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MisterSmeargle

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Two more...

Not to brag, but these are some of my finest work.
And i made that stupid mistake again, Diglett and Dugtrio are both on my cousin's computer and i won't be going over in the foreseeable future.

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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...whoah... It's almost like the originals....

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That's flattering, I actually had to scratch-sprite Wailord's tail...

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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Any feedback from the Staff would be nice...

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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Maybe you can curve the eyes on Gulpin just a tiny bit and remove some pixels from the mouth, it looks a bit big.

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THANK YOU, pokeaddict, at least ONE OF THE STAFF could give me some feedback without waiting until I'd done seven more sprites wrong and then reapplied.

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

MisterSmeargle

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Here is my redone Gulpin:

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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Yeah, well, some of us have more things to do in life. I don't have time to comment on each sprite you put up here, you know.

As for more feedback: the outlines still seem somewhat jagged. See if you can work on that a bit more.

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THANK YOU, pokeaddict, at least ONE OF THE STAFF could give me some feedback without waiting until I'd done seven more sprites wrong and then reapplied.

Because of those capitalized words, I interpret that as either:
1. You're REALLY thanking me...
2. You're trying to insult the other staff...(which is a reaaally bad idea)
3. You're being sarcastic...
4. You're possessed...(:P)

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Well actually I was REALLY thanking you and dropping a hint at the same time...

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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A hint the size of a truck. Even if you get good enough to be staff, that doesn't mean we have to accept you if you insult us

Yeah, try to avoid 1) lots of black pixels and 2) straight lines, both of which you have in Gulpin's eyes.

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Aye aye.

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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Though you're definitely improving, I'll give you that.

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I know I haven't posted anything recently but I'd just like to say:
1. No, I haven't givn up on becoming staff.
and 2. The reason I haven't updated is because until I get those Diglett and Dugtrio sprites, I'll have severe artist's block, even my hand-drawns aren't as good as normal.

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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Do you know your cousin's E-mail address? Ask him to send you the sprites.

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As i type this i'm at my cousin's house, on his laptop, sitting beside the computer where my beloved sprites are imprisoned due to a problem with the computer connecting to the net.

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

MisterSmeargle

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I have a query that I'm sure the resident spriters should be able to help me with.
One of my sprites is a beam of light and I'm unsure how to shade and highlight it.

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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I'm not a spriter, but here's my suggestion:
sprite the outline of the pokemon in black against a ball of light, so that it looks like it's emitting the light.

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MisterSmeargle

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I know what it looks like, I'm trying to figure out how to SHADE it.

I still say a church steeple with a lightning rod on top shows a lack of confidence. ~Doug McLeod
Flee you fools, Palkia awakens!

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Mr. Smeargle, you're a good spriter, but not quite good enough to be the Pf spriter. You are getting better, though. What I want to see is a freestyle sprite that looks more like pokemon and less like a cowboy being abducted by aliens, no offense.

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