOURS OF LABOR!

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Gracidea700

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Apr 24 09 11:27 PM

You are great...NOW QUIT BEING MODEST! Oh no a heartless gesture... what's going on!?

Thank you Deep for the great drawing!

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hazzamon

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Apr 24 09 11:31 PM

with all the heartless stuff going on, i'm starting a topic bout it.

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Gracidea700

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Apr 24 09 11:32 PM

Oh yesh! Oh no it happened again!

Thank you Deep for the great drawing!

soble92

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Apr 25 09 2:06 AM

Life as a Lost Child
By: Soble92

Being blind, and yet able to see
Feeling numb, though able to touch
Able to talk, but not to speak
Loss of control over one's self
Instinct taking over the body
Emotions taking over the mind
The need for tension and attention
Misunderstanding simplicities
Guided by many, Helped by few

Would you help this child?
Then how come I never got help from you?
Because this child… is me.

sovereignofsilence667

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Apr 25 09 6:13 AM

How touching! Actually, it's really sad.

^ Please to be Clicking mah Babies! I'm trying to fill out the various Regional Dexes. YAY FOR HOURS AND HOURS OF LABOR!

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soble92

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Apr 25 09 7:12 AM

That is my life's begining for you. Thank my mom she saved me from an intrepid fate.

Gracidea700

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Apr 25 09 10:22 AM

Wow that was really good.

Thank you Deep for the great drawing!

Gracidea700

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Apr 26 09 8:52 PM

I'm Still Happy
By:Gracidea700

I stare into the sorrowful sky,but I'm still happy.
People are fighting,the innocent are dying,but I'm still happy.
Sorrow won't get into my mind,I'm still happy.
A smile is worth a thousand words,actions with one are worth a billion,I'm still happy.
To be living is a gift worth more than green a million,I'm still happy.
To share my life with others,I know they are happy,I'm still happy as well.
To see others smile,It makes all of us happy.
Sometimes we are sad for a while,but we're happy after.
To see one die it is sad,yes,but to know they will go to a better place,we are still happy.
I know I'll die one day so I cherish every second of my life,I'm still happy.
To know someone cares for me,I'm happy.
I believe the world will be normal again,by then,I'm still happy.
And I hope you are happy too!

~FIN~

Thank you Deep for the great drawing!

sovereignofsilence667

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Apr 27 09 7:16 PM

Footsteps echo along a broken path
The twilight road to nightfall
As we each carry onward
Blind and yet seeing at the same time
Blind to our sins
To the pain we cause
And yet seeing the trinkets dangled in our faces
A small prize to keep us meandering
Nothing of any consequence to the mastermind
Men in hooded robes with hidden faces
Whisper in our ear
You'll never win
Never escape
Let darkness take you, dear'
And some concede
And lose their heart
A slave to shadows deep
But some move on
With souls to dream
And hopes that let them sleep
Security through sleep?
Or memento mori?
Either way, we all walk the same road
Unless you see the crossroads, that is
Even then, which road do you choose?
The twilight road to nightfall?
The treacherous path of night?
Or the straight and narrow light?
Me, you ask?
I choose the way to dawn.

How was this?

^ Please to be Clicking mah Babies! I'm trying to fill out the various Regional Dexes. YAY FOR HOURS AND HOURS OF LABOR!

And also, maybe, you could check out my newest project? Remember: Read and Review! Thank you!
A Summoner's Sacrifice: A Final Fantasy X Prequel Fic

Gracidea700

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Apr 27 09 7:18 PM