Ok I'm kind of a newbie here so I'll do my best.
It was a bright and windy morning as Will was waking up,"Oh man I can't believe it!"he thought,'Today is the day where I get my first Pokemon!Dad will be so proud!"his mind was filled with many excited thoughts of how being a trainer will be and how he could finally be able to prove that he could get his family out of the crisis they were in.As he was getting out of his ragged bed,he looked to the side and saw his father and his brother standing next to his sister as she laid sick in bed,"Dad what's going on?"he said nervously"Will my son I have bad news...it seems your sister has caught a deadly virus and...well...I don't have the money to go to the hospital or get medicine.""I am very sorry to say this but...your sister,she has a chance of...well...dying"he said sorrowfully"W-w-what!?"Will shouted,"B-b-but shes so young...I-I can't leave for my Pokemon I need to take care of my sister...what will I do now?""Will!"his father said in a stern tone,"I want you to continue your journey as a trainer your brother and I will take care of your ill sister,now go to the Anchore gym.""Y-yes Dad I will!"as he was opening the door he heard a quiet voice,"I...believe...in you...Will."said his sister using all of her energy she had left to speak,"Thanks sis."he said quietly.He grabbed all his things and rushed out the door wiping his tears as he left his home to finally become a trainer and get his sister better.
Yay!I think I did really good even though it was long.
It was a bright and windy morning as Will was waking up,"Oh man I can't believe it!"he thought,'Today is the day where I get my first Pokemon!Dad will be so proud!"his mind was filled with many excited thoughts of how being a trainer will be and how he could finally be able to prove that he could get his family out of the crisis they were in.As he was getting out of his ragged bed,he looked to the side and saw his father and his brother standing next to his sister as she laid sick in bed,"Dad what's going on?"he said nervously"Will my son I have bad news...it seems your sister has caught a deadly virus and...well...I don't have the money to go to the hospital or get medicine.""I am very sorry to say this but...your sister,she has a chance of...well...dying"he said sorrowfully"W-w-what!?"Will shouted,"B-b-but shes so young...I-I can't leave for my Pokemon I need to take care of my sister...what will I do now?""Will!"his father said in a stern tone,"I want you to continue your journey as a trainer your brother and I will take care of your ill sister,now go to the Anchore gym.""Y-yes Dad I will!"as he was opening the door he heard a quiet voice,"I...believe...in you...Will."said his sister using all of her energy she had left to speak,"Thanks sis."he said quietly.He grabbed all his things and rushed out the door wiping his tears as he left his home to finally become a trainer and get his sister better.
Yay!I think I did really good even though it was long.
