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I was bored so I wrote a song. This thread is for randomness, right? So tell me whatcha think. Btw; I get dark occasionally since that's my personality, but I kept the place I'm posting this in mind, so it should be pretty upbeat if anything. ^^ Now if only I could learn to rap without cussing... Well I'll just go through this and edit =p Words that I chose to use a sound effect rather than the actual word: "A**" and "dead".

PF (something like a PF version of Pokerap. Sorry, I'm used to more explicit stuff but I thought I'd try something cheerful for once)
DeckuZora
Hip Hop or Rap

Let's say it once/ Say it again/ Mix it/ Draw it/ Sprite it friend
What am I sayin'/ Man/ Keep it real/ You don't know where PF's at? What the heck is the deal?
Creative/ Innovative/ Designed for some fun/ Just careful/ Don't talk about guns
Why? Cuz the atmosphere is meant for all/ If I do recall/ I'm on the ball
Don't stop me now/ I wanna shout until I'm out of words to say
Man/ I've said a lot today/ It's surprising really/ But I am that way
We have Sukus/ Noosance/ Palatin and Kapacorn
Burbit/ Mosstrous/ Vulcant/ Too much for scorin'
I mean sheesh/ Kapeesh/ They have one and a million
Well that's an exaggeration/ But it feels like I'm fillin'
You up with more than you can handle/ Yeah that rhymes with a Brandle
But maybe it's better if I start with something more man'ble
Where you actually understand what this is
And why Pokemon Factory is number one in the biz


This chorus is to fill up a gap in the song
It's not too short it's not too long
Sorry it's here/ Maybe you'll laugh
But then again/ It's wasted space/ Feel my wrath
Oh whoops/ Forgot where I was for moment
Maybe I'm subject to a bit of atonement

PF is a place for fans/ Of Nintendo's great series/ That kicks lotsa (yeah)
I mean/ C'mon everybody/ Wouldn't you rather see/ An pre-evo for Lapras/ Not another Eevee?
Listen well/ This place is where magic is made/ Whole worlds are made/ From mountains to caves
And new pokemon come by the dozens and dozens
Soon Nintendo will be stompin' on it's fakemon cousins
New moves/ New types/ New rules to learn/ New songs to write/ New ways to burn
That creative oil that's a light in the head/ Let's play some more music/ Stalker still wants me (ugh!)
Can someone just listen please/ What the heck is a Skeletree?
And since when was there a pokemon that had eyes like these?
We the fans/ Yeah that's where and since when
It's all in our heads/ And thats how it ends
I mean/ This is where we get to be free/ Get to show off our absurdity
And be free/ People don't think it is right/ When a fifteen-year old boy likes to say, "Let's catch Magnemite!"
But y'know/ Here you can say whatever you want/ About pokemon/ And not have to be distraught
And then there are those like me/ Who love it so much/ I say it anyway/ No matter the fuss
And we still come here/ Why? Cuz there's people like us/ Who like the same crap we do and like it so much
That they're willing to come/ Even when there's nothing to do/ Just to keep it alive
I do/ So do you


This chorus is to fill up a gap in the song
It's not too short it's not too long
Sorry it's here/ Maybe you'll laugh
But not nearly as hard as I did at Prob'pass
Nintendo's amazing/ But PF is better
And I'd rather come here/ No matter the weather
So this is the final part of the song
PF you rock/ Thanks for staying so long!

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Just a note; I did not proof this for flow like I usually do, so if there's an error, sorry, and if there's a part that sounds off, sorry again. I just typed whatever came to my head. ^^, I'd like to show you all what it's like if I do proof, but I'm not sure that's a great idea, ^^''''