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DeckuZora

Hey again! Just wanted some opinions!

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Aug 17 08 4:48 AM

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Hey y'all. It's been 2 months since I last commented... Er sorry? lol. Highschool's been a bit rough but okay. Anyway. I have a drawing for all of you today. Something I hand-drew, not sprited. Just wondering how it looked. BTW: This is already on my YouTube page and will be on my forum soon. Please dont try to pirate my work. Anyway, here it is in all it's... erm... badly penciled glory~~!:

Oh and, I'm turning 15 next Friday! (the 29th) ^^;! Im kinda hyper about the thought! And the picture is copyrighted under a creativecommons license...

Ure-yo and Sora Picture 1 by DeckuZora Online is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

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Last Edited By: DeckuZora Aug 23 08 2:11 PM. Edited 1 time.

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Aug 23 08 2:13 PM

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lol, I love being ignored. You all make me feel so special. That was sarcasm but no, I wasnt serious. Please comment though. I want to make sure I'm not slipping in my drawing ability... Especially since I have like... No time to sketch these days.

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soble92

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Aug 23 08 5:02 PM

its really nice.

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Aug 23 08 11:43 PM

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Thanks Soble. Even an in-descriptive comment is much appreciated. ^^ I haven't been able to draw at all lately so I just kinda sketched that out one night to make sure I haven't fallen.

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soble92

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Aug 24 08 2:01 AM

Im not that much of an art critic. Thanks for the thanks.

Shining ShinE

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Aug 24 08 3:50 AM

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I think it looks great ^-^ I love the expression on both faces, and the emblem on the male's shoulder is really awesome. I I'd have to pick a point of criticism, maybe they're too skinny (the male's middle and fingers, for example), but maybe the skinnyness is part of the style they're drawn in. In any case, I like the sketch very much ^^

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Aug 24 08 10:02 AM

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I'm not much of an artists(unlike my sister) but I think it looks good.

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Here's how the Slakoth line really goes through evolution:

Slakoth drinks a Red Bull, causing it to get hyper and evolve into Vigoroth.
The caffeine rush ends, causing Vigoroth to evolve into Slaking.

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MisterSmeargle

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Aug 24 08 11:30 AM

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As ShinE said, the expressions are good but I think the lower figure's neck is a bit too long, even with the hair concealing it.

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Aug 24 08 11:58 AM

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The skinniness and long limbs are part of the style, if might be a little too much though. I also looked at the proportioning, you're right MisterSmeargle, the girl's neck's too long... That or her shoulders are too low. I'll correct that if I ever find time between my internet and homework. This is great, thanks for the criticism ShinE and MisterSmeargle. (oh BTW: the reason I sprite when I suggest, rather than draw, is that I'm miserable at drawing monsters. Sometimes I come up with something really good, but for the most part, humans and backgrounds are my thing.)

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Aug 25 08 3:01 PM

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You draw much better than I do. That makes me happy.

EDIT: Now I realize why Sov thought I was a girl. All of my stuff makes me look happy. Well, when I draw something scary, I'm going to make it into my sig.

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Aug 25 08 3:06 PM

Gelatop wrote:
You draw much better than I do. That makes me happy.

EDIT: Now I realize why Sov thought I was a girl. All of my stuff makes me look happy. Well, when I draw something scary, I'm going to make it into my sig.

I don't draw well either

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Aug 25 08 6:22 PM

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You are right, someone thjeat said that the girl's neck was too long. She looks like a a giraffe-girl (the giraffe equivalent of a cat-girl)

I tame the burninators.

Here's how the Slakoth line really goes through evolution:

Slakoth drinks a Red Bull, causing it to get hyper and evolve into Vigoroth.
The caffeine rush ends, causing Vigoroth to evolve into Slaking.

DeckuZora

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Aug 26 08 9:45 PM

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giraffe girl? Wow, harsh man. Harsh. =( just kidding.

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