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Nov 3 07 2:28 AM

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as max was walking down the street he was thinking pokemon he was going to get as he opened the door profreer aroarn said choose a pokeball max happley took the one on the left . (please be a fire pokemon)

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Nov 3 07 2:07 PM

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Max opened the pokball to see what was inside. Light poured out and collected on the floor, shrinking and condensing to form something small. To Max's disappointment, four bright green leaves unfolded from the fading light. Aw, man, a Grass-type? But then, the light faded completely to reveal a bright red ball in the center, with a rather peeved-looking face. Max recognized it as the Grass/Fire-type Brantus. "Brant!" it chirped in annoyance as it looked about to see what was going on now.

smart boy max

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Nov 3 07 5:55 PM

as max kneeled down to see bratus even it was part leaf
max asked profeer asking how did you get this pokemon the prof araon just nodded.

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Nov 4 07 3:16 AM

just then max asked can I know more brantus.

Miravistel

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Nov 6 07 7:28 PM

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(OOC: I would apprectiate it if you started using punctuation and capitalization to divide your posts into clear sentances. Your posts are a bit hard to read as they are.)

Aaron nodded. "Return Brantus to its pokeball and place the ball on that machine," he instructed, pointing to a machine in the corner which had a screen and a slot for a pokeball.

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smart boy max

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Nov 13 07 12:50 AM

max then retrened brantus and gave it to prof Aaron.

Miravistel

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Nov 13 07 10:19 PM

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Aaron placed the pokeball on the machine, and in a moment some information appeared on the screen:

BRANTUS[/u]
Lv. 5
Female
Grs/Fir

Sharpthorns Nrm
An attack with thorns

"Now then, pick up your pokeball and follow me, there's something else we have to do." Aaron led Max to a room at the back of the lab, which had an open room and a grass floor with the lines for a pokemon battlefield marked with rows of white flowers.

"It's time for your first gym battle!" Aaron announced, as he took his position at one side of the battlefield.

Gym Leader AARON Wants to Fight!

smart boy max

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Nov 14 07 1:11 AM

I appectet to fight you go brathorn. {occo: man i have be waiting for this}

Miravistel

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Nov 17 07 8:01 AM

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((OOC: Please double check your posts for errors before posting them. It took me a while to figure out what you said because "appectet" is not a word, though judging by context you probably meant 'accept.' Not to mention you have a Brantus, not its evolved form, Branthorn. And your use of punctuation and capitalization still needs work.))

Aaron tossed a pokeball onto the field and said, "Let's go, Nevermore." The pokeball burst open to reveal a small, dark-colored bird with a long beak.

"Growl," Aaron instructed, and Nevermore obediently directed a fierce growl at Brantus.

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